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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2:
I am sorry about update story so late just busy any way here continuation of story:
It been two hours since the family got news about Jeevika aboption, her bone marrow transplant save Maanvi in return she gave her life everyone completely broken by this news. Biji and Virat was concern how tell Maanvi as Jeevika was her life, Viren was completely broken he just wanted to by himself he was not in mood talk and he did not cry but everyone could feel pain.

Maanvi finally regain consusess and first thing she Biji who seating next her "Biji where di." Biji did know what say then she hide face tears not trying make eye contact and say "Maanvi beta your di stack traffic she gone get fresh clothes for you." Maanvi sense Biji hiding from her "Biji are you hiding something from me. " Bijj smile nevourly hiding tears and "No beta it nothing." Then Maanvi "If that the case why cant talk with eye contact" Then Virat come to the recue and say "Partner what this soon you wake up you start your intergation like police offices, when learn to relax.You had big opperation." Then doctor come say "Virat right you need relaxs" Maanvi agree but notice Virat eyes swolen as if been crying and wonder what matter is to with Jeevika.

In mean time Vanshika is with Viren as he has head on lap and is just quite holding Jeevika picture and her duputta in hishand while strokes her trying console him in silently by taking his pain away. Vanshika say herself "Why did have give this pain to my son. The same pain I had many year ago but aleast I had my children but my son has no one why god" Vanshik being angry at god.

While Jeevika appears and say "please Viren Ji let me go let go of my memories let me go into the light. If you are sad like this then it won't allow me cross over to the light and i'll stack between world and I wont be peace. Please Viren ji dont do this I promise to wait for on otherside." Jeevika gently kiss Viren on the cheek and Viren felt her touch and shout "Jeevika" and finaly let his tears out hugging Vanshika "why mum did Jeevika had leave me all alone i can not live with out her".

To be continue
Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Aww dat was so sad feel bad for viren wat will manvi do wn she finds out
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3:
"Fews hours have passed no sign of Jeevika di". Maanvi thought herself as Virat seating next to her, she say "Virat it been so many hours there no sign of Di or Jiju where are there? Has something happen to di is she okay, I have feeling your hiding something from me." Virat about to reply when his phone ring and it was Dadji "Virat beta we will be preforming Jeevika furnal tommore morning, I know Maanvi such had her operation but it better you tell her now as she need be there at Jeevika funral and say last good byes." Virat look away from Maanvi control his emotional and tears say's "Jiji dadji." Then Virat put the phone down and look at Maanvi looking very sad and serious say's "Maanvi I have talk to you." He take a deap breath as Maanvi look worried as wondering what has happen.
As Virat continue "Before I tell you, I need you to be strong." Maanvi nods and say's "Please Virat tell me what the matter, I am getting really worried." Virat just hugs her, and start crying Maanvi looking confused and more worried. "Virat please tell me what the matter is?" Then Virat break his hug and say's "Maanvi I know after this news you be real shock but remember I'll away be your side." As Virat hold Maanvi hand still crying and Maanvi "I know Virat, I just want to know what your hiding from me." Then Virat say's it "Maanvi Jeevika bhabhi had abopting her child to save your life." Maanvi shock and say's "No Didi can not do this, I will never forgive her." Then Virat say's "Please Maanvi don't do this as Bhabhi soul will not be in peace." Maanvi not understanding what Virat say's "What do you mean by that where is Didi I need talk about this." Virat just kept holding Maanvi hand and say's "Manvi I know Jeevika bhabhi your life but you need live your life without her." Maanvi gets more frusted and say's "Virat please stop talking in riddle please tell me where didi as I need have out with her. Why did do to her baby to save my life that not fare. A incent baby did not get the chance come into this beautiful life due Jeevika di. How can she do this." Virat say's "Please Maanvi don't do this don't hate bhabhi she save your life." Maanvi has tear's "Yeh right she save my life she given me death." Virat get angry and say "Maanvi you would done the same for bhabhi, but the only different bhabhi dead saving your life." Virat said screaming leaving Maanvi in shocked. She was not able to say anything as her mind, body and soul just frooze. Maanvi mind went back into flash back...
Remembering all the happy moments spent with Jeevika...Left Virat stunned as he tried talk to Maanvi but she was not saying any thing not showing any emotion not crying. Maanvi was in deep shocked for a few hours and Virat did not know what to do. The doctor examin her...What is Maanvi conditions please continue reading and leave your comment.
Edited by indian10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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How sad and unhappy can one be from the news just given, jeevika as saved maanvi's life but lost her own I don't know if maanvi will ever come out of the shock that just hit her, virat just needs to stand by her and give her the support she needs.

Thanks for the pm, please continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue, make sure PM me when u update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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feeling bad for viren!!!
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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poor viren...😭
he lost his life
waiting for ur next update
do PM me when u write

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