Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R - Page 29

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: mel420

wow what a plan sir ji

😆stupid thinks maan still hates His Geet
Maan nver can hate his Geet
missed geet a lot in this update
wanting another update wil my geeet
pweeese
give me a geet update


me will pakka fulfill all your wishes in the next update!! he he!!

A totally Geeetttyy update he he!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

Awesome updates!!
Loved it!!
OMG iss Sameera aur SD ki toh mai!! GRRR!!
ha ha look at the foolish girl!! Sam did you really think Maan wont know??? :P :P
Ahann!! Thats MSK's style!! He he the way he forced Sam to call he he Sam was almost shivering with fear ha ha ha!!
Eh lo aa gayi show off ki dukaan SD!! :P :P
awww beti se itna pyaar? Phir bhi show off? Disgusting!!
ha ha kamini kitni jaldi ready ho gayi to give Geets details on hearing divorce ;)
though initially denying and faking innocence LOL


He he!! Loved your comment sweets!!

Specially SD's new name!!😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss.Mars

Kitni chalu aurat hai!! Divorce ka naam sunte hi phat se maan gayi :P :P
ha ha Sam and beaten like dog! Usse aur battar maarna chahiye tha ;) though Maan didnt do any of these :P
OMG Geet in Hitler matlab in my mood *winks*
he he Eagerly waiting shona :D
cont soon!!


Next update coming super soon sweets!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

Ruchs, another work with short part. Golden jubilee ke alawa bhi kahi dekh liya kar. You know na, how much i LOVE it.

Maan Singh Khurana, again, the best. Planning for him is like counting the fingers of your hands. I also assume, there is more people involved. Glad, without hinting that his jaan is safely with him and he came to know about some part of the truth, he managed to trap these 2 jerks and made this plan. Haayo rabba, phir se dhassu precap.

Do cont soon and do PM me.


Aww me kaan pakad kar shollly….

Me hell busy nowadays sweets!! But pakka will compensate in the next update!!

Love you sweets!! Missing you!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

UPDATING SOON!!!!

Hi Buddies!!!😳

Me will start working on the next update soon… Actually me wants the next update to have something special so am still thinking on it…😳

Me has sessional exams coming up in a few days but me will update before that… Me will try and give this update within this week dear… Am sorry for the delays sweets… And a big hug and thank you for bearing with me…😳🤗

Till you wait for me to update, here's my shona Mel's new FF's link for you… Am sure you will love it… Please do encourage her sweets, like you encourage me!!!!😳


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Love you all…

Ruchi…

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs

UPDATING SOON!!!!

Hi Buddies!!!😳

Me will start working on the next update soon' Actually me wants the next update to have something special so am still thinking on it'😳

Me has sessional exams coming up in a few days but me will update before that' Me will try and give this update within this week dear' Am sorry for the delays sweets' And a big hug and thank you for bearing with me'😳🤗

Till you wait for me to update, here's my shona Mel's new FF's link for you' Am sure you will love it' Please do encourage her sweets, like you encourage me!!!!😳


Mel420's My lost identity

Love you all'

Ruchi'

awww your sho sweet love you angel
and will be waiting for your update
and me sure you will do great at your exams
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me too
Still Waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago


A super big thank you and hugs to all my lovely 108 readers who liked the previous update!!!😳

In love with all the lovely comments!! Loved them a lot and read each one twice!!!

This update is dedicated to my B'day Girl Tamanna!! A very Happy B'day Dear!! Love you lot!! And yes me will try to fulfill your wish too!!😉

Hope you like the update dears!!

Pweez send me a PM if you would like PMs dear!!😳


PART - 7


Geet had woken up from her deep slumber a few minutes back… She had not had such a peaceful sleep since last many days… She was feeling as fresh as a flower and there was a smile adorning her lips!!!

She yawned and stretched trying to revive her still lethargic muscles… She looked around trying to find any traces of her dear husband but she fond none…

"Maan…" She feebly called out to him but there was no response…

She slowly got off the bed stabilizing herself with the support of the bed rim as she was still quite weak and felt dizzy… She looked inside the washroom and finally left with no other alternative came out of her room…

Nakul kaka was just making his way up with a glass of fresh juice as he knew that Geet could wake up any time, when he saw Geet coming out of the room while holding her head with one hand… He immediately rushed to her and held her with one hand while keeping the tray on the nearby curio table…

"Geet beti… Yeh aap kya kar rahi hain… Aapko aaram karna chaiyeh…" Nakul softly chided her while escorting her to the room once again… But our dear Geet had different plans…

"Nakul Kaka!!!!" Geet jumped up in excitement seeing him after so long and hugged him tightly, taking him by surprise…

"Kaise hai aap??? Aur baaki sab kaise hain???" Geet asked excitedly forgetting all traits of her weakness…

Nakul Kaka smiled seeing the life of this house and his daughter once again in front of him… He kept a comforting hand on her head while slowly caressing her hair…

"Main abb bilkul theek hun beti, aapko dekhney ke baad, aur jo kuchh bhi abb tak theek nahi tha, wo bhi ho jaayega, kyunki abb aap aa gayi hain…" Nakul finished with a sigh..

Geet frowned not understanding his point…

"Baaki sab theek ho jaayega matlab????"

"Uhhh… wo kuchh nahi beti… aap yeh sab chodiye aur chaliye aaram kijiye… aaiye hum aapko kamre tak le jaayein phir appko juice bhi peena hai…" Nakul immediately changed the topic, while biting his tongue for blurting out so much…

"Nahi Kaka… Mujhe aaram nahi karna.. Aur jaldi sey bataiye aap mujhsey kya chhupa rahey hain??? Chaliye…"

Geet took Nakul's hand and descended the stairs, many times she was about to slip but Nakul held her in place… Nakul tried to instill some sense in her but Geet is Geet, she paid no heed… She soon sat on the table in the living room and made Nakul Kaka sit on the sofa in front of her…

"Abb Bataiye…"

Nakul sighed knowing well that now Geet wont leave the topic so easily, so he started telling her all the happenings that took place in her absence…

By the time he finished, Geet was fuming with anger, and Nakul knew that now no one could save Maan from Geet's wrath!!!

KHURANA MANSION

Half an hour later…

Maan left the car at the entrance not even trying to park it in the portico and almost ran in as if running for an Olympic 100 meter sprint!! He knew Geet would have woken up by now and not finding him by her side, she would have lifted the whole house on her head!!!

But to his utter surprise, all he greeted was, with silence… As soon as he entered the house, he saw a lone figure sitting on the sofa… Maan was confused for a few seconds then when the realization hit him, he started boiling in anger….

"GEEET… Tum yahan kya kar rahi ho… Maine tumhe kamre mein aaram karney ko kahaa tha na…" Maan shouted on her slowly making his way towards her almost towering up on her sitting form on the sofa…

To Maan's surprise, he was greeted with an equally angry in fact even more dangerous glare, which sent shivers down Maan's spine!!! Maan looked at her confused as well as surprised trying to think of the causes of such anger… She surely couldn't be so angry just because he went missing for a few hours!!!

"Nakul Kaka…" Geet called out Nakul…

"Jee Geet beti kaam ho gaya…"

That's when Maan noticed the whole stream of servants were holding cartons in their hands… He looked at their faces and to his extreme surprise, all of them including Nakul Kaka were giving him pitying looks…

"Yeh ho kya raha hai???" Maan asked a little sternly…

"Kya ho raha hai… Yeh AAP mujhsey puchh rahey ho??? AAP BATAO WHAT WERE YOU DOING IN MY ABSENCE!!!" Geet shouted on Maan…

"M.. mmm… main…" Poor Maan stammered while Nakul Kaka and all the servants chuckled seeing the Sher become a Bhiggi Billi in front of the Sherni!!!

"Haan A…aaa… aap…" Geet mocked him…

"Aur aap sab… GET BACK TO YOUR WORK!!!" Poor servants scurried away immediately, literally vanishing in seconds, Nakul Kaka too hurried away but not before giving a consoling look to Maan…

"Haan toh abb aap mujhey bataney ki zehmat karengey ki meri absence mein aapney sharaab peeney aur khud ko chot pahunchaaney ke alaawa aur kya kiya hai…" Geet asked him while crossing her hands on her chest!!!

"Wo… wo… G… Gggeet… Aisa kuchh nahi…."

Geet cut him off and shouted, while pointing a finger at him…

"JHOOTH BOLNE KI KOSHISH BHI MAT KARIYEGA… Mujhe sab pata hai… I have my sources!!!"

Maan cursed Nakul Kaka in his mind knowing well he is Geet's Chamcha and would have filled her with all the happenings…

"Abb mere Nakul kaka ko kosna band kijiye and get ready for your punishment…"

"Punishment???" Maan asked incredulously but regretted the very second when his eyes met with Geet's flashing ones!!

"Haan Sazaa… Aaj sey aap din mein 3 glass doodh piyenge to make up for all the rubbish you gulped down your throat!!!"

"DOODH!!! Cheee… You know Geet mujhe milk se nafrat hai… I ca'nt even stand its smell… Ewww…" Maan said making faces!!

"Chaar karoon…" Geet asked him warningly…

"Nahi nahi… 3 will do…" Maan immediately said accepting his sazaa like a 3-year-old baby does after doing mischief…

"Good… Lets start from now… Nakul Kaka…"

"Jee beti… yeh lijiye Maan Beta…" Nakul Kaka appeared right before Maan with a big tumbler of milk…

"ABHI???" Maan said making faces while eyeing the huge tumbler enough to feed milk to ten persons!!

"Haan ABHI… Nahi to phir paanch glass…"

Maan didn't wait to hear further and gulped down the yucky white liquid in one go, making Nakul chuckle… Maan glared at him while keeping the now empty tumbler back on the tray… Nakul immediately got the signal and ran away laughing silently!!!

"Hmmm good boy…" Geet said and came ahead to wipe off the mustache that had formed due to milk, with her dupatta… Maan felt as if he is in heaven at the soft feel of her fingers accompanied with the silk cloth… He wouldn't mind to even gulp that yucky liquid ten times a day if he got the same treatment…

"Abb aapki doosri sazaa…" Geet immediately composed herself and took off her hands before she lost herself in the feeling of the rough stubble against her soft skin…

"EK AUR SAZAA???" Maan woke up from his dream after getting the rude shock!!

"Haan… Bahut shauk hai na aapko apni wo kya kehtey hain… Tai Chi karkey khud ko chot pahunchaaney ka… Toh aaj sey aapke Gym room par maine taala lagwa diya hai…"

"WHATTT!! Geet this is too much… Tum achchhi tarah sey jaanti ho ki main exercise karey bina nahi reh sakta…" Maan was truly pissed off now…

"Mainey aapko exercise karney sey kab mana kiya… Just you will do a different exercise…"

"Aaahaa!!! Different exercise!! Hmmm…. Iraada kya hai Geet??" Maan asked naughtily while wiggling his eyebrows…

"Chhhiii… Get your mind out of gutter… By different exercise mera matlab hai ki absey aap Nakul Kaka ki help karengey since am getting the house renovated… Toh cheezen utha ke idhar udhar rakhney mein aap unki help karengey… Theek hai…"

"But Geet… Iss ke liye toh main abhi workers employ kar sakta hoon na…"

"Bilkul bhi nahi… Yeh hamara ghar hai aur iska renovation ham khud karenegy… In my strict surveillance!!" Geet finished off with an air of authority…

Maan sighed… Today his dear Biwi was in a Hitler avatar… Hell bent on making his life hell… He just nodded accepting all her wishes…

"Good… Baaki ki punishment baad mein… Mujhe abhi kuchh kaam hai…" Geet finished and left for the kitchen…

"Matlab aur bhi Sazaa hai??? Unbelievable…" Maan said to himself in shock…

Maan was hell irritated and was about to go and start manayofying Geet before she actually made his life hell when his phone vibrated in his pocket…

"Hello…"

"Is that Mr. Maan Singh Khurana???"

"Yes…"

"Sir… I am calling from 'Get Re-Energized Spa' sir…. Maine aapko call kiya tha to confirm the appointment of today evening…"

Maan smirked… He had completely forgotten about it… He had now found the best way to manayofy his wife!!!

"Yes… I will be there…"

"Okay Sir… We will wait for you at 7 P.M. Sharp…"

"Right!! Thank You…"

"Bye Sir... Have a nice day!!"

Maan rubbed his hands gleefully… He checked the time and saw that it was time for her medicines… He made his way towards the kitchen wondering ki abb Hitler kis bicharey par apna keher dha rahi hai!!!

PRECAP

Haayo Rabba!!! The Spa treatment!!!😲

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PREV - PART 6

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All those who are in love with the SPA idea, thank Ritzy Di!!! She is the one who gave me this awesome idea!! Love you Di!! Next update is dedicated to you!!😳

Pweez pay me a visit on my Blog too dears- Ruchi's DEN!!!!

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Ruchi...😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
i enjoyed reading the whole update
the punishment given to maan were just awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow dear, the update is awesome...
loved geet in her hserni mode...
poor maan.. all thanks to nakul...
hayeee loved when maan made a face 3 glass milk yuckkk lolll 😆😆 its worth watching... 😃
loved geet's punishments.. 😉 and maan getting naughty... 😆
wow appointment for spa... interesting...
ab maan babu kya karenge..
waiting waiting sweety..
continue soon...
love ya..
Edited by jyothikrish - 12 years ago

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