MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 14

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arre qah maan.us changing... good..
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so now maan started being some human ..thanks to geet

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Juz rd all 3 prts...
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*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 12

ADITYA wnt nd analyise d whole sit.den he came bak2Maan nd told hm evry deatail.
ADITYA:Yuvraj maine us rakshas ko dekh liya hai wo is gufa k pachimi chor(west side) pe so raha hai.yaha waha sb jagh manav haddiya bekhri padi hai bas.

MAAN:thek hai Aditya tm taiyar ho?(Aditya nodded yes)to chale fir?

Both secreatly went inside without makin any noise.bt d smell of deir bodies alert Jhingara nd he get up. He is a very huge in size nd horriable. He had only one big eye nd horn on hs large 4head. Hs bumped bak hav many throns. Maan nd Aditya tightly hold deir swords coz he attacks on both. Although he is vry huge,still he moves rely fast. Aditya nd Maan faced hard time wid dis demon den suddnly Aditya jumped nd hit hs horn. Demon cried in pain nd Maan found d way 2 ovrpowerd hm. Maan jumped nd cut his horn wid hs sword. Demon drenched in hs own blood. He cgroaned loud nd fall on ground, r wriigle in pain 4 few momnt nd died soon. Both hug in rejoice bt leave soon.

ADITYA:bahut badia.waise tume kaise pta chala wo aise hi marega

MAAN:baut aasan tha humara hr waar beasr ho raha tha tabi maine dekha jb tumne uske seeng(horn)pe war kiya to wo tilmila utha.bs usi samy main smjh gya ki uski jan us seeng me hai.

ADITYA:chale ab?

Both wnt 2 tribal people nd informed dem abot hs death. All tribal people ovrwhelmed nd start dancing in happiness.

T.HEAD:ap logo ka jitna dhanywad du kam hai aap logo ne wo kr diya jo or koi b nai kr paya.hum to umeed hi kho baithe the ki kabi us shaitan se mukti milegi.ab badle me hm b apke lie kuch krna chahte hai.kuch b aisa taki hm b ap logo k kaam aa sake.

MAAN:nai hme kuch nai chahiye.darhasal hme arnak k jngle jana hai swrnkamal ko dhundhne.

T.HEAD:kya kaha apne Arnak k jungle.dekhiye maaf keejiye arnak koi jungle nai nai hai.

ADITYA:to kyta hai firr?

T.HEAD:wo 1 nadi hai jo yaha se 10kos ki duri pe hai.usi ki gehriyo me ugta hai swarnkamal.lekin 1badha hai?

MAAN:kaisi badha?

T.HEAD:us nadi ka pani din hote hi tejab bann jata hai.usme koi b cheez gal jati hai.

MAAN:koi b badha mere irado ko pura krne se nai rok skti.apki jaankari ka shukriya.

T.Head:rukiye Yuvraj ye beej rakh leejiye.

MAAN:Ye kisliye.

T.Head:jab aap us nadi me raat ko utrenge to apko bahut gehrio tak jana padega,to apko saans lene me takleef hogi.lekin in beejo ko khane k baad aap andr b aise hi saans le payenge jaise dharti pe le pate hai.

MAAN:shukriya.ab hume chlna chaiye.

Both tuk d road 2 deir destination. 1 whole dy passed nd finally dey reached 2 d Arnak river. It ws a day time so both wait 4 sun set.

ADITYA:yuvraj hume raat hone ka intezar krna hoga.

MAAN:hmm.

Both waits nd as sun set both dive inside nd start searching d swarnkamal,bt as easy it seems it was nt. Coz whole river was filled with long grass nd many weird species were dere who bcom obstruct in deir way. Both fight wid evry1. Bcoz of dis dier time waste alots.

ADITYA:yuvraj tm jao or swarnkamal dhoondho insabko main sambhalta hu.

MAAN:nai Aditya akele ye sab baut zada hai.

ADITYA:tm meri chinta mat kro or Geetakshi ka socho uski jeevan mujhse kai adhik anmol hai.jao.

MAAN go deepr nd Aditya fought wid d wierd luking fishes+ raptiles. Finally he found d bushes in deep core of river,where golden lotus grow. He wnt nd grabbed 1.he kept it safly nd swimmed 2 Aditya.

MAAN:Aditya chhodo in sbko or steh ki or chalo mujhe swarnkamal mil gya hai.

Aditya nodded yes nd strt swimming upwrds. Bt suddnly Maan's leg trapped in sm long leafs nd he cnt able 2swim nymor. Slowly 2 sun strt rising.

ADITYA:Maan jaldi surudye hone wala hai.

MAAN:Aditya ye lataye mujhe chhod nai rai hai.tm ye swarnkamal lo or bahar chale jao.

ADITYA:nai maha guru ne tumahari jimmedari mujhe di hai tumhare prano ki raksha mujhe hr hal me krni hi hai or waise b ye ldai tumari hai meri nai.jayenge to sath or marenge to sath.

Aditya immediatelt truned hslf in a swordfish who hv a shrp nose like sm sword.he cuts all d barroers around hs legs. Wen he freed both went up nd cm out frm d river. As both cm out sun rises at d same momnt nd river's water again turned in2 a acid.
Both jumpd in rejoice.

ADITYA:hmne ye pariksha par kr li.

MAAN:ab hume jaldi se ashram jana chahiye.

Both ride deir horses at full speed nd aftr 2dys both reached 2 ashram again. Both bowed in front of mahaguru.Maan prsent swarnkamal 2hm.

MAAN:mahaguru jo apne kaha tha main le aaya hu ab to Geetakshi bach jayegi na.

MAHAGURU:avashye bach jayegi yadi tm baki ki 3 cheeze b samy rehte le aaye to.

MAAN:aap mujhe batayie ab or kya lana hai or kaha se? Geetakshi ki jaan bachane k liye mujhe jo b krna padega main karunga.

MAHAGURU:uttum ati uttam yahi hosla hona chahiye 1 yodha me. Yuvraj ab aap thoda vishram(rest) kr leejiye fir main apko aage ki rah ka margdarshan karunga.

MAAN:nai mahaguru ab main vishram usi dinn karunga jiss dinn meri Geetakshi aankhe kholegi.aap bs mujhe itna bta deejiye ki mujhe krna kya hai...



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MAHAGURU:kintu Yuvraj kuch aram krna aavshyak hai.

MAAN:maine kaha na aap jaldi bataye ki mujhe kya karna hai.

MAHAGURU:to suniye ab apko pachim ki roshni lani hai or ye uska maan chitr.

Maan cnfused how he can caught light.

MAAN:lekin mahaguru main roshni ko kaise pakad skta hu?

MAHAGURU:wo to ab tume sochna hai.

MAAN:thek hai lekin jane se pehle main Ek baar Geeakshi ko dekhna chahta hu.

MAHAGURU:kyu vats humari seva par vishwas nahi hai.

MAAN:wo baat nahi hai bs main use dekhna chahta hu.yadi apko koi apatti na ho to.

MAHAGURU:theek hai aap jaiye tb tak main aap logo k nikalne ki vayvastha krwata hu.

MAAN ran 2 d room in whch she laid like a dead body no more sign of life in her. He sat near her and saw her bluish face coz of d effect of posion running wid her blood. He cant see her in pain. He raised his sinful hand to touch her,but dont know what happened he stops immediately.

MAAN:mujhe maaf kar do Geetakshi aaj tumhari is halat ka zimmedar sirf main hu yadi us dinn maine tumhare sath wo sab na kiya hota to tumhari halat aaj ye na hoti. Lekin tum bilkul b mat ghbrana main vachan deta hu bhale hi meri jaan b kyu na chali jaye main tumhe kuchh nahi hone dunga tuhare ilaz k liye jo b mujhe karna pade main karunga or bahut zald tum pehle ki tarah ho jaogi waise hi muskuraogi waise hi jindagi jeeogi jaise tum jeena chahti ho.

Meanwhile Aditya came inside wid some saint girl.

Girl:yuvraj ji apni bah dikhaiye main ispe patti band deti hu.nahi to ghav or gehra ho jayega.

She was a small grl around 10 year old.

MAAN:aap bandegi patti.apko aata hai ye sab upchar krna?kya naam hai apka?

Suknya:mera naam suknya hai or main guru Prashant k sath jungle ki vanaspatio(plants) k bare me seekhti hu isliye mujhe pata hai konsi aushadhi(medi) se konsa upchar hota hai.

She bandaged his wound. Maan sw he lovingly. He caress hr head.

MAAN:ap to bahut samjhdar or zimmedar hai.mera ek kaam krogi?(she nodded yes) jab main yaha se jaunga na tab tume apni didi ka dhyan rakhna hoga. Ye dekho Ye Geetakshi hai(he showed hr ) ye aswasth(ill) hai to inka b dhyan rakhogi na.kyunki tum bahut achhe se dawa k bare me janti ho bolo rakhogi na firr main b nishchint(carefree) ho jaunga.

Sukanya nodded yes nd he smiled.

SUKANYA:ap jao main Geetakshi didi ka pura dhyan rakhungi.

ADITYA:chale yuvraj.

MAAN:chalo.

Both wnt not nd atake permissin from Mahaguru. He blessed both. Both sat on deir horses nd leave d ashram.

Guru Sanatan:Mahaguru apko kya lagta hai wo kr payega.

MAHAGURU:samaye bada balwan hai Guru Sanatan. Pehli pariksha main Maan safal hue hai or aage bhi ho aisi hume aasha hai...hawwyie kya rukh legi ye to kewal wo hi janti hai...

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