Maneet SS- Kaafilaa. PART 10/ Pg 88/ JUN 13 PM L8R - Page 24

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

WHAT A TWIST

I GUESSED THAT SAMEERA WAS BEHIND ALL THE TROUBLE BUT TO DID NOT LIKE THE NAME SAVITRI DEVI TO BE A WICKED PERSON
MY IMAGE OF DADI WILL SHATTER


Don't worry shona!! Me will protect her image!!!šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran




phew Savitri Devi is not Maan's daadi ...she is Sameera's mom...

but yaar this is very unfair why u kept her name Savitri Devi...when we all Maaneet fans have so good memories of Savitri Devi as Maan's Daadi... koi aur naam nahin mila tumhein...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...


He he!!! the only thing me can say is naam main kya rakha hai????šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all parts togther.they r awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
sameera has no where to go now

good that maan cornered her
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi dears!!

Am leaving for college in like 5 minutes!!! So just came for a quick hello!!!

Will be updating tonight!! Slept only 4 hours yesterday so that me could give you an update!! Will update as soon as me comes back!!

Love you sweets!!!

Ruchi…

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchs


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<p align="center"><font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc0099">Am leaving for
college in like 5 minutes!!! So just came for a quick hello!!!
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<p align="center"><font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc0099">Will be updating
tonight!! Slept only 4 hours yesterday so that me could give you an update!!
Will update as soon as me comes back!!
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<p align="center"><font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc0099">Love you sweets!!!</font></p>
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<p align="center"><font size="5" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#cc0099">Ruchi…</font></p>


ok dear. Good morning dear. Hav a nice day
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Posted: 12 years ago

A big Thank you to all the 94 people for liking the last part dears!!

Me loved reading your comments too dears!! They make my day!!!

Me updated the banner sweets!! Do tell me how it is???

Pweez drop by a message if you would like PMs!!


PART - 6


"Yes your mom SAMEERA SINGHANIA... Your so called mother MRS. SAVITRI DEVI SINGHANIA..." Maan spoke gritting his teeth!!!!

Sameera was totally stunned and praying fervently for the safety of her life… she knew that stepping in a hungry lion's liar was far more safe than facing the wrath of Maan Singh Khurana… She just blinked back and gulped her fears and whispered in a meek tone…

"Woh… wo… Mom… She is in L… London…"

"Oh really??? Well I didn't know when the MGF mall of Connaught Place shifted to London!!!" Maan spat sarcastically!!!

Poor Sameera… Now she was cent percent sure that Maan had a fair idea of her and her mom's ministrations and in fact he had been keeping a tab on them and their activities… So she started shedding her crocodile tears hoping they would work, lest did she know that Maan Singh Khurana least cared about anyone's tears except of course his Geet's precious pearls…

"Maan… sob… sob… mujhe kuchh nahi pata… sob sob… sach main… Main to tumhari dost hoon na… Main tumhare saath kuchh bura nahi kar sakti na… wo to mom ne… Mera matlab hai Geet…"

Her sob story was giving Maan a headache but still he was tolerating it but when she uttered Geet's name from her filthy mouth, all hell broke loose and he shouted…

"STOP IT SAMEERA… DON'T YOU DARE TAKE GEET's NAME FROM YOUR MOUTH… Maine yahan tumhe tumhari bakwaas sunne ke liye nahi bulaya… I have called you for a purpose… Abhi ki abhi apna phone nikalo and call that sorry excuse of a woman, your mother and ask her to come and meet you at the Purani Ghaati…"

"M… M… mmain???"

Sameera was now seriously scared as well as confused… what was Maan's game??

"Haan tum… Main chahoon toh yeh kaam khud bhi kar sakta hoon but I know ki that woman will avoid meeting me directly aur ussey shak ho jaayega… So what better way… Uski apni beti ussey wahan bulayegi aur uske muh sey sab sach kabool karvaayegi… How's that ? ? ? Maan wiggled his eyebrows…

"M… mm.. Maan…. wo…"

Sameera tried to come up with an excuse to avoid this situation though her mind was totally blank at this point…

"Main tumhe koi option nahi de raha hoon Sameera… Tum sey behtar shayad koi nahi jaanta ki main kis had tak tumhe barbaad kar sakta hoon… Parr iss waqt mujhe tum sey zyada interst tumhari mom mein hai… So stop wasting your and my time and call her… NOW…"

Maan finished off angrily and Sameera was scared out of her wits, she hastily took out her mobile and immediately dialed her mom's number…

"Hello.. Mumma…"

"Sameera beta??? Tumne yuh achanak call kiya??? Sab thik hai na???"

Maan gave Sameera a stern look while pointing one finger at her and Sameera immediately scrambled…

"Wo… Mumma please mujhe abhi issi waqt Purani Ghati par miliye… wo main…"

Before she could continue Maan snatched her mobile and cut the call…

"Good… I guess chuhey ko bill sey nikalne ke liye its more than enough… Till then you are my guest… And trust me main apney mehmaanon ki khaatirdaari bohat achchhi karta hoon…"

"Kyaaa???"

"Obviously… tumhe kya lagaa main tumhe itni aasani sey chhod dunga??? No no no Sameera, tumhi toh mera wo mohra ho jiskey zariye main apni manzil tak pahunchunga…"

Sameera gulped while Maan smirked…

PURANI GHAATI, Delhi Outskirts

Maan had laid out his plan very carefully. He knew one mistake from his end could make him lose this only chance he had. He was waiting comfortably leaning on the car bonnet while Sameera was safely deposited at his farmhouse amidst strict vigilance. He couldn't risk bringing her here!!

After a few minutes another car came to a screeching halt only a few yards away from him. A woman draped in an orange and green Kanjivaram Silk saree stepped out of the door opened for her by her chauffer, clearly giving a glimpse of her expensive stilettos and perfectly pedicured feet…

She removed her goggles, but Maan felt that he needed one to maintain the eye contact with her, considering the amount of gold and diamonds she had on her… she looked like a gold and diamond exhibition on display!!!

"Hello Mrs. Singhania…" Maan greeted her with a mocking smile…

"What the hell are you doing here Maan Singh Khurana??? Aur meri beti kahan hai??"

"Well!! Good question!!! Aapki beti… Umm let me think… Well last time I saw her, she was chained to a rickety chair and being beaten up like a dog…"

Maan clearly lied to rile her up; He didn't do any such thing to her, though he was literally itching to do so!!!

"WHAAATTT!!! I will kill you!!!"

Savitri Devi lunged forward but Maan moved a step ahead and literally came face to face, intimidating her, forcing her to move back to her place!!

"Agar main aapki jagah hota toh aisi galti kabhi nahi karta, considering my one phone call can take away your precious daughter's life…"

Maan said flashing his mobile in front of her, clearly sending out the warning….

"Tum chahtey kya ho???" She spoke gritting her teeth…

Maan spoke slowly giving her the impression that he didn't know where is Geet…

"Aahaa…. Now you are talking… well for the starters, where is Geet???"

She first stuttered then spoke gaining a little confidence…

"M… Mujhe k. kaise pat.. pata hoga??? And moreover why are you asking for her?? Tum toh uss sey naftrat kartey ho na???"

"Yup… Aap sahi keh rahi hain… Mujhe uss har janey sey nafrat hai jisney mere saath kuchh bhi bura kiya hai ya bura karney ki koshish ki hai…" He gave her a piercing gaze all the while saying this…

Savitri Devi Singhania was a little confused with the way Maan was giving such puzzling replies though she said nothing…

"Well… Let me come to the point… Mujhe pata hai ki Geet aapke paas hai, my detectives clearly told me that she was last seen with you… Mujhe iss baat sey koi matlab nahi hai ki where is she, how is she etc.. etc…. I want to give her DIVORCE… Ussi ki proceedings ke liye mujhe uskey signatures chaiyeh papers par…"

Maan said all the while looking in her eyes which clearly depicted that she was scared first, then confused and finally she was smirking as she felt that the game was once again in her hands….

"Sure… Par yeh to tum mujhe waise bhi keh saktey thhey na… Why did you involve my daughter in all this??? She is innocent…"

Mrs. Singhania said trying her best to get Sameera out of this mess…

Maan ignored her answer and replied monotonously while getting into his car clearly showing that the conversation was done for him…

"Maybe she is… Par aap nahi ho… Mujhe pata hai ki you are involved in all this… So till you get Geet to me for getting the formalities done… Sameera is my guest…"

Maan then remembered something and spoke by lowering his car's window…

"And yes sooner the better… Otherwise mujhe nahi pata ki how many broken bones will your lovely daughter have by then…"

He then sped away with a smirk, leaving behind a bewildered Mrs. Singhania…

"Yeh Maan aakhir chaahta kya hai??? Mujhe abhi issi waqt Unn sab sey baat karni hogi… they have to find Geet at any cost specially when we are so close to our mission… aur jaldi nahi toh pata nahi yeh Maan meri Sameera ke saath tab tak kya kya kar chukka hoga…" She said to herself while getting in the car…

"Yehi toh main jaan na chaahta hoon Savitri Devi Singhania Ki aur kaun kaun tumhare iss plan mein shaamil tha… Aur yeh plan aakhir tha kya…" Maan though to himself while driving off to his Mansion, back to his Jaan, his Geet…

PRECAP

GEET in HITLER AVATAR!!!

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PREV- PART 5 NEXT - PART 7

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Am sorry for the no Maaneet part again!!! Sholly!!!

Hoping you liked the twist dears!!šŸ˜‰

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Edited by ruchs - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
haye Maan playing with them...
loved it...
continue soon..
Edited by reachsky2011 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
But thoda shrt update tha...
Nwzzz waiting for hitler geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
šŸ‘... loved it ... sd or sam aap dono to gaye ab . maan se bachna mushkil hai ...

waiting for our hitler geet
Edited by maansee - 12 years ago

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