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Posted: 12 years ago
lovelyyy...
cute part..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update...
loved maneet moments..
hope maan gets well soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh lovely update 😊
i just hope that maan survives and will be hale and healthy with geet 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear..keep up the good work...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 12 years ago
if she cries 4 his fever what will she do when she will cum 2 know about his disease
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Posted: 12 years ago


PART-19

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Maan felt happy to see geet like this..she never opened up herself to anyone except him,pinky n her bhai n today she is feeling comfortable with dev.moreover she is giggling,laughing n he could see his old geet whom he met for the first time..



Geet is busy in laughing holding her stomach on some joke played by dev n didn't notice maan..but dev did n smiled at him…maan mouthed thanku to dev for making her smile for bringing his bubbly geet back.."lo ur maan is back bhabi..seems he cant stay away for a second from u"dev teased geet for which she blushed n passed a smile to maan..



Later maaneet got ready n left to handa haveli…


In handa mansion,pammi came down from upstairs holding her heavy head due to drink she had last night at the same time shouting nakul's name…"ofooo where this bloody idiot is…nakul kaha mar gaye tum".she reached living room n found mohinder there li'l tensed…she then saw drink glasses,plates are scattered over there as it is they left them in last night party…"what the hell is this???nakul nakul"she screamed out his name…


Mohinder:why are u shouting on him…don't u know he left to his village yesterday evening…


"oh!!!toh kya??o idiot geet kaha hai???abhi tak so rahi hai??is she thinking that she is princess of this mansion..who'll clean all this mess now…


Mohinder gave a sarcastical smile.."wah pammi wah!!u don't even know that geet is not there in this house since yesterday night..aur pata hota bhi kese??u are busy in ur world n don't even want to care whether she is alive or dead.."


"what???she is not there???matlab kya hai???how dare she is to go like this..i warned her not to step out but still…kahi…kahi o bhag toh nahi gayi is ghar se…if she did that then I swear I wont leave her alive…agar iski wajah se khurana's project chut gayi toh…"she said gritting her teeth..

Mohinder felt disgusted seeing this lady.."daro mat…meri geet aisa kabhi nahi karegi..wo maan ke saath hai"

Pammi:oh toh yaha sab kaam chod kar ghoomne gayi hai o ladki…mr.khurana supported her yesterday n today she is flying in air…aane do use….n she turned to find geet at door step down casting her eyes n trembling in fear….

Maaneet reached handa haveli n about to enter inside…meanwhile maan got a call from his doctor..he cant speak infront of her so he asked geet to move n attended the call..geet entered the house n rooted to spot when she heard pammi shouting…


Pammi glared at geet whose eyes were already filled..she clutched her dupatta in fear…"oh agayi maha rani…welcome ma'm welcome"paami spoke sarcastically…geet didn't move an inch from her place..she don't have any idea of what she'll do now..in her fear she forgot that maan is also with her…"yaha aao"she screamed loudly which made geet gasp in fear…she slowly slowly reached her n all the while her gaze is fixed to floor as she is scared to look in to devil's eyes who always search chances to abuse her…


"so how was ur night with mr.khurana…enjoyed??"she asked smirking at her..geet lit up her head looking at her in digust….how can this lady stoop so low..she knows that pammi is evil women n can go to any extent to abuse her n whatever she said now rose her anger.geet gave her a disgusting look which angered pammi.."I said u not to step out…right!!"she shouted on geet pulling her arm harshly…"wo…mein…ahhh"when geet was answering her she pressed geet's delicate arm peircing her nails in to her skin which made her wince in pain.."mere mana karne ke baad bhi tum bahar nikli….tumhari itni himmat.." n she raised her hand to slap geet..before her hand could reach further a strong hand held pammi's hand…..


It's none other than maan who entered the house n saw pammi hurting his geet..he fumed in anger..he tightedned his fist n walked to her n held her hand before she could slap his geet..his eyes are spitting fire as if indicating pammi that he'll burn her alive…


Pammi is shocked to see maan there..she gulped saliva with that murderous glare of maan…maan harshly snapped away her hand..he walked a step back n pulled in to him by holding her waist…pammi is quick enough to change her devil gestures n smiled like a fool.."ha ha…(pretends to smile) wo maan beta iam just checking whether my beti is fine…she was saying that she was with u.."

Maan held geet more tight in his embrace as if indicating pammi that she cant even touch her shadow when he is with her…she have to face maan singh khurana to reach his geet n wont let anyone NOT ANYONE to hurt his geet…

Maan looked at pammi shoting her murderous glares n smiring at her scared face.."kyun?aapko koi problem hai???geet meri hone wali biwi hai..so I think there is no problem if she is with me…right MOM(stresses but he uttered these words in digust)thinking how can she say herself as mother to geet n again behaves this way…

Pammi nodded with glare following by a pretending smile…"good!!"he turned to geet who is looking at him lovingly.."jaan.. andhar chale.."he said loudly so that pammi could hear it…geet nodded with a smile…





Pammi couldn't belive her ears..she thought maaneet are not happy with this alliance but what's this??he just said jaan..omg!!"karlo mr.khurana karlo jitna mera apman karna hai karlo…iam silent becoz of that project..bas ek baar mere haat lagne do.."she smiled evily….



Maan still held her in his embrace as they stepped in to geet's room but geet is lost some where…she downcasted her eye lids while holding maan's hand tight.."geet…"maan called her n turned her to him to face him…geet who was controlling her tears hugged maan tight n cried her heart out…maan knew the reason for her tears…it's none other than pammi n her abusings which made her cry…he kept caressing her hair hugging her tight to pacify her…





"maan….(sob) kyun wo(sob)kyun karti hai wo mere saath aisa..mein ne kya bigada tha uska...(sob)aise kese baat kar sakthi hai mujse"geet spoke in between her sobs… she is not her mom but geet always respected her n loved her as her mom but her rude behaviour always hurts her…


"shhh…chup ho jao jaan..chup hojao.."maan said caressing her hair…


Geet:maan... kyun wo hamesha muje rulati rehti hai…she sobbed again…


Maan broke the hug n wiped her tears..he held her face in his palms caressing her cheek.."becoz u give them chance to do so…"geet looked at him.."ha geet she'll continue to hurt u,humilate u,make u cry as long as she have chance with her n ur giving that chance to her…"


Maan:geet ek baat yaad rakhna..jab tak tum sehti rahogi tab tak log tumhe hurt karthe rahenge tumhari innocence ka faida utathe rahenge…problems se bhaagne se kuch nahi hoga geet….u should face them bravely n one day ur problems ,ur difficulties run away from u"






Maan took her hands in his n continued.."geet promise me…aaj ke baad tum kabhi kamzoor nahi padogi..u'll face every obstacle bravely…"..geet felt very happy to have maan in her life..the one who stands for her,the one who understands her more than herself..the one who stands with her as her saviour…she held his hand which was holding her's n nodded with a smile..she hugged him again…maan too hugged her tight n kissed on her forhead..geet placed her head oh his chest still hugging him n spoke."ha maan mein waada karthi but.."she broke the hug n looked at him holding his hand on her's..


"waada kijiye ki aap hamesha mere saath doge…mere saath rahenge..aap meri himmat ho aur jab aap mere saath hai muje kisi se dar nahi lagtha..waada kijiye maan ki aap hamesha mere saath rahenge"she looked in to his eyes where as maan felt guilty again as reality hit him..how can he promise her that he'll be there for her when he himself don't have faith on his survival…geet still looking at him waiting for his answer…maan smiled n nodded…geet kissed his hand n hugged him tight..


Maan(st):sorry geet I don't know whether I could fulfill my promise …but iam there with u always may not be physically but…..his thought stuck as he could not able to digest the fact..only he knows how he is controlling himself..he is consoling everyone around him despite of his own grief…but he determined to stay strong which ihe is doing now…


Later geet quickly got ready as they have to go to college n came out where maan is waiting for her…maan turned to find her in baby pink salwar suit..geet looked not less than an angel…maan is totally mesmerised by her beauty..her cute nose,her eyes and her smile adding more to her beauty..she blushed feeling maan's gaze on her…


Maan stood there looking at geet with his killer smile n geet walking to him…as she is lost in him she didn't notice any thing around her..she tripped over the carpet n lost her balance..before her fragile body could hit the ground maan held her by waist n stopped her from falling…he made her stand on her feet properly..all the while geet is lost in his eyes n so as maan…maan held her close encircling his hands round her waist geet hugged him by waist n looked in to his eyes lifting her head…




Maan:sambhalke…..gir jaogi mishty….n maan held her more tight smirking at her as she blushed hearing mishty…she downcasted her eyelids n smiled widely but at the same time she is blushing to look at maan..she felt butterflies in her stomach with maan's proximity…maan bent to reach her ear n spoke huskily.."kya huwa mishty tum sharma kyun rahi ho.." and he bit her earlobe which made her moan…her face adorned red hue n geet closed her eyes tight when maan kissed her on her neck…maan smiled seeing his effect on her…he caressed her cheek with his thumb where as his other hand holding her tight by waist…he kissed on her forehead who is looking at him lovingly n said"chale??"..gete nodded cutely with a smile..


precap:




Meri aankhon mein, meri saanson mein
Tera chehra (tera chehra)
Meri dil ki har ik deewar pe tera chehra (tera chehra)
Meri aankhon mein, meri saanson mein
Tera chehra (tera chehra)
Meri dil ki har ik deewar pe tera chehra (tera chehra)
Tu hi hai tu hi mera jahaan
Tu hi rab, tu hi dua
Tu hi labh, tu hi zubaan
Tu hi raah, tu hi makaam
Tu rehnuma
Tu hi rab, tu hi dua
Tu hi labh, tu hi zubaan
Tu hi raah, tu hi makaam
Tu rehnuma

Maan decides to tell geet about his disease😃


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Maaneet ko kabhi aah mat karna
Lovd t way maan treated pammi
Precap seems interestin
Good decision
Geet saath hogi toh maan can overcome all difficulties
Waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh wow I din see m 1st
After looonggg
Time
Loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved it
bloody cheap aurat pqmmi

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