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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is my first os on kriyansh it have two parts the second one will be posted till evening
SEE YOU AGAIN?
KRIYA'S POV
I can't wait for today's day to start. First shopping with my sis wow. After 10 years I wish mom dad ka kabhi diavorse hi nahi hua hota anyway now we are a happy family and the most awesome thing is that I can dance its like a dream come true I wish this is not a dream. I asked my sis sitting beside me in the car to pinch me
kr- Sharon pinch me
Sh- what
kr- just pinch me
she pinched me very hard on my hand
kr- ouch that hurts
sh- c'mon kria agar tum aise kam kane ke liye bolu gi toh mai karungi na afterall u r my elder sis
kr- ya ya chal pehle books lene chalte hain phir shopping karenge
sh- yes mam 'kaka pehle book shop chalo'
we entered the shop
sharon –I will buy the books you go check out the novels
kr- k
after 5 minutes I returned I saw Sharon fighting with the shop owner no she was having problem making him understand what she is saying. She must be damm irritated I thought
I was going to help her when a cute, handsome guy must be of our age with unique hairstyle wearing a sweatshirt and faded jeans came his smile is so mesmerizing hayee wait what am I thinking stop kria
Kr-hey shar what happened
Sh – this Buddha I tell u
Kr- Sharon
Sh- sorry woh uncle ko sunne mei problem mai unko books keh rahi thi aur wo looks keh rahe
I looked at that guy he was trying hard to hide his laugh even I was
Boy- no worries tell me wat u want
Sh- u knw very well
B – ok chalo
Sharon knows him then why she is not introducing us urggg this guy will me mad
We bought our books shorn was calling the driver from past 10mins but he was not picking
Sh- ab kya karein
B – don't worry I will help
He signelled the guard to help us even he came picked some books for us how sweet
Boy's pov
Who is this girl with Sharon why she is telling me my head was filled with these type of questions. She is so beautiful
I looked at Sharon with questioning eyes she mouthed a later
That girl was looking at us confused even Sharon mouthed a later to her
They left while I was walking back something caught my eye it was a friendship band with kriya written over it with glitters I picked that up. After a bit of flashbacks I remembered this is the same band that I gave to cutie pie when she was leaving. OMG Sharon u r so dead
Kria's pov
( at night )m cutting all the other stuff
I don't know why but I can't stop thinking about that guy
Kria stop ok abhi so ja kal school ka first day hai aur Sharon neb hi kaha wo kal break tak mujhe bata degi

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PPS for my ff readers i won't update till 25 th september because exams r coming

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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing...
i guess tht guy is rey...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awwiiieee im oving it...

kk so now just change it into ss ...kk

love u for this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Krisha sisters 😛

very well written 😊

I guess ye swayam hoga . . . . . Isne ye band kriya ko 10 yrs pehle hi diya hoga . . . . . 😉

post next part soon 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: deetha

awwiiieee im oving it...

kk so now just change it into ss ...kk

love u for this

thanx i was thinking of changing it in ss
but maybe after exams
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start...loved it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing start...

Do update soon...

Thanx fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry for late update 😔
PART-2
NEXT DAY
kriya was shouting from her room. her room had become a mess now
finally sharon came to her room
sh - OMG kria yeh tumne kya kiya your room room nahi its a mess ya mess
kr- sharon bakwass band kar tune mera lucky band dekha
sh- arre woh to tune kal dala tha
kr- ab nahi hai she was on the verge to cry
sh- mall mein bhi nahi tha pukka book store mei giraya hoga tune
kr- chal na lene chalte hain plzz
sh- dekh kria der ho jayegi hume school bhi jana hai aake pukka lene chalenge
kria just nodded like a 5 year old kid
sh- ab jaldi ready ho ja late nahi hona u have 15 mins
kria ran to washroom she took a quick shawer and got ready she ran to dinning table
sh- u are exactly 1 min late
kr- accha
sh- ji han
kr- teri toh
and they started chasing each other
smriti- stop u both bacche ho kya aise khel rahe ho
sh- mom lecture baad mei dena hume der ho rahi hai
mom- accha but breakfast
kr- voh actually apki daant se pet bhar gaya
she said and picked her bag and ran towards car after that luked at her mom and towards gate and also ran understaning what kria did
they reached school
they entered their class (ps they r in 12 standard)
kriya's pov
my first day at school wow a bit nervous but ok i wish i could see that guy again
kria tu phir shuru ho gai bilkul jhalli hai chup chap baith aur padh
i was drinking water when i saw that guy entering the class WTH i was about to spit out but i gulped it down
BOY-hi shar
sh-hey rey(so no more suspense that guy is rey)
he a smiled at me even i smiled drooling on him.
he took the seat behind me. it felt like the day just flew away we were having half time
~~~~~~~~~~POV ends~~~~~~~~~
rey called sharon
sh- kria u go to canteen i'll come
kr-k.
rey- shar can u do me a favour
sh- arre puchne ki kya baat hai bol na tu mera chuddy buddy hai hahaha
rey- mazak nahi i m serious
u just don't tell her ki mei mei hoon i bet usse mera pura naam yaad nahi hai
sh-i have no probs but how do u know
rey- idiot jab tune mujhe hi rey kaha tha tab mujhe pata chala ki usse mera real name nahi yaad ok silly
sh-ya ok golu but
rey- but swayum cantreen mai hi hume milega
and agar phir se golu bola na toh mei swayum ko bata dunga samjhi
sh- yes sir shall we move now
rey- ya why not
they went to canteen. they saw kria sitting alone so they called her and introduced to everyone
simmi,rinni, amar, bharat, vishakha , neha, vicky ,nilesh
sh- so ye hai teddy(swayum glared at sh) i mean swayum
swayum hugged kria and kria also hugged him
sh- so last but not the least yeh hai reyaansh singhania
kr-hi
rey-hi
they all chit chatted for sometime and the bell rang
rey was getting restless because he had given kria god knows how many hints but she was not recognizing him
so while going kria was talking to sharon when someone pulled her inside fire exit
sharon smiled and went
FIRE EXIT
kriya was about to shout when she saw reyb and they share an eye lock with ohooo tune BM
KR- rey aap yeh kya mujhe fire exit mei kyun kheencha
rey-voh mujhe tumse baat...
kr- kya baat aap mujhse bahar baat bhi toh kar sakte the
rey put his hand oh her mouth and said
cutie pie mujhe bhool gayi
kr-ummm she said eyeing his hand
rey-sorry
kr- tum shivu ho na par tum shivu kaise ho sakte ho vo toh us chala gaya tha
rey hit his head with his hand
rey- baatcutter
kria's eyes widened with shock
kr-g..golu
rey- thank god
kria pulled rey in a tight hug she hugged him as if he is her life rey also resonded the hug
but both were feeling something different
they pulled back after some time
kriya looked at rey with watery eyes
kr- i m sorry twice
rey- twice kyun
kr- ek toh mine tumhe pehchana nahi aur doosra voh mere se tumhara band kho gaya maine tumhe promise kiya tha par *sobs* mere se voh kho gaya *sobs* sorry
re- ismei rone ki kya baat hai yeh dekho
he pulled out a band from his pocket and give it to kria
a wide smile spread on kria's face
kr- yeh apko kahan se mila
re- voh kal tumne shop pe gira dia tha toh mujhe mil gaya
chuck it mujhe toh yeh sochke hairani ho rahi hai ki tumhe us band ke bare mei 10 saal ke baad bhi yaad hai
kr- mai kabhi bhooli hi nahi
(there, it goes again LLHH )
FLASHBACK
kriya, sharon, swayum and rey are best friends
their parents are also best friend.so they meet mostly every weekend as their parents always spend weekend together.
but when they all were 7 krisha's parents got diavorced. when all the parents came to know they tried very hard to manofy them but they were they. it was kriyansh last meeting
rey pulled kria in the garden
re- katti tu mujhe chod ke jaa rahi hai na ja mai tujhse baat nahi karunga
poor kriya started crying
rey- arre ro mat baatcutter
kr- pehle sweetu,aur ab tum bhi sabse accha teddy hai tum gande
rey- accha sholly ye dekh mei tere liye kya laya
kr- kya
rey- yeh le friend ship band hai isse apne paas rakhna hamesha ok mujhe bhulna mat
kr- mai tumhe kahi bhul hi nahi sakti aur isse mei hamesha apne paas rakhungi
bye maa bula rahi hai
krisha's mom cicked pic of all the 4 kids
FLASHBACK OVER
re- chal chaltei hain class ke liye bahout late ho gaye
kr- nahi pehle promise karo tum aur teddy matlab swayum humare ghar chaloge
re- accha baba ab chalein
later in evening
at krisha's home
all 4 were watching movie,playing and having fun
sh- swayum come hum kuch khane ke liye leke aate hain
kr- haan mere liye choclate icecram
rey- me too
sw- mere liye bhi
sh- swayum chal
they left
kr- golu
rey glared at kria
kr- sorry rey mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai
re- haan bolo
kr- i missed u
re- i missed u more
they share a hug
suddenly *click* *click*
sw- kitne cute lag rahe ho dono mai ye photo fb pe post karunga
kr- swayum ke bacche teri toh
she throwed a pillow swayum moved aside and it hit sharon
they started a pillow fight
after half an hour they got tired and started rofling
all sat on bed
smriti- omg tum logon ne kamre ki kya halat bana ke rakhi hai 5 minute mei sab saaf karo
ss+kr- rani lakshmi bai
sm- kya bola
kr- kuch nahi
sm left
all again started roflin

THE END
SO finished finally
do like and review
do tell me if u want me to change it into ss
depend on the comments
my other work
ff- forever and always










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Posted: 13 years ago
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CH-1

love it
i think that guy is rey
anyways update soon

CH-2
awee finally kriya recognize rey
that he is her golu
pls pls pls change it into ss
i would love to read
Edited by -swaron- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...dear..
Pls change it to ss...
Pleash..

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