A Raghavi Poem: An Ode To My Weeping Heart - Page 4

Originally posted by: arunima_LUIT

Sneha :

Well, you write so well.👍🏼 This one just emoted whatever is in Raghav's mind, the heartbreak, the love, the longing, the sadness.

Very very good.😊

Keep writing and Thanks for the PM 😊

Thanks Arunima dear 🤗... for finding it worth the read

Originally posted by: _dkmystery_

OMG!! u r awesome girl...

This line specially:

I wear a smile upon my face,

Camouflaging my teary eye...

HC does this so well, Raghav comes alive for us!!

Thanks Divs dear 🤗 for letting me know the lines that touched you.

Originally posted by: petrova-fire

I'm late as usual. But this is so so SO damn good!!! I always say it but you truly are a gifted writer. Your words carry emotions 👏

Thanks Rova dear 🤗 for the comment and let me add on... your words have the same effect on me.

Originally posted by: SunShine_A

This is freaking awesome, voice

every word was like directly coming from Raghav's heart

Loved below para the most

I weave a canopy of our moments,

Bidding ode to this day...

And holding on to hope my love,

I dream we are together someday...

Thanks Aashi dear 🤗 for letting me know the lines that you loved.

Beautiful work di ! ⭐️