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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: jasraj123
awesome work

keep it up ritu

love it

Thank u soo much jas..😳

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: shah10
Awesome

Originally posted by: sdlife19
nice st0ry dera

Thank u sooo much dear...!!!

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: reachsky2011
Congo for another OS...

Luv ya and Thank u Chandru...!!!

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

luv u paroo...tumne humsab keliye os lihka...

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Ha par mujhe abhi tak comment nahi mila is pe... Isiliye filhal I dont love u all... Hehe.. :P

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angelic_cute

@angelic_cute

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

awesome

mix of emotions in this os

sad,happy,sacrificing and then confessing all in one

loved it

thanks for pm

bye

take care

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

pehle start kiya na...tho laga khub rulaegi yeh paroo...

par padte padte kitna acha laga...

unki friendship proposal ki tho kya baath hai...

phir yeh duriya...aur amne samne ki anna..sach ka patha chalna..

you know what was the best part...the poem in between the updates...

superb paroo...sare emotions in few lines...

luv u...

Edited by reachsky2011 - 13 years ago

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deepali1022

@deepali1022

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

omg!!
One more os...i was already blown by ur previous one n now dis one...!!!

Dat was emotional n amazing...when i read first line i was lyk babaji sb kuch theek to hoga n...den suddnly geet met an accidnt i thought guy to b maan bt dat was rohan...he is realy a gud frnd of geet...hayee she was suffering frm such disease n was al alone...*i was feeling lyk crying*

she had done al dat jst cauz she luvs maan...deir frndship was realy amazing...!!!

D ending was awesum...d dialogues r so heart touching...!!

I luv'd it...!!

U r awesum ritu...luv
u...ummmaaahh...!!

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nishnal

@nishnal

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Its too gud ya lovd it...the way maan askd geet 4 becming his girlfrnd was too cute ya...!n thn aftr operatn...geet in unconcious state maan talkng to geet n the way gemdt repied maan wasso adorng ya...lykd each n evry bit of it...!! 😉 😆

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#50

loved it

especially liked geet here... her bubbly nature, the way he asked for maans friendship, her loving nature and then sacrificing one too ...

happy that u made her survive... warna maan tho kya even me too will be heart broken

all the best for ur future works dear