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Posted: 12 years ago
GEET WAS UPSET AND MAAN DID NOT LIKE IT
SO THEY ARE GOING ON A LONG DRIVE
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Posted: 12 years ago


Ana superb update .

Maan & Geet are now coming closer 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
dear...😃
4 keep PMing me dear..😊..
n me not comment ...actually my net crused down .😭..
but now me cheack all updates ...me just dear..😛.
4 ur hard work.👏..
the job up dear..Clap..





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Posted: 12 years ago


THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL YOUR LIKES AND COMMENTS




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Maan: agar tum aise hi baite rahogi to we cannot go……… But I have no problem if you also want to sit like this………

Geet immediately gets up and goes away outside…….. Maan takes the car keys and goes out and sees Geet standing near the car……….

Maan whispers in her ears: Chale…………

Geet: Ha………

Geet was totally enjoying the drive and would look to Maan with corner of her eyes……. Maan would look at her and she would just turn her face…. Maan gave a smirk smile on his face……… No one was talking to each other……. They were just feeling each other breath……. Maan finally broke the silence after sometime………….

Maan: Geet…….

Geet: ha……

Maan: Are you enjoying…….

Geet: Ha this is so beautiful…… I never enjoyed any long drive……..

Maan stopped the car at a very beautiful place…..

Geet came out of the car and just jumped: Wow Maan this is so beautiful…….

She in her excitement without realizing just hugs him…….

Maan was shocked to Geet's instant reaction……… Maan hug her in return…….. and Geet was getting lost in the aroma of Maan………. She was feeling the warmth of him………….

The trance was broken by the ring of the phone….. Geet got shy and just moved away from there but before she could go far Maan hold her by the waist ……….

Geet: Please Maan……..

Maan: What???

Geet: Everyone is looking us please chodiye na…….

Maan: Why should I leave??? I am holding my wife not someone else and by the way why are you telling me to leave when you were hugging me I never told you to leave me……… (He whispered it with a smile on his face)………

The phone ring increased and Maan took the phone but still holding Geet….. Looking at the caller the expression on Maan's face changed…….. Geet noticed the change in Maan's face……..

Maan: hey Hiii darling how are you????

Geet stiffened and moved away from the grip of Maan and was looking at the Maan with curiosity….. Maan just gave a smile to Geet……

Maan: No darling I cannot come now…. I will surely come tomorrow…….

Maan was enjoying the plight on Geet's face…………

Maan was still on the phone and was talking: Darling tell me how is my sweetheart ……… Ok dear will see you………..

Maan kept the phone and looked at Geet……. The expression on Geet's face can clearly say that many question was going on in her mind……..

Maan: Geet where are you lost????

Geet: Yeh Chudail kaun hai????

Maan looked here and there and found no one as everyone had gone away from there……: Kaun Chudail???? There is no one here…………

Geet: Don't be so innocent Mr. Khurana……. To whom were you talking so sweetly………. That too at this hour……..

Maan looked at her with smirk smile: Why??? Are you jealous………….

Geet: No why should I???

Maan: But from your face it is clear that you are jealous……….

Geet (angry): I am not………..

Maan was actually enjoying teasing Geet…….. Geet was about to move but Maan held her wrist and brought near her………

Geet: Leave me…….

Maan: Geet kya hua why are you so much angry??? Let us go and sit on the bench see the breeze is also so nice………

Geet: I want to go home……….

Maan got alarmed with sudden change in her behavior……. : Geet…….

Geet: Please Maan I want to go home…… I think you must want to go somewhere……

Maan hold her tight and looked in her eyes…. There were tears in them which could not be taken by him…………. : Geet what are you saying??? Mai to tumhe bus ched raha tha……… What happen to you suddenly……..

Geet: To phir batate kyu nahi nahi ki whom were you talking so sweetly……..

Maan: Geet………. Tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa kuch nahi hai………..

Geet(in angry tone): Then why can't you tell the name of your darling??? What is there to hide it…………. It was my mistake that I started trusting you….. You can never change………

Maan felt that the whole world has fallen……… : Geet………..

Geet went away from there and sat in the car…………. Maan was totally lost……. Still thinking that he has still not able to make trust in her…………… What is she thinking about him????...

Maan half heartedly went and sat in the car and looked at Geet who had tears in her eyes and was looking outside the window………

Maan tried to speak to Geet but Geet just closed her eyes………..

Maan was about to start the car when his phone rang again………

Maan: What??? I am coming…… Nothing will happen to sweet heart just don't worry………

Geet looked at him but now Maan just started the car with full speed….. Geet noticed that they are not going at the direction of their home…….

Geet: Where are we going??? I said I want to go home………

Maan did not answer and was driving the car with full speed……….

Geet: Maann………

Maan reached the place and rushed out of the car without even looking at Geet……. Geet was fuming in anger as to how could Maan do this to her……..

Geet went behind him and entered the open door and was just shocked to see the things in front of her……… She just could not believe her eyes………. The tears were just flowing nonstop from her eyes………….

She was staring at the all of them when she felt someone's hand on her shoulder………..

You are Geet right…….. Come in my daughter: said someone……….

Geet just kept looking at her………..

Lady: Oh I know you don't know me but I know you very well……… I am Savita and she is my granddaughter Rupa……….

Looking at Rupa it felt like she must be around 15 years old……….

Maan: Darling……. I think sweetheart is fine now………. I have called the doctor he must be coming……….

Savita: Maan beta….. thank you very much……… Savitri and Yash are also on their way……… I got so panicked with this that I gave them also a call………

Maan: Please don't say that………. You know very well that I don't like you saying all this too me………

By that time Doctor also came along with Yash and Savitri…… Infact they picked up the doctor on the way……… Geet was still lost at what is happening…….. But she was feeling disgusting at herself of what she said to Maan………. She desperately want to talk to him and say sorry and here Maan was avoiding Geet completely………

Doctor did the checking and said that Rupa is completely fine now……. She just need rest and have given some medicine also……….. There is nothing to worry about………..

All thanked the doctor……..

Savitri went and sat beside Savita while Maan and Yash was sitting beside Rupa who was sleeping…….

Savitri: Aunty why did Rupa react so badly………

Savita: She was sleeping peacefully and she got up with a scream remembering her parents……….

Geet was sitting beside them…….

Savitri: Aunty she is Geet……..

Savita: Maan's Geet hai na………

Savitri just gave a smile to her………: Geet beta she is Savita Aunty…….. Maan's dadi and she were very good friends…….Maan and Yash are very close to her and Rupa they call her as Darling and to Rupa as sweetheart……… Rupa's father died by heart attack and her mother just could not take it and after some month she also died……. That time Rupa was only 10 years old……. And her Dadi that is Savita Aunty took care of her………… After the death of her parents Savita Aunty shifted permanently from America to India and we been nearby we use to frequently visit here……… Rupa became very close to Maan and Yash and they both treated her like sister………….. and Rupa would demand all sort of things from both of them and they would fulfill all her demand……….

Geet: But what has happen to Rupa……….

Savita: Geet beta……. Rupa could never forget her parents and sometime she just panics remembering them…….. Somewhere in her mind she has not able to forget that her parents are not there………. Otherwise she is always a normal girl……… Seeing her panic state I just could not control and call everyone for help……….

Savita start crying saying this………

Geet: Dadi please……… Savita looks at her and Geet continuous saying: I can call you dadi na……..

Savita just nods her head…….

Geet gets up from there and start walking to Rupa's room where Maan and Yash were sitting along her side……..

Maan does not even look at Geet…….. Geet feels bad on herself for doubting Maan……

Maan: Yash you take Mom and Geet along with you….. I will stay here with Savita Dadi………..

Yash: Ji……..

Geet: Maan……

Maan: Yash it is already late……. I think you all should leave now………

Maan does not answer or look at Geet at all…………..

Yash realizes the tension between the two…………

Yash: Any problem……….

Geet keeps on looking at Maan with teary eyes……… She so much wants to talk to Maan and say him sorry but Maan just kept on avoiding her…….

This time Maan had really hurted with what Geet said……… He was trying his best to make trust in Geet's heart but again failed……… He was thinking that he should have told this thing to Geet so this misunderstanding would have not occurred only and on the other side Geet was thinking that because of her accusation Maan is angry……….. She will say sorry to him………..

Initially Geet refused to go and said she will also stay with Maan at their place but Savita Dadi said that now that everything is fine even Maan need not stay there……… They all need to go home……. After much of argument Savitri said that I will stay with aunty and Rupa as it is been a while that she stayed with them so no more argument and she will stay and all three go home……… Maan just avoided Geet………… Yash tried asking them but none spoke about it…….. Yash could easily see that something has gone wrong………

At reaching home Maan went directly to his room and got freshen up and slept on his side of the bed…… Geet came to their room and saw Maan sleeping…. Geet so much wanted to talk but only had tears in her eyes……

Geet (self talk): Maan I am sorry…….. I know that you are awake……. But main aapko mana lungi kal subha…… I am sorry that I did not trust you…….

She tried to close her eyes but sleep was far from both of them…….. They both were just lost in their thought……….


Precap: Geet (crying): Maan kaha gaye……..










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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part
hope geet able to manofy maan soon and we get to see happy maneet
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor maan..everything was on right track and this twist..very nice update.pls cont soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
maaneet spending time wid each other
feeling bad for maan
geet should not say those things to maan
he is changibg for geet
nd wht result he is getting
loved it
nd maan avoidibg geet
i will say she desrrves dis...
Precap seems ibteresting
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update
feeling bad for Maan, he has changed himself completly for her and she still doubted him...
Now, waiting to see how she will manofy hin
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan ka gussa bhi too much
nd geet is stpd

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