**FLAMES OF DESIRE** MG FF #7 IMP NOTE ON PG-163

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FLAMES OF DESIRE #7
A gentle brush of his fingers,
Sending shivers down my spine.
In the love I see in his eyes,
Is a love that equals mine.

He greets me with a smile,
And leaves me with a kiss.
If he were to ever leave me,
I couldn't imagine what I'd miss.

Maybe it's his touch,
Or the way he makes me feel.
But whatever it is,
I'm head over heels.
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~😳A SNEAK PEEK-ABOUT WHATS STORE IN FUTURE😳~
A touch, soft and tender...a whisper, full of desire...a gasp of sweet surrender...as passion fuels the fire...

No words spoken between them...no promises to be kept...no lies being told tonight...no looking back - no regrets...

Longing to hold each other...such precious little time...both vowed to another...being lonely their only crime...

Tomorrow bringing sorrow...a brief moment of shame...but he stood infront cocooning her in his warm embrace...promising to securely hold her till eternity...
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~TEASER FOR FUTURE PARTS~
They stood looking deeply into each others eyes...He gently placed a loose strand of curls behind her ear and touched her face softly...They were standing so close together facing each other feeling the warmth of their togetherness after such a long time...He gazed into her eyes craving to love her madly but feared the pain she must be going through...He leaned closer gazing her numb hazels, and gently pecked her forehead...Geet involuntarily raised her head to the kissing position, putting her arms around him...both where breathing heavily with geet's head resting on his shoulders...His hands wandered on her back, craving to feel her as much as possible...Geet moved a bit tighter with her lower limbs, and heaved a huge sigh, feeling his hard thrombing manhood...She parted away, biting her lips, feeling weird with that touch...Maan noticed a broken hut in the mid of dense bushes...and with a sudden swift move, he took her in his arms and walked towards the shelter...
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"We lie in each other's arms eyes shut and fingers open and all the colors of the world pass through our bodies like strings of fire."
(please stay tuned, as the FLAMES OF DESIRE begins now😳)
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~MY OTHER WORK~
"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."
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Hello sweeties...i welcome you in this new thread of FLAMES OF DESIRE...thank u for all the support and love you showered over me and this FF...
Really excited for this story as right now we are on the most crucial phase of this story...with in few parts we will be reaching to a bigger twist...and that wud set the story ahead...so just be wid me as we walk on this path of flames of desire...
Was going thru my first thread...n really felt nostalgic reading the comments which i got for my first ever prologue...thank u guys for staying connected with this story till this thread...smtimes i feel i shud go back n just judge on my progess as an writer...but then i feel it wud be partial, as i feel readers r only d ones who can truly judge me with my work...
~NOTE~
After updating part- 34, i got sm genuine out burst of the reader, who truly love this ff...n didnt wanted me to ruin its essence...At first instant i got emotional, thinking all this people dont trust me enough wid my thinking...am i that mad to incooperate a rape scene just to drag my story...But then when i myself read my update for i dont know how many times...i really felt proud that i was able to creat that fear, n anger for the character of prem...The scenes looked horrifying, but its real right...people go thru this, and we get scared just by reading it...I dont want to go into dept of it, but i feel a writer shud have that liberty to express what they feel...n express in such a way, that it wont effect anyones mind set in wrong direction...
Lastly wana say, trust me...and if you dont then i would never mind if you leave this ff...as many of them pmed me that they will leave this ff, if geet gets raped...
I wont be able to justify my updates to each n every one...so just judge my few updates, n then decide wat u want to do...
Ending my note here and stay tuned as the flames of desire begins now...
lastly wana thank all my frnds and reader for there comments and likes...and my darling spammers for finishing off the last thread...pls silent reader voice out wat u feel...i wud really appreciate to know ur views too...
love u lots,
varsha😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res-


for new thread...

last update k torchre se mai abi bahar ni aa pai hu...
Edited by khushi1022 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new thread chudail.. jldi update de kamini aurat...
bt u knw i still love you.. jldi update de yaar..
Edited by Appy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for update abb tu dedo update ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ae lo! Mei last😭
Di congo for the new thread...
I knw last update was soo scary, lekin aise writings padne ka mazza hi kuch aur hai yr.
Aur aapki writing ki speciality hi yeh hai, cute ho ya scary nd emotional, feel se bahar aane mei time lagta hai...
So me guess k jo redrs aapko aise PM krte hai, wo abh tk feel se bahar nh aa paye. So yeh to acchi baat hai na😉 Waiting for the update now😃
-LUV Anyaa😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aye yaaro! Ab idhr hi spam krenge na😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congo for the new thread
I trust u knw...nd I knw dat u will make dis story more interesting and Geet will be saved...
Eagerly waiting for the update...
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Originally posted by: 16anyaa.gurti

Aye yaaro! Ab idhr hi spam krenge na😕


jb tk update ni milta...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Varsha di kahaa hai????
Pls di, mujhe aapse talk krni hai😕

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