SS Take My Breath Away, C5, pg 21, (NOTE pg 25)

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P. K. Rathore

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: swasthi
Great update.

It is interesting how Ahem casts his line, hooks Gopi and draws her in to his world and under his wing.

Now Rashi has something up her sleeve. Looking forward to the next update, to find out what it is.

Thanks Swasthi, and yeah Ahem does have that affect over Gopi, although she hasn't realised it yet.

Rashi's brain is overactive lol, so half of the time nobody understands where's she's going, 😆.

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya
hey this is one of the most intresting stories i have ever read. I literally just read the entire thing and got so excited through all of it. I can't wait for your next update. I love this story. Great Job! 😊

Hi, thanks so much for being so eager, I'm glad you think that, and wow you read it all in one go - way to go - well if you're still around on this forum then I'm gonna be upating over the next day, and thanks again.

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: NRChau
So, all this time while I was humming 'huzoor aate aate bahut daer kar di', you were busy whipping up a tete-a-tete between Gopi n Ahem... that too in their night dress HAWWW :O ... did I read it right, Ahem in boxers ONLY... U such a tease, chica... BTW, you said it right sista, desi chaa is da bomb!! I roll my eyes whenever I hear ppl going on n on about their Earl Greys with lemon!!! Blahhh !!
And why oh why, men are so friggin double standard??? If a girl gives in little too easy, she is a tart... n if she doesn't then she is a marriage material ONCE they have chased all the tarts and had good time!! DUH!!! Anyhoo, missed you n your writing so much but my damn schedule has been keeping me away from IF :-(!! No fair!!
One last thing, tell Gopi she is still very lovable... he just wasnt the right guy :-) .. n ask her to keep her heart open n love will find its way in... tell her she better listen to desi kudi :-)

My Desii Girl!!!

I've missed you loads! My phone is messed up since a week and a half, I'm dying without it but I don't have a choice, as soon as it's sorted I'll text you 😉.

Haha I thought you'd get excited to imagine Ahem in his boxers lool, and I know, desi chaiii is da lick, Earl Grey wit a drop a of lemon - lmfao - yeah right.

That's how this world runs babe, 'this is a man's world" (I feel so like singing it right now lol) and that's how it works, I'm serious guys really do differentiate like that, I see it all the time! So it's not to be taken by surprise but rather with a pinch of salt lol. Anyways right now I'm missing you sooo much, but kaam comes first so I won't argue.

Don't worry your message will reach Gopi promptly and she will give her heart to the right guy (you know that) but meanwhile she needs to explore but desi kudi's advice will follow on shortly, I promise. 😉

Take care babe,

Luv u loads,

mwah,

xxx

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: rsk16
really loved it.loved the gopi-aham convo.
loved each n every word of it.
plz update soon.

Thanks a lot hun, 😊

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P. K. Rathore

@tinkerbe11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

NOTE:

At Last - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/64505397

Show me some love!

Guys it's a complete story and it's 'short' lol 😆, so would love it if you guys could check it out and hit the like button too 😳, comments will defo be fab because this is the first time I've tried something like this.

It's a story based on Khushal Tandon and Kritka Kamra, (according to competition rules only specific couples were allowed to be chosen).