Kitni Mohabbat Hai FF(jazzveer) part 4 pg10 updatd

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Priya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: rechus
Its interesting..good job..

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Originally posted by: aru_86
wow ranveer jazz ff...love this jodi

dunno why! I love them too.. I dunno if CVs will pair them up or not.. but I hope it happens.. they're so cuuteee😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow...loved it.ranveer-jazz were too gud.😊aww poor saheba😭par koi baat nehi,apna daljeet hei na😆waiting eagerly for the next update on saheba-daljeet😳😳

Keep them coming...😳

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Kesha_H.

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Good ff so far but I don't really understand can u translate it plz 😭 and hpe ranveer and jazz really fall in love bit idk y but I hav a stange feeling tht Sahiba and Ranveer mite reunite after he finds Sahiba in London and learning tht her marrige was just fake one so she can get visa which leaves both Daljeet and Jazz brokenhearted and then jazz and daljeet may fall in love in the process but I don't want tht to happen at all Ranveer needs a girl lyk Jazz and Jazz needs a man lyk Ranveer😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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nice work,specially ranbeer & jazzs diologues...

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: 16021983
Good ff so far but I don't really understand can u translate it plz 😭 and hpe ranveer and jazz really fall in love bit idk y but I hav a stange feeling tht Sahiba and Ranveer mite reunite after he finds Sahiba in London and learning tht her marrige was just fake one so she can get visa which leaves both Daljeet and Jazz brokenhearted and then jazz and daljeet may fall in love in the process but I don't want tht to happen at all Ranveer needs a girl lyk Jazz and Jazz needs a man lyk Ranveer😊

thanks translation may not b possible nw.. sorry. But will try to write dialogues in English from now on..

thanks so much for the comment😳

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Originally posted by: sukhminderkaur7
nice work,specially ranbeer & jazzs diologues...

thank you 😳 Glad ya like it😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Priyamvada

thanks translation may not b possible nw.. sorry. But will try to write dialogues in English from now on..

thanks so much for the comment😳

no prob hpe u update soon and finish ur other ff's too😆

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Kitani Mohabbat Hai..❤️

Part two

Sahiba was in a foul mood, Daljeet prepared her fav sarson ka saag, but nothing could cheer her.
That evening Daljeet couldn't take more n decided to confront her.

"Sahiba Ji? Kya hua.. are u ok?"

She was lost in a deep thought, her eyes were still puffy, red due to crying.
What would she do? She had got no option, but to accept JazzVeer's invitation. She needed to talk to Ranveer, at least know the reason for his betrayal. Did the girl lure him, offering money? Or the high-class life he was leading-

"Sahiba Ji.. "

She turned to him. Daljeet gave a meek smile & pushed something into her hand.

"Chocolate?" she was amused.

"Haan Ji.. U were upset! They say chocolate works great for bad-mood swings.. " Daljeet replied n waited her to speak.

This guy was, she couldn't describe him in one word, he was generous, kind, amazingly sweet.. and an incredible support to her when in need.

"Thank you Ji.. Main theek hoon! Aap jo hai mere saath.. aap na mera khayal bahut rakte ho! (U care so much for me)"

He shook his head, "U r my friend Ji.. farz banta hai mera.. Why r u upset?"

She lied easily that she was missing her family n Daljeet didn't push it further.

~

That evening, a luxurious car took them to the Pal mansion. An awkward silence prevailed when the couples met.

Sahiba introduced Daljeet as her husband. Jazz was shocked, but smiled.

"Tum dono bahut cute lagte ho.. " she remarked before calling her Dad.

" Ranveer.. Kaise ho? Toh yeh hai woh.. jisse tum pyar karthe ho..." Sahiba's words took him offguard.

"Haan.. " he admitted, "long story yar.. Dinner ke baad baat karein?"

"I'll show u around the place.. " Jazz dragged Sahiba by the arm, "I'm so glad u both came.. We'll be back soon Daljeet Ji.."

Sahiba felt tears stinging her eyes. She had assumed her heart would stop beating the moment Ranveer parted her, but it was a surprise it didn't. Perhaps she didn't love him as much she thought she did.
Jazz was a nice gal, she observed. Her home was just as spacious as her heart.
They reached the library.

"Its my fav spot!" Jazz exclaimed wid a smile, " this week, I started teaching Ranveer.. U know he's learning English.."

Sahiba smiled at her, "Daljeet Ji is also teaching me..."

Jazz looked at her their eyes met.

"I'm sorry.. " She told Sahiba in a whisper.

"What.. Why.. "

"Ranveer told me about u.. everything.. " Jazz explained.

Sahiba could feel fresh tears leaking, "oh.."

"I didn't want to intrude, I had no intention to separate two lovers.."

Jazz went on as Sahiba played with her handbag.

"And then he started reciprocating those feelings- I'm sorry! I didn't mean to make u sad... " She said abruptly glancing at Sahiba, "you relax a bit.. I'll get Ranveer."

Jazz rushed out of the library and Sahiba collapsed onto a chair weeping.

*BG tune*

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna

Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

*end of BG*

She shouldn't weep, not for Ranveer when he doesn't love her.
Her eyes instantly fell on to a half open book lying on the table. She wiped her tears & picked it up.

The title was crisp & clear, it said, "Journey of our Love."
She flipped a page & there was a signature 'Jazbir Pal Singh'.

A dairy... she thought. An answer to all her questions.
She opened the very first page and saw the fine handwriting there.

"This dairy can tell me that truth.. which even Ranveer or Jazbir can't tell me.. " and she began reading it.

'Its such a boring day. I decided to hang out wid friends at a pub. There was this Indian guy, ready to irritate me like always.
Dad seemingly had advised this freaking waiter, not to give more than three pegs of whisky..'

She heard someone coming. She abruptly closed the book, only to stuff into her bag.

"Sahiba Ji.. "

A smile formed on her lips when she heard that familiar voice.

"Jazz ji kehrahi thi.. U were upset again? What happened Ji.. If u r missing your family.. We can go to India.. Even Chachaji will-"

"Daljeet Ji.. I'm fine. Main khush hoon.. aur maine angrezi bhi seekhliya.. Us kutte Ranveer ne bhi.. "

"Kutta?" Daljeet chuckled, "badaa acha banda hai.. is he ur childhood friend..?"

Sahiba nodded.

~ In the Hall

"Tumhe kya lagta hai.. Did she really forgive me? This easily?" Jazz was on the verge of tears.

"Of course.. Usne tumhe maaf kiya.. she's my best friend.. I know her!" Ranveer was trying his best to convince her.

Jazz wasn't listening & he pulled her into his arms.

"Oye.. Idhar vekh.. Ki Kar rahi ho? Oho.. Stop crying! Kuch nahi hua hai.. Jajjbeer.. "

Jazz looked up through her watery eyes, "don't call me that.. u know I'm Jazz.."

"Right.. N the Jazz I know will never cry.. "

"Jazz bhi toh ek ladki hai.. agar koi uska pyar cheenne ki koshish ki toh.. bahut bura lagta hai.. I have lost my mom.. My dad ditched me when I was a kid.. I have never loved anyone ever since.. If u leave Ranveer, I may not.. " She broke into soft sobs.

Ranveer almost laughed at her words, "Sahiba aisi ladki nahi hai.. aur tumhe kya lagta hai.. (what do u think?) that I'll leave u.. I promise Jazz.. Rab Di Kasam.. Agar yeh Ranveer tujhse judaa hoga toh uska sirf ek hi matlab hua ki woh mar chuka-" (If I'll ever leave you it will be because of my death)

Jazz placed a hand over his lips, "don't say such things.. Nothing will happen to u.. N we'll live together happily.. forever!"

And she embraced him in a passionate hug. He returned it.

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Next Part - It will feature pages from Jazz's dairy besides some small sajeet moments.

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Thanks for reading😊

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Edited by Priyamvada - 12 years ago