A Raghavi Poem: An Ode To My Weeping Heart

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

OMG...touchy one yaar..

I cud feel nd connect wid RAGHAV's emos..😍

Gosh, sneha, keep it up.👍🏼

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suha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

it was sooo sad and beautiful 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Wow Sneha. This poem was amazing. Each and every word. Just fabulous. Have to say this again, but Sneha, you are such an amazing writer, Mashallah. Beautiful.

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Sunshine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

This is freaking awesome, voice

every word was like directly coming from Raghav's heart

Loved below para the most

I weave a canopy of our moments,

Bidding ode to this day...

And holding on to hope my love,

I dream we are together someday...

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tweetie19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Beautiful...i remembered every scene of Raghav's heartbreak when i read it...very heart touching...well done dear 🤗

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The_Inner_Voice

@The_Inner_Voice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: stephenie
v. wonderfully written as always..!
keep it up!

Thanks Steph 🤗 for the comment... aur agar tere predictions sahi hue to 🤗

Originally posted by: april10
Oh My God. I simply loved it. Beautifully written

Thanks April 10 🤗 For "loving it"... well i love your comments though.

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arushi vaishnav

@arushiashvik

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

very good i luv all ur works i have become fan of ur poems i have never read any poems but after reading all ur poems i will have have to change best of luck for the others u will make

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Arunima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Sneha :

Well, you write so well.👍🏼 This one just emoted whatever is in Raghav's mind, the heartbreak, the love, the longing, the sadness.

Very very good.😊

Keep writing and Thanks for the PM 😊

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The_Inner_Voice

@The_Inner_Voice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: betty123
Snow,🤗

Wat to say yar!! U always make me speechless. This was beautiful!!!👏

These lines where just amazing...

"As I bask in loneliness,
I ask the One above...
Why He finds it easy,
To break a heart in love...

I weave a canopy of our moments,
Bidding ode to this day...
And holding on to hope my love,
I dream we are together someday..."