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Posted: 13 years ago
omg arjun is back...😲
super awesome update👏...
liked it👍🏼..no nooo ❤️ it ...😳

main ne to update darte huwe parhi 😆...
finally arjuhi ka intazar khatam huwa...

eagerly waiting for the next part


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Posted: 13 years ago
posting next update in a bit. to read this you should have also read part 15 on page 94.
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Posted: 13 years ago
This update is dedicated to
all my wonderful readers
all KMHians
and to one of my favourite persons who is very dear to me
I would like to take everybody's names but I would hate it if I miss someone. So in short this
is for ALL of you.
Without you guys this SS could have never turned out the way it did.
This is your SS not mine.
❤️🤗 ❤️

PART 17 - (to read this part you should have read part 15 on pg 94)

Salaam Namaste

She was standing there holding the railing looking at the moon. Suddenly as if everything came to standstill she gripped her hands tightly. Her heartbeat started to race so much that she feared that she wouldnt be able to breathe. He came to the top stair and then out to the terrace. His heart skipped a beat. through her netted white chunni that was drying on the clothesline, he could see her, her back towards him. He could tell exactly how she looked. he could see her hand gripping the railing tightly. He knew that she knows he is here. He went closer. she closed her eyes tightly He kept the covered plate and glass on the ledge without making noise. she still would not turn around. He stopped a few steps away from her. A tear rolled down her closed eye. He looked at the moon shining bright on them, clear sky with more than usual stars. 'Eid ka chand ko toh aaj nikalna hi tha' he said in a low voice. She felt like there was nothing under her legs, like her body went light listening to his voice, he continued 'ab lag raha hai ki sach mein jannat mein hu'. She opened her eyes that were now full, blinked her tears off 'kyun' she said slowly, he smiled, he had missed her this kyun so terribly that the tear that was not seen in his eyes till now, appeared making them misty 'kuch miss kiya nahi kiya tumhare iss kyun ko bada miss kiya' she let out a laugh when the tears rolled down again. Her that small laugh felt like nectar that healed all his wounds healed all the pain. He wanted to see her, he wanted her in his amrs 'tumne miss kiya?' he knew the answer still he asked. she said no without saying and without turning around. 'meri taraf dekhogi nai?' she nodded a no again. 'her back still to him, the thin viel still between them. he knew why she wouldnt she was scared her heart would stop. 'arohi' he called her. his voice clearly said he cannot wait any longer. She looked at the moon one more time , Kitne pal hai kaate iss pal ke liye, dil ko kitna samjhaya iss milan ke liye. She turned around slowly still not looking at him. she slowly raised her eyes, they filled again,she blinked the veil of tears again, and behind another he was there. She saw his face through the meshed chunni.

Piya ki surat nazar jo aayi dhadkan jaisi ruk si gayi. lab the khamosh, batein ki ankhon ne ankhon se dil ne dil se. ankhon ne pucha 'sab khairiyat?' dil ne pucha 'saathi banoge?'. Ek dil ne bola naati charami, ek dil ne bola kubul hai. nikah vivah kuch bhi bolo hai toh matlab ek hi. bin sehra ka dulha bin ghunghat ke dulhan, bin baja ke shaadi. baraati lekin bahut the upar aasman mein kuch phul bhi barsaaye barish ke kuch bundon se.

As the vows were conveyed silently all the blood rushed to her face and she just dropped down. He held her quickly supporting her with his arm he removed the chunni that came in between. he patted her cheeks repeatedly 'arohi arohi' his feet went cold. He reached out for the glass of water and sprinkled some on her face. She opened her eyes. there was no barrier between them , not even a thin one. he smiled. she was still just looking at him. he made them sit and leaned back to the wall. He made her drink some water. Her dry throat and lips came to life. so did her eyes. whether she jumped first or he pulled first they were in a tight embrace. so tight that not even air could have gone through. 'tum aagaye ,tum aagaye arjun, tum aagaye' she said repeatedly. He hugged her tighter 'kaise nahi aata' he said,adding 'meri jaan jo yaha par thi' 'jo bejaan thi'. He relaxed the hug and made her face him 'kyunki woh mere paas thi'. she smiled. They stared at each other. 'utni door jaane ki kya zaroorat thi?' 'yaha rehta toh apne aapko nahi rok paata' he did not even bother to know how she knew where he was.'jhoot tum rok paate, lekin main nahi, isiliye tum gaye the na?'. may be but it did not matter anymore. 'mujhe pata nai laga ki tum kal raat ko hi aaye the' she said, 'aur mujhe laga tum mere paas aayi thi' 'tumhe bhi laga tha?' 'haan, ho bhi sakta hai, shayad mile hai, ek saal se jo mil rahe hain' she knew what he meant, all those dreams and intuitions that were so real 'tumhe bhi sapne aate the?' 'wahi toh mera sath diya hai ek saal se' 'phir kabhi aise chode ke mat jaana' she told him as a warning. 'kabhi nahi, ab toh khuda bhi hume judaa nahi kar sakta' he pulled her closer stroked her cheeks. they stared at each other for few seconds.

'kitni mohabbat karte ho mujhse?' she asked him. 'jitni tez tumhari dhadkan jaati hai utni' he replied. she was no less 'aur main jitni naram tumhaare aankh hai utni'. Her nose had gone red with all the emotions. He held it with his index and thumb and shook it 'jitni laal tumhaari naak hai utni' 'ouch' she hit him in the side. 'sss ouch' he said in pain. she saw his face and felt he was truly in pain 'kya hua ------- arjun? ------ kya hua' she looked down at his chest and below to the side on the cream shirt there was blood oozing out. she freaked out, eyes filled up instantly, 'yeh kya hai, arjun, kya hua' 'kuch nahi arohi, zara si chot hai, fikar mat karo' 'chot? kaha, kab aayi, phele kyun nahi bataya' she lifted his shirt to see the wound, and oozing out the bandage was some blood. she lowered the badage, 'itni badi chot?' he touched it, 'kuch nai theek ho jayega' 'arjun' she was still crying 'sshh' he wiped her tears. 'aur main yaha soch rahi hoon ki tum kyun nahi aa rahe ho, main bahut buri hoon na' he said she could never be 'ab tum mil gayi ho na, yeh toh do din mein gayab ho jayega' 'sach?' 'haan' . He pulled the bandage in place, some of the blood was on his thumb. He looked at arohi. she tried to wipe it with her pallu. He stopped her.

The intensity in his eyes shook her as he ran his thumb with his blood from her forehead through the arting in her hair. Before she could realise what happened he pulled her and kissed her., so strongly that she went reeling. it was not their lips but their souls that were mingling. He released her so she can catch a breath. His eyes shone like fire just like how her face was glowing. 'ab rok ke dikhao' he said in a challenging tone, she was not even trying to. They kissed again, this time longer. As if stopping the moon from not stealing their brightness a cloud covered it. Arjun remembered she had not eaten anything. he made her stand up 'chalo kuch khalo pehle' he said. 'nahi' 'apne hath se khilaunga' now she agreed 'tumne bhi kuch nahi khaya hoga' she asked 'tumhe chodkar?' It was true that their souls were one.

she wound her hands around his neck and said what she had said in their unconsicious state on the lake last night. As the same sense of warmth rushed through him, pulling her closer by the waist he replied what he had then and now, only they didnot remember anything about it. They said it again .


'Salaam Patidev'

'Namaste Begum'

Edited by kavyasam - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
1st very beautifully writen awesome
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Posted: 13 years ago
I don't know ...if I can feel the love soo strong. I don't know if it exists den I wana b the Lucky one to feel something like this.
Wht u have written is beautiful . It made a lone tear escape my eye. Made me smile. M dance with joy.
The update was enchanting in other wordss arohi n arjuns pain. Their love. Their heartbeats . I could
Feel it the way u expressed.
Im in love with the story.
N the last line...SALAM PATIDAVE , NAMESTE BEGUM.
Made me laugh Hartley. Update sooish mansi I desperate
Edited by mansi_47 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
You know what Kavya
I was disturb from the morning
N this update help me took out my all sorrow
I m crying with happiness with pain
Muje aesa lag raha he ki this all things repeat again
I can totally understand arohi 's heart beat when she saw Arjun after one year
Jab Sal bad milte he to lagta he ki jese Wakt Ruk sa Gaya he aor dhadkan badhne lagti he , we felt like impatience , n felt don't know after which moment our heart stop to beating n suddenly we see the sunshine for whom we waited for years n suddenly everything arroyos us light up , some music start to play inside , blood start to rushing inside hurry , n all world freeze that time , tears want to come out but eyes are busying to see the view for whom we waited long :)
Omg Kavya I can't describe any more ;)
You write it like toring heart ;)
Love you so much dear love you so much
I wish your ff come true in real life
I can't forget this ff in my life
Edited by cooljaya11 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
too good...
i dnt knw wat to say...
very beautiful...
the wonderful moments arjun-arohi shared on the terrace was so perfect...
their souls were truly one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Res..


OmG kavya..this was so gud..
How they look at each other thru the veil..how even the moon shone brighter..how their souls united...it was just b'ful..

N the last line..❤️
Edited by pari_15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
aaahhh - u updated kavya - iam so so nervous to read this update - i hope all is well all is well -
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Posted: 13 years ago
its the 100th page - congo congo 🥳

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