Rimar FF: when you say nothing at all part4-pg9 - Page 8

Hey this one is an awsum update...expected from u tho...I am thoroughly enjoying reading this one and yes it is clearly obvious how much effort u r putting in to giv solidity to these most ignored but actually so adorable characters of the show 😊

Just caught up with ur FF.. had read the first part before but forgot to comment we guess ..err leave it coming to the FF man, we are hardcore RiMar fans !!..sadly there isn't lot of work on them here and the show uses them merely as a joke ...
Cuming to the FF loved it!!...the characters are so developed and believale..Rinni is made smart, hardwrking gal here vch we love!..n this new found confidence in amar is quiet new and nice to read..overall m loving this FF...update this FF ASAP! :D..
N plz PM me when you do...:)

P.S : we love Vicky in your FF...protective and so caring
<3 :)


Shreya and Kanishtha

Originally posted by: basket_101

Reserved =D

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Hey =D

So usually I don't reserve posts... But I wanted to be the first one to comment...

And I got a chance this time =D So yea =P

Anyway, I had already read the part yesterday.. but just couldn't get around to commenting..

So here it goes..

I don't want to over-exaggerate, but I really loved the part! I'm not just saying it for the sake of it..

I really do mean it!

I love the way you have written their thoughts out! It's so beautifully written!

Especially Rinni! I could almost, if not completely, relate to her thoughts..

It was so like her to worry about embarrassing herself in front of Amar <3

That was very nicely shown

I like how she doubts her capabilities, and is such a hard-worker!

You really have given her character a depth that we never got to see in D3

And about Amar... I loved the part where he felt satisfied that Rinni was behaving unreservedly with him like she did with the Dazzlers.. That was so cute to read! I had like this huge smile on my face when I read that <3 <3

Then the part where ViHa did the Bollywood piece.. I was actually like, "WTH" 😆

I honestly never thought Amar would've planned that!

And can't believe Vicky, Swayam, and I'm assuming Neha too?, know about him liking Rinni <3 <3

But what I couldn't help read over a million times was the bit where Vicky told Amar to never hurt Rinni... ever! That was soo beautiful!

I really love how you are giving characters' the depth that they should have!

You've done an awesome job! =D

No wonder I can never be upset with you even if you update a long time after..

Your parts make me forget everything <3

Awesomee job =D <3 <3

I'm so eager to read more =D

Btw.. I hope you are feeling better now (:

Take care of yourself, and your back!

=)

<3

Love, Hinal 😊

Originally posted by: Srishti_SwaRon

Res..

P.S in a hurry. Will edit soon. :)

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Finally an update on this one. And an awesome one that too. Poor Rinni, she's way too apprehensive. She shouldn't try to hide who she is. There's nothing wrong about being Rinni and she ought to realise that. RiMar really are sweet you know. Even day before yesterday's scene that they had, aww.

Just like Sharon to scream her lungs out at every little thing that comes in the way of perfection. 😆 Swayam, Vicky and Rinni are, umm let's say, adapted to this wonder what ghastly expression had formed on the faces of Amar and Neha (😆). Trust Swayam to come out with a solution to every problem, specially if there's the slightest involvement of Sharon in it. Okay, now I'm talking about SwaRon in a RiMar FF.

So, back to RiMar. Well, Rinni definitely is lucky, if she is as bad at Bollywood as she puts it. And like I said, way too apprehensive, practicing the entire choreography at night just because she thinks Amar will hate it.

And I loved that boys conversation. It's nice to see Vicky being so protective of his friends for change. I like this Vicky. :)

Thank you for the PM and update soon.

P.S YW ;)

G

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

It was a really long update and i totally lovedd it!! ❤️
I always love the flow in your writing! you have penned the whole update flawlessly! 👏
Firstly i can see the old diva here..which is superb! 😎
then coming to Rinni!!
She's so fragile here..so so innocent..scared to prove herself wrong infront of everybody..i adore her! 😳
the way she was mumbling the stuff ti herself and still practicing shows she is so pure! 😊
loved your portrayal of her character!
then Amar...mahnn he is shining here! teaching bollywood steps and all..really cool! 😃
And i really liked that old majnu here...following diva and helping her out! ☺️
But my favourite was when vicky said to take care of rinnii!! ⭐️ awww...that is soo sweett!! 😃
I loved the gesture!!
I really loved the whole update! 👍🏼
And ViHa are lovestrucks!! funny!! 😆

Update soon!! 😊

Originally posted by: beeny

update soon plz

Originally posted by: meevee

Hey this one is an awsum update...expected from u tho...I am thoroughly enjoying reading this one and yes it is clearly obvious how much effort u r putting in to giv solidity to these most ignored but actually so adorable characters of the show 😊

Originally posted by: muzzy_sk

Just caught up with ur FF.. had read the first part before but forgot to comment we guess ..err leave it coming to the FF man, we are hardcore RiMar fans !!..sadly there isn't lot of work on them here and the show uses them merely as a joke ...
Cuming to the FF loved it!!...the characters are so developed and believale..Rinni is made smart, hardwrking gal here vch we love!..n this new found confidence in amar is quiet new and nice to read..overall m loving this FF...update this FF ASAP! :D..
N plz PM me when you do...:)

P.S : we love Vicky in your FF...protective and so caring
<3 :)


Shreya and Kanishtha