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Posted: 13 years ago
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After watching today episode when seeing jeevika back bleeding I just come up with an idea of my next story. What if Maanvi has the transplant and she become cured from cancer but what if Jeevika worn where the bone marrow get infected because she does not take care of it. And while Maanvi surgery is getting down Jeevika die. What would happen then? How would the Vadhare deal with the abortion of the baby as well Jeevika death? Where Jeevika has saved Maanvi life but in process she dies. How does this effect Maanvi when she find out the angle who save her is no other the her sister who scafisied her happiness and her life for Maanvi? It would can remind me of the first episode where Jeevika candle light up Maanvi candle, where the Jeevika says "I will not let Maanvi have darkness in her life I will always bring light into Maanvi life."

This my thoughts for a new Short Story tell me what thought on next jeeman story line if like please comment if don't like please comment to...Then I know if should go head and write the story. My story always on Maanvi health but this time it sightly different it on Jeevika what would happen if the situation is reserves.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sounds intresting go ahead dear don't let anything stop you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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luvd the concept...quite different...
plzz cont..n dont 4gt to pm moi wen ya update!!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sounds interesting n Plzzz pm me wn u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good Idea, make sure can u plz PM me when u update?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the concept
Continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It would be a interesting and sad story to read, please continue to see the emotions that would come about from jeevika not been about, would maanvi be able to continue life without her sister and the rest of the family? How would virat also feel because he knew from the beginning?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This sounds like sumthing interesting. plz carry the story forward
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1:

"Mr Vedhare the bond marrow was successfully done we gone shifted her in the recovery room". The doctor had informed Virat and everyone was there accept Jeevika and Viren, the doctor wheeled out Maanvi and shifted her in the special ward recovery room. "I wishes Jeevika was here she would been so happy to hear the news that her Maanu been cured from cancer..." Said Biji, the bua ji say "Virat beta why don't you call Jeevika and Viren, and see where they are as they should been hear by now." Virat nod in and got nervous, then walked to outside and called Viren. "Bhai how is babhi now everyone keep asking about you to when you gone come." Viren break down and say's "Virat Jeevika still very weak and has regain consciousness as she had loss a lot blood due abortion and the bond marrow transplant. The doctor has kept for observation." Then all of sudden Jeevika pulse drops and Jeevika has problem breathing. Viren notices and scream "Jeevika." The doctor come running and try give CPR to save Jeevika but she losses...Virat on the on other side of the phone say to Viren "Bhai what going on." Then Doctor Rahul say's to Viren "I'm sorry Mr Vedhare but we unable to save your wife." Viren in shock he drops the phone, Virat hear this on the other side and say "No way this can not be happening." Virat break down as Indra chachu walk up him from behind and say's "Virat what happen look Maanvi okay now." Virat just give tight hug to Indra chachu and cry his eyes out. Chachu is confuse and say's "Virat I know this has been hard battle for you, but you should be happy now. Your Maanvi safe now as beaten the cancer."

Then Virat say's "Bhabhi..." and cry's endless but chachu still does not understand as he say's "I know Jeevika will be please to and she be over joy that her Maanvi is perfectly fine." Just then Dr Rahul come and say's "I am sorry to tell you this but Jeevika has saved Maanvi life by given born marrow but." Then Dadji say "What do you mean doctor, tell clearly." Then Doctor Rahul "Dadji I wish I can tell but there no time for this right now as you need be with Viren as Jeevika." Then Bua ji say's "What happen to Jeevika." Then doctor Rahul take deep breath and say " I am sorry inform you this but Jeevika no more, we could not save her." Everyone happiness had turn in tears when they heard about Jeevika death.

In the mean time Jeevika soul come out body and goes to see Maanvi. Jeevika seat next Maanvi and strokes her hair gently like a mother does to a child. Then Maanvi regain consciousness and see Jeevika, Maanvi smiles and say "See di we did it, we had beaten the cancer and won." Jeevika smiles and say's "That was suppose to happen because my Maanu a fighter she win all battles." Maanvi say's "That because my god with me." Jeevika smiles and say "Maanvi I always be with you. Maanu I need you to make me a promise." Maanvi smile and say "And what that any thing for you di." Then Jeevika smiles "In the future any thing happen where I am hear or not you always be strong, face the world and keep you fighting spirit. Please don't loss hope." Maanvi is confuse and say "Di what you talking about I don't understand and why are talking like that. You always be together forever you promise." Then Jeevika say "Shhh you need rest, we talk about that later" Then Jeevika hugs Maanvi and lay next her they sleep peacefully together. Then when Maanvi fully sleep Jeevika say's "Maanu when you wake you I won't be here but please forgive me for what I have done, and let me go peacefully. If there tears in your eyes then I won't able to cross the side and go toward the light."

To be continue...
Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful update, so sad jeevika died, how will manvi cope wth da news

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