A Raghavi Poem: An Ode To My Weeping Heart

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear FriendsšŸ¤— ,

This poem has been penned on request made by Vandy Di , Sun and Silk' It is a humble try to depict Raghav's pain at heartbreak' I know that no words can ever describe the upheaval a broken heart goes through' and so I say... this is only the tip of the iceberg called "heartbreak".

This poem has been written from Raghav's view.

A humble request: Bashers please stay away.


An Ode To My Weeping Heart

The first look, the first touch,

With each you touched my heart...

But just when I reached out to you,

You ripped my heart apart...

My world came crumbling down,

That day when I heard you speak...

The truth that made you strong,

Has surely made me weak...

I wear a smile upon my face,

Camouflaging my teary eye...

My heart yearns for you so dearly,

And you walk away saying Goodbye...

Facing the curve ball life puts at me,

I always thought I was strong...

But then my love you came in,

And my thought was proven wrong...


It took you just moments,

To hold my heart and steal...

But now my love you give me bruises,

That's gonna take a while to heal...


As the realization dawns,

I try to move on and start over...

But right then the hell breaks loose,

As your memories begin to hover...


As I bask in loneliness,

I ask the One above...

Why He finds it easy,

To break a heart in love...


I weave a canopy of our moments,

Bidding ode to this day...

And holding on to hope my love,

I dream we are together someday...


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Please do let me know if it was worth the read and your time dear ones
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omigod, Snow. I frigging love this. ARG, I don't have words to describe how much I loved it, how much it touched me, and just how frigging much it conveyed Raghav's emotions.
I swear. You're like amazing with poetry and words, Snow. Just absolutely beautiful. Gosh, I need to save this. Snow, when I open the next AT for RaghaVi, I'm so gonna request you to write a poem. I'll let you know the theme, but damn. LOVED IT ā¤ļø
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it sneha...
and thanx for writing this:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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v. wonderfully written as always..!
keep it up!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Elysia

Omigod, Snow. I frigging love this. ARG, I don't have words to describe how much I loved it, how much it touched me, and just how frigging much it conveyed Raghav's emotions.

I swear. You're like amazing with poetry and words, Snow. Just absolutely beautiful. Gosh, I need to save this. Snow, when I open the next AT for RaghaVi, I'm so gonna request you to write a poem. I'll let you know the theme, but damn. LOVED IT ā¤ļø



Awww Ana šŸ¤—... love you for this sweets... Ur comments... they really put this big smile on my face 😃... anyone looking at me now will think I'm merchandising a toothpaste...šŸ˜†...

But seriously u do know to strike the cords dear.. with Ur words... Thanks for letting me know that you liked it and that it touched you. 😃

And to add on I'll be ever so happy to come up with the poem for u sweets ... ye le aaj ki jhappi ki installment šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is really beautiful!!!


Thank you so much... for making time and writing this!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -vandy-

loved it sneha...

and thanx for writing this:)



Thanks for "loving it" di... MOTW ka gift aapke liye šŸ¤—... saste mein kat rahi hoon šŸ˜†


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh My God. I simply loved it. Beautifully written
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sam123_0

It is really beautiful!!!



Thank you so much... for making time and writing this!



Thanks Sam šŸ¤—

For Ur comment and letting me know that u found it beautiful... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Snow,šŸ¤—

Wat to say yar!! U always make me speechless. This was beautiful!!!šŸ‘

These lines where just amazing...

"As I bask in loneliness,
I ask the One above...
Why He finds it easy,
To break a heart in love...

I weave a canopy of our moments,
Bidding ode to this day...
And holding on to hope my love,
I dream we are together someday..."

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