EPI 21 FAN MADE (NO BREAKS)

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Hi everyone sorry for the delay I was putting the episode together been really busy the whole day... I would like to say a big thank you to Sonam Bacha🤗 for doing most of the episode... I just added 2 parts and she done the rest so everyone do read and comment.

Whispers in the Morning

"The whispers in the morning

Of lovers sleeping tight

Are rolling by like thunder now

As I look in your eyes

I hold on to your body

And feel each move you make

Your voice is warm and tender

A love that I could not forsake."

Its Morning time 6:30 A.M.

Sunlight shyly invaded in new Couple's room bringing Manyata back from her beauty sleep. Slowly-slowly she opened her eyes & stirred below the bedsheets. Her gaze fell upon Uday who slept peacefully by her side & looking like a cute kid in his sleep. She's a married woman now; her hand reached the Mangalsutra that lay upon her chest and on her forehead filled with sindoor. She was smiling, she felt herself as the luckiest girl in the whole world who had a husband like Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh, her halkat veda. It felt too much like fairytales to be truth. She always wanted a Prince charming in her life who loved her more than anyone else. But it was reality they were actually married & her brother Vijay aka Vijay Dinanath Chauhan was also married to her best friend & her sweet nanad(sister in law)& UV's Chutki Unnati.

On one hand She couldn't believe on this beautiful reality just like her KHWAB, but on the other hand She was scared, scared to lose her love and life who is none other than her loving husband Udayveer Singh & this beautiful reality. Suddenly Manyata felt UV's embrace pulling her close & their eyes met. His deep chocolate brown eyes starred into her's & he was smiling. The touch & the closeness of Uday every time gave her goosebumps & chills & their bodies inched even more closer. For a few second both starred at each other & their eyes closed as their lips met. Both were completely lost in love & that feeling was so good. She pulled away from the kiss & starred at him & kissed him on his forehead.

"Is this real or it's just my dream Uday?"Manyata asked to Uday.

UV was surprised after hearing this question. Uday's hand reached her face & he caressed Manyata's chubby & soft cheeks & said smilingly, "I LOVE YOU PRINCESS. Hum aapse apne aap se bhi jyada pyar karte hain." & kissed on her cheeks.

"I LOVE YOU TOO HALKAT VEDE UDAY."Manyata said blushingly.

"Then it's not your dream Princess, it's a beautiful reality. Aur yeh real dream kabhi nahi tutega."She smiled back & leaned forward & hugging Uday.

Intensity grew between the new couple & UV took Manyata into his strong arms as they engaged into second love union. Both felt complete after their beautiful wedding night.

After a while Manyata got ready and went downstairs straight to the kitchen all the servants greeted her

"aaj hamara ise ghar mein pehela din hai so hum aaj kuch meetha banaghe hum kheer banayghe hamaari jaisi kheer yahaan koi nahiye bana saktha humhe sareh ingredient dijiyeh"

The servant came with all the ingredients

" yeh lijiye Yuvrani sa"

"thank you ab aap loge jayee hai hum banalenghe"

"jee Yuvrani sa"

All the servants left

" yeh kheer khakeh hamare sasurji bahuth khush hoghe.. ab yeh pista kahaan gaya (she searched the draws but she couldn't find it) it must be on the top drawer (she climbed the chair she still couldn't reach so she tiptoed) yes got it aahhh(she was about to fall)

Uday was watching all this so he quickly ran towards Manyata and catched her. Manveer were both looking in each other eyes

The servant came "Yuvrani sa Yuvraj sa aapko"

Manveer realized someone had come Uday let go of Manyata

"woh Maharaj aapko aur Yuvraj sa ko bhulah rehay hai"

"hum abhi athe hai"

"jee"

The servant left

Manyata quickly put the pistachio nuts in the kheer "Uday kheer kaisi hai yeh loh have some" (she fed him)

"It's delicious ab chaleh"

Manyata nodded "yeah chaloh"

Manveer go inside Giriraj was sitting in the lounge " Uday beta hum kabseh aap ko bulah rehey teh woh dharsal aapko Devgar janah hai Unnanti ko leneh phag phere ki rasam keh liye hai"

"Dad hum abhi thodi dher mein jathe hai don't worry abhi aap kheer kayi"

Manyata was very excited "Papa humneh aaj hamari peheli rosayi banayee hai yeh lijiye kheer kayi aur batiyeh kaisi bani hai"

Giriraj ate the kheer "bahuth he achi kheer bani hai beta yeh lijiye aapka shagun yeh hamare Jaigar keh poshatani kagaan hai... Uday ki Ma keh teh... humneh ineh sambhal keh rakha tha aur aaj seh yeh hamaari bahu keh yeh lijiye aur hum umeed rakthe hai aap Jaigar ki zimedaariyaan ache seh nibayghee akhir agaye jakeh aapko Jaigar ki Maharani bana hai"

Manyata was very happy she took Girirajs blessings "jeethe raho beta aaj agar Uday ki Ma zinda hothi toh bahuth khush hothi... woh hamesha seh aapko he bahu bananah chahathi thi aaj jo woh sapna porah hua woh yahaan nahiye hai" Giriraj got upset "Papa Mama jahaan bhi hoghi woh humhe dhekar bahuth khush hoghi hum vaada karteh hum apni zimaardariyaan bahuth ache seh nibayenghe" She hugged Giriraj

"Dad, Manyata aap dono humhe toh bhool gaye I do exist you know"

"Uday beta aap bhi ajayeee"

All had group hug

"ab hamaari Unnati bhi ajaye bahuth miss kar rehay hai uneh"

"Papa don't worry hum thodi dher mein jathe hai Devgar aur Unnanti ko lekeh athe hai, humneh Unnanti keh sareh gifts ausekeh kamareh mein rakhe hai tike hai jab woh aiyghi uneh dijiyehgha"

"Don't worry Princess woh sab hum dheklenghe ab jakeh tyaar hojayi"

All were busy in doing preparations becuase their Jamaisa Yuvraaj Udayveer & Yuvrani Manyata were coming for the first time after their marriage for the Pag phera Rasam of Yuvrani Manyata. They'll come at any time. Dr Uncle was busy in checking the preparations of the welcome of Jamaisa & Yuvranisa & also giving instructions to Security head ShivSinghji. DS & Komal were busy in talking about the arrangements of Pag phera Rasam of Manyata & Unnati.

"Masaheb Rasam ki sari taiyaari(Arrangements) ho gayi hai. Manyata aur Jamaisa kisi bhi waqt(time) aate hi honge." Komal said to DS.

"Komal Manyata ke saath humein jo gifts bhejne hain unka kya hua?" DS asked to Komal about presents for Manyata's in laws & shagun & other gifts for Jamaisa(Udayveer).

"Masaheb sab kuch ho chuka hai bas ab toh humari beti aur Jamaisa ke aane ka intezaar(wait) hai. Aaj humari beti shadi ke baad apne Maayke pahli baar aa rahi hain." Komal said smilingly but tears of happiness in her eyes clearly.

"Haan Komal aur hum bhi yahi chahte hain ki sab kuch acche so ho. Ab Manyata ek nahi do-do Riyasaton ki Yuvrani hain aur hone wali Maharani bhi." DS said & was trying to comfort Komal.

"Ji Masaheb", Komal said smilingly.

"Komal, Unnati aur Vijay kahaan hain? Wo dono ready hue ya nahi?" DS asked to Komal.

"Masaheb, wo bhi bas ready ho rahe hain, aate hi honge. Hum baki ki arrangements bhi check kar lete hain." Komal said & left the place to checked other arrangements.

In MANVEER ROOM.

Manyata was busy in combing her silky n brown hair & stand up in front of spotless mirror. At that time UV saw his beautiful wife busy in combing her hair. Uday remembered that day when Manyata was trying to get ready for the party when He changed Manyata's look from Chawlwali Moniya to Princess of Devgar Manyata Kumari & than just smiled. UV planned to tease her wifey a little. He came close to Manyata & pushed her on one side & started to check himself in the mirror.

Manyata was shocked but She knew Uday was doing this to tease her.

"Uday ye kya hai?" Manyata folded her both arms & asked to Uday.

"Princess kya hai. Ready ho rahe hain aur kya. Humein disturb mat kijiye, humein apne Saural jana hai na aur sab apne Jamaisa se milne ke liye bahut bekaraar honge." Uday was smiling & was doing an act to check himself.

"Uday tum toh ready ho ab humein ready hone do ok. Chalo hato mirror ke saamne se. Manyata also pushed Uday on another side & again started to comb her hair.

"Princess pehle hi din aap apne husband se aise behave karengi. Too bad Princess. Aap hatiye humein ready hone dijiye, hatiye.' Uday picked Manyata in his arms & put her aside.

"Halkat Vede Yede Uday ek toh tum pahle se hi ready ho, phir bhi humein pareshan karne ke liye yeh sab kar rahe ho. Hum already late hain. Maa ka phone bhi aa gaya hai,wo sab humara wait kar rahe hain aur aise hi chaloge tab bhi koi farak nahi padega" Manyata said & showed her fake anger.

"Kyun koi farak nahi padega hum Devgar ke Jamaisa hain aur Jaigarh ke Yuvraaj toh humein acche se ready toh hona hi padega na Jaan aur hum nahi chahte ki magazines ke cover page par humari koi bekaar si pictures aa jaye,phir kya hoga?"UV said smirkingly.

"Kya hoga kuch nahi hoga Tum toh humesha hi cute lagte ho aur...".(Manyata stopped).

Than Uday pulled Manyata so so closed to him & whispered in her ear,"Aur."

"Aur, Uday tum Aur..." Manyata felt goosebumbs & closed her eyes.

"Princess, boliye cute aur kya lagte hain hum aapko?"Uday again asked & kissed on Manyata's cheeks.

Manyata got chance to take revenge with Uday.

She said to Uday seductively," Jaan paas aaiye hum batayenge ki cute ke saath aur kya lagte ho?"

Manyata came closer & screamed in UV's ears loudly," Aur Halkat, Vede, Khasmanukhane." & started to ran in the whole room.

"Princess, koi fayda nahi ab aap humse bachkar nahi ja sakti."UV also started to ran after Manyata & trying to catch her.

But Manyata couldn't run fast cos she wore a Sari & high heels also.

UV grabbed Manyata's hand & said,"Got you Princess."

Manyata had bangles (specially for new married women)in her both hands. "Sambhalke Uday." Manyata said o Uday when he grabbed her hands tightly.

"Sorry Princess.Lekin hum jeet gaye na."Uday said to Manyata smilingly.

"Accha theek hai tum jeete. waise bhi tum jeete toh bhi wo humari hi jeet hai na. ab chalein sab wait kar rahe honge." Manyata said to Uday & kissed on his cheeks.

"K Princess let's go."Uday said to Manyata & than both left the room to go Devgar Palace for Pag Phera Rasam.

They reached Devgar everyone greeted them in a grand way they threw roses on them done their aarti.

Manyata hugged Komal "kaise hai mera bacha" "I'm fine Ma" replied Manyata happily

"Ma Choti kahaan hai hum auseh phag phere ki rasam keh liye leneh aiya hai"

Vijay and unnanti were in lounge

"Unnanti yeh uday bana itni jaldi agaye"

"Its afternoon vijay Dada is late hum kabseh wait kar rehay ghar janeh keh liye"

Manyata hugged Unnanti

"sorry thoda late hoghe woh hum kheer banah reh teh tumneh kya banaya pehli rosayi keh liye"

"bhabhisa humneh halwa banaya hai"

"my favourite phir toh hum zaroor kayghe

"kahlenh Manyata bhai ( he hugged her)

Uday came to the lounge "chaleh choti"

"jee dada chaliye" (she hugged him )

"dad besabri seh intezaar kar rehay hai aapka"

Vijay wasn't very happy " Unnanti hum shaam ko aiyghe tumhe leneh"

"Vijay bana koi jaldi nahiye araam seh aiygha"

"kyun hum toh tike saat bhaje ajayghe"

Uday laughed "tike hai ajaygha"

Uday and Unnanti leave

Precap- DS gives honeymoon tickets to Manveer and Vijay and Unnanti

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Written by Sonam and Anam

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Edited by Anam Ali - 12 years ago
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You Rock Jiji Nice Episode.😉 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
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yippe🥳meri mom ne likha hai😳awesome awesome awesome work mom👏u r the best⭐️for u👏sisi for u too👏i love u both🤗
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very nice like regular soap...great work...pls next week show a leap of 1 n half year
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Mummy loved the whole epi!! beautifully written!!
Especially uday teasing manyata!! loved it!
Thanks for the epi!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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the update was awesome and beautifully written i loved the episode great job sona m and anam u guys rock🤗👍🏼

i loved the morning scenes and unnati and vijaybhai scenes were so nice vijaybhai not wanting to leave unnati was so nice
lovely dialogues were written by both of u anam and sonam u guys are truly great writers

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Lovely and nice update lovelies Sonam ans Anam👍🏼
Too good and feelings of M were very nicely expressed ⭐️ I mean when see our dreams being fulfilled we always get afraid of losing it😊
UV and M scenes were too cute and depicted pure love😊 the Anam's style😳
Loved it🤗🤗
Keep it up👍🏼
and thanx for the pm Sonam Dear🤗
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loved the epi mummy
i cant wait for the honeymoon 😆
thanks for the PM Sonam :)
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great episode anam n sonam..loved it..really sweet..😛

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