My OS: 'Main Aur Tum.. Hamesha' [Updated-Part 6] - Page 19

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Posted: 12 years ago

wooww...

simply amazing n awsum story..

cont. soon..

n do pm me when u update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome... Awesome... Amazing... I loved it continue soon..
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Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

wooww...

simply amazing n awsum story..

cont. soon..

n do pm me when u update...


Thank you very much.. yaa you are in my buddy list so I will surely PM you...

Originally posted by: Xaffi

Awesome... Awesome... Amazing... I loved it continue soon..


Thank you very much.. yeaa surely will


Yes... I'm going to update this tomorrow... pakka...
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Posted: 12 years ago
I would like to thank all of you for taking out so much time to read and comment on the previous thread... I did say that would be all but I was overwhelmed with the comments thus I decided to continue the story... I hope you all would enjoy and embrace it as you did with the previous thread...

If any of you would like to have PMs for updates, please do send me a buddy request. I wouldn't be sending PMs to those who doesn't send me a buddy request as it is really time consuming... So please do me a small favour by adding me on your buddy list.

Coming back to this new thread... For a start I would like to give you guys a very short episode... Just want to introduce some new people in it before I start with the detailing...

Presenting to you...
"I Promise... Tum Aur Main... Hamesha... Always..."

Credits to: princessunara

WARNING!!!!!Before you all start reading the OS... do me two favours please...

1. Plug in your speakers and increase the volume...

2. Scroll the entire OS... wherever you see the song bar...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PAUSE THE SONG... You should hear it as you read that specify part... Its going to be slighty messy... I agree but thats the best i could come up with...

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Khushi felt as if Arnav was calling her... and Arnav felt as if Khushi is in immerse pain and is weiling for him...Khushi tried to get on her feet but the pain was unbearable...Aakash lifted her in his arms but Khushi hadn't stop calling out for Arnav... everyone rushed towards the car and decided to take her to the hospital...But Khushi could feel that Arnav is calling her... her heart is beating extremely fast... She insisted to be take to Raizada Mansion... Payal tried to explain to her but she was adamant... She almost open the door to jump out but Aakash told her he will bring her to RM first...

Mami is trying to call Khushi but her phone is switched off, she then tried Anjali, Payal, Aakash and even Shaleen's number but in vain... none of them were available... NK had gone to visit a friend so even he wasn't around... Mami kept trying until she heard...(Scene shifted)

As soon as they reached, Khushi quickly jump out of the car... nothing seems to matter for her... She just wanted to see her love...be by his side... Khushi's feet was bleeding and sore badly but it didnt matter to her... she didn't wanted to repeat the mistake she did last year.. leaving him alone...She called out loudly as she kept running towards their room... Arnavji...

Mami was trying to call them but stopped as soon as she heard Khushi calling out for him. Both she and Nani looked at the door and saw a completely messed up Khushi... They saw the print of her feet with her own blood as if a new bride walking in the house as part of the ritual...

Nani's heart skipped a beat seeing her beloved DIL in such condition... Payal and Aakash ran behind Khushi along with the kids whereby Shaleen was helping Anjali to reach the room as soon as she could...

Khushi quickly sat by Arnav whose eyes were wide open... Nani witness the changes in Arnav's eyes... he was much relaxed after knowing Khushi was next to him... it felt like the eternity was now with him... Mami was so worried thus questioned Payal of their whereabouts as she tried calling them so many times but in vain... and what happened to Khushi... why is her feet bleeding...

Aakash made his mom sit on the recliner and explained to her how they went to dargah to pray but saw Khushi there walking on burning coal.. They told how Khushi had fainted and suddenly it started to rain heavily and the drop of rain brought Khushi to conscious state.. They were going to take her to the hospital when she insisted coming back home as Arnav was calling her. We couldn't calm her down so thought its best to bring her home and let her feel relax before taking her to the hospital

Nani and Mami looked at each other when Aakash told them that Khushi felt as if Arnav was calling her... Payal saw the surprised expression on their faces and questioned the reason behind it... Manorama while sobbing told them how Nani was reading Hanuman Chalisa suddenly heard Arnav calling out for Khushi... She herself witness Arnav putting his hand up as if trying to reach out to Khushi...

Kya!!!! Chotte ne khushiji ko awaz di mami?? unhone haath uthaya?? Anjali couldn't believe whatever she just heard... tears of joy started to fall as if waterfall...Shaleen, Payal and Aakash were equally shocked...They just kept staring at one another...They couldn't believe that Khushi was actually saying the truth.. Arnav did call out for her... how did she know..? What kind of love is this...?They all shared moments of joy... Arnav showed improvement and Khushi went to dargah... her faith in Almighty is back...

"Humne kaha tha naa jiji.. Arnavji ne humein aawaz di hai.. unhone humein pukara hai... (I told you naa sister, Arnavji was calling out for me)

Payal went to Khushi and hugged her... she knew her sister was going through a rough phase in life but deep down knew Khushi is strong and she will sail through it soon...Shaleen had called the doctor.

Dr. Vibz came immediately after the call. Payal made Khushi lie down on her side of the bed while Dr. Vibz checked her wounds. He was surprised to see Khushi's feet yet no line of pain on her face... She surely is a brave woman... Dr. thought...

After cleaning and bandaging her wounds, Khushi was given a pain killer jab that would reduce her pain and help her sleep. She was also given antiseptic jab so it doesn't get septic. In no time Khushi had slept next to Arnav and Arnav felt as his heart was stabbed... Khushi's feet were injured because she walked on the burning coal for him.. and he is so helpless.. he cant even kiss the pain away... but he was little content as his heaven was peacefully sleeping next to him... Anjali walked over to Khushi and kissed her forehead. She placed her right hand on Arnav's chest.. as it is Khushi's habit now.

Anjali went towards Arnav now and kissed his forehead. She whispered in his ears that she would like to see him walking around soon... and she has faith everything will be fine soon. Arnav tried to smile indicating he believes the same but he couldnt... only his tears rolled... Anjali wiped it off and told him to sleep... Both Sanju and Aayal side hug their mamu... they were too young to understand the ongoing situation but they missed their jovial mamu...

Everyone went out the room leaving Mr. & Mrs. Raizada sleeping peacefully... The moon dimmed it shine too wanting them to sleep without any disturbance...


The first rays of the sun barge into Arnav and Khushi's room signifying presence of a brand new morning... The tniny dewdrops on flowers that bloom was as if a new hope was to be reality soon... The savor in the freshness of the morning, the sounds of little birds chirping...the rising brightness was about to change everything today... Khushi got up with her eyes still shut... She turned towards Arnav slightly... then gently opened the lid of her eyes... She saw him sleeping peacefully with a little smile playing on his lips. She was thankful that she saw his smiling face in the morning... the day will now pass easily... She slowly removed her hands from his chest slowly.. not wanting to wake him up... she slowly turned to get off the bed when she suddenly felt a pull...!!!

She landed straight on Arnav's chest!!!... Arrrnnnaaavvvjiii!!!!

Kya jaa rahi ho Khushi... woh bhi chori chori... (Where are you going khushi.. that too quietly...).. ASR questioned with a naughty look...

Hum.. choo...rrriii!!! Nahi toh... Hum toh nahne jaa rahe hai...(Me?? quietly?? Noo.. I'm going to shower)... Khushi tried not to stammer and held on the silk red bedspread that she had wrapped herself in...

Arnav as if so innocent... asked... Khushi... yeh bedspread kyu lapeta huva hai.. isko yehi choro aur jau nahne... (Why are you re wrapped in the bedspread? Leave it here and go and shower...) He didn't fail to smirk at her...

Nahi!!!!! immediately Khushi jerked up from the bed standing straight.. he tiny body wrapped around showing of her beautiful curves... Arnav got up and started walking towards Khushi...

Khushi was stunned seeing him stepping forward... She wanted to step behind but she had promise him during their Suhaagraat... she wished the earth will break into two and she will drown in it... but by then Arnav's hand was already around her waist... she was pulled closer to him... his eyes full of desire...she started breathing heavily... but her eyes were staring the sizzling lips... the gap was reducing bit by bit...automatically Khushi tilted her neck setting the position..

Khushi shut her eyes tight.. trying to hide the excitement running through her veins...

"Firse Laal Hogayi (Its red again)"... Arnav kissed her nose and took a step back with him arms folded...

Khushi opened her eyes in shock... she thought he was about to kiss her... she blushed like tomato... It didn't go unnoticed by Arnav... he just stood there smiling at his wife who thought he was about to paste his lips on her...

Khushi held on to the silk material tighter and turned.. started walking towards the bathroom... Before she entered... she turned around giving a hot look at Arnav... she did felt embrace earlier... but now it was her turn... she wanted to make Arnav's heart race... She paused at the door...

Arnav was confused at the look on Khushi's face... she never looked so bold and sensual... what was going on in her mind... Arnav questioned himself...Arnav saw her body language was totally different... Suddenly his eyes popped out... his arms were separated due to the shock he just got...


Khushi had let go the red silk bedspread... she was there standing like a goddess of sensuality... Arnav couldn't believe what he just saw... He was too shocked... Khushi managed to make his heart beat race... she turned and started walking in the bathroom sensually... Her fingers were trailing the wall... grabbing's Arnav attention... he was losing control... she was too tempting...

She kept glancing behind to challenge his control more and more... Arnav was now totally overpowered by Khushi's sexiness.. He just wanted her... He tried to close the gap between them by walking fast... Khushi's criss cross walking was infact turning him on more and more... She was now standing in the shower cubical under the running water... Arnav comes in and hugs her from behind... Khushi gasps in excitement...as his touch sends through a chill in her body...

Arnav gently but sensually turns Khushi facing him... They are being showered by the running cold water... their lips touched... tongue collides...Arnav's hand is exploring Khushi's bare back... while Khushi is trailing Arnav's chest with a finger... she plants tiny kisses on his chest and he grabs her hard... he bents down on his knee... and plants a kiss on her navel...

Arnavji!!!!!!! Khushi opens her eyes and realizes she is all alone in the bathroom... Her clothes are fully wet as she was standing below the shower... Khushi was actually dreaming... Tears just rolled down her eyes but unseen due to the shower... She missed all her moments with Arnav... She recalled yesterday's incident... Silently she remembered that one person she has lost in touch since a year... Devi Maiya!!!! If she had snatched everything from her... Khushi wanted to believe she will return back double...

Khushi dried herself and went out of her room to get ready... She is going through her clothes when suddenly her gaze falls on a white saree... She looked at it and then looked at Arnav...

*Flashback*
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3CFKkO2InyY&feature=channel&list=UL[/YOUTUBE]

This short OS I would like to dedicate to We ICGian's cute Jeeju... @ Vibbbz

Precap: Arnav restless as if knowing Khushi is in a huge trouble... he could feel her in trouble... he felt helpless hearing her calling him out... he tried to get up but her couldn't... Khushi is in a dark room... her hands tied and her eyes covered... her mouth was stuffed...


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Edited by hetalmkn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
UNRES 😃😃

Someone has planned to kill me with this update 🤢
awesomest update !!😊
Too romantic !!!❤️
It was a dream ...awww
And Loving the song at the bg 😳😳
Precap is sooo scary sweetheart !!


Update soon ..waiting more and more !! 😳
love u for dedicating to your jeeju and love u if not dedicated also 😆😆😊😊
👍🏼
Edited by shona3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow dalg ur update is really cute🤗😊😊
oh god too romantic loved it

oh god what is that precap dear😲😲😲 its too scary dear
Edited by shillu.arshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what the hell the precap seems scary man
hope its just part of his nightmare and not real please
wow so she did hear him all the way in the dargah calling out to her
guys thats nothing new
this happens with thema lot
infact if it didnt happpen then i would be shocked
chalo there is hope for khushi now that arnie will be all okay
wow that flashback sure was interesting and hot
man hope he is okay and soon
hows everything with ya and your ceremony
cheers for pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Finally, I was waiting waiting and waiting for a new update.

Congrats on the new thread and thanks for the PM.

I love this Anjali so much, I start to love the serial one again.

Wow, Khushi can be bold ?😲

So sad for Arnav, he feels so helpless.😭

Nice video, I didnt know this song.

What happened to Khushi, it's so scary.😔

Don't you dare take so much time for the next update, samjhi ?
Edited by QueenRani2 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW, Sooo ROMANTICCC, But The Precap ;| 🥺
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for PM. Just Awesome. Very heart touching. Can't wait please update soon

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