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Posted: 12 years ago
2 fab updates

"Main unkee sabhi bateen nahi samajhtee but I understand Maan's heart. It never asks me to go away"👏

"I am new in his life but I am his wife. My mother says, wife always knows her man in a way which no one else knows. I know Maan in a way which you will never know."🤗


"Really, you know him so well, so do you know he was going to marry me and it was finalized when suddenly he was forced to marry you. This marriage was forced on him."


Sameera needs help

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey Di ur Piggy is here finally

I am sorry for my late arrival actually late word bahut kum hai I have done a sin which cannot be forgiven : (

Di such a beautiful story penned down magically by u. Innocent dreams of Geet and the serious attitude of Maan what a combination. Their London trip is amazing hehe YasH Prince charming cool Geet apne hubby ke best friend ko PC bana diya Maan ji ko jealousy toh hogi hi hehe. Hmm…wicked Sameera meethi churi ka kaam kar rahi hai but directly or indirectly all her wicked plans are tasting the dust due to the devine relationship that Maaneet share (although Maan is still reluctant about their relationship he is in love with his childish wife ) Stupid Sammera seductress banne chali thi but cool Maan ko toh Geet ki innocence bhaa gayi

I a m happy Di the way Maaneet's relationship has shaped it is really extraordinary. Maan thinks of Geet and Geet is getting more comfortable with her Dhust Danav husband.

Aww… the way Maan manofied Geet was cho sweet par Maanji Geet ko bus aapke saath time spend karna hai chalo b'coz of that casino gotala Geet naraz ho gayi aur aapko unhe mananna pada hehe Thanksk Sameera for playing the role of a cupid indirectly : )

Wow Maan purchased western attires for Geet cho sweet and wah Yash ke advice ki wajah se kya letter likh diya Maan ne hehe but every word of the letter shows how much love does he has for his wife ab Maan babu accept kar lijiye

Geet sitting on Maan's lap and innocently seducing him haye what a treat to read: )

Lol Yash aapki Senorita ne toh aapki class le li hehe by telling u that unke pati parmeshwar ko ulti sulti patti na padaye hehe

Yash and Maan's fight was cool; this is true Di Geet ki wajah se maan ne life enjoy karna seek liya and for me the best chapter of this FF was the part wherein Maan sings praises of his life, his Geet in front of that stupid Sameera kudos Maan u r an ideal husband bus thoda romantic ho jaao Geet ke novels hi pad lo hehe

Waise Di main bhi M&B padthi hoon blushing and I keep on dreaming abt my Prince Charming haye kash mujhe bhi koi mil jaaye

Okay back to the update ok so Maan has to go out for a tour and usse Geet ko Sam ke paas rakhna pada … oh wow Blackberry sahi jaa rahe ho Maan ji

aww I love their relationship Maan has indeed changed he is listening to Geet's talks with so much interest he even knows k Geet ko Sam ka pheeka khana pasand nahi aayega cho sweet

Sam is jealous of Geet idiotic woman I hate her but I adore Geet she has so much trust on Maan

Sab usse baccha kehte hai par sach toh ye hai ke rishte ki khoobsurati ka sach aur mahatav Geet se behter koi jaan nahi saktha

The way she responded to Sam's accusations was magical for me the best dialogue was "I can understand Maan's heart and it tells me that it needs me…."

Oh par innocent heart ko dhaaka laga jab uss wicked witch ne apni aur Maan ki shadi ki baat ki aww…. no problem darling Maan ka call disconnect karke jo restlessness aapne apne hubby ke dil mein paida ki hai wahi restlessness aap dono ke rishte ko sone se sunehra kar dega

A new chapter of their life begins now wherein the trust and faith will sparkle more brilliantly with the pearls of love adored in it

Waiting for Maan to return back Di

PS: Once again sorry for the late comment ho sake toh maaf kar dijiyega; besides this IF'S LIKE BUTTON IS NOT WORKING FROM YESTERDAY

I LOVE U LOADS never forget me

urs- Piggy (Piya)

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Posted: 12 years ago
awwesome update...
I love d special relationship of Maan n Geet...
its beyond Sameera's little brain...

n neways Geet cannot resist Maan wen he cums to her...
n wen Maan wud cum to knw wht Sameera has done.. hurting his Geet... she's dead... 😆

waitin for d next
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update.
uff this sameera is so irratating.
and maan is in big trouble. I wish him all the best.
do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
read til prt 21 m n luv wd ds ff
didnt get tme to read and cmnt regulaqly bt nw got and read it

just superb
pm me nxt tme plhjd
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Posted: 12 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Sam frustrated seeing Maan's princess.
Oh Lord Geet was dreaming of him.
Geet calling Maan at 3 am. Bechara.
Maan's state is no less hearing her
Innocence. Totally luved the morning
Scene

Sam fuming seeing their closeness.
Trying every way to Break her heart.
But liked Geet's trust on Maan.
Opps Geet gussa on Maan on hearing
Abt Marriage.

Now waiting how wil Maan Manofy
His princess.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
PS:Add anuffpm for PM regarding Updates

This Update is dedicated to Mel, as I as not going to update so soon but she made me do so. And as I had promised you her, here is an update. Hope you like it.

Part 22

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Maan was not in sense to even greet her "Sameera, please give the phone to Geet and ask her not to cut it, please" Sameera again burned from inside. These days Maan gave her no importance at all.

Geet just took the phone and disconnected.

Till late night that day Geet kept thinking of what Sameera said and the night hours which brings negative thought so easily made her think to all extreme length. Why was Maan so close to Sameera and not yah and Meera.

Why did he leave her with Sameera, what was relation between them if they were about to marry and so N on the thought went on.

But the Morning light brings positivity and shows things more clearly, and when Geet woke up next morning the bright sunshine brought smile on her face and then she recalled all that talk with Sameera the previous night and then she realized how she had disconnected Maan's call and all that she had thought about him.

Realizing, she placed and in her hand on her mouth. She took all the books and cell and reached Meera's house.

"Geet you?? Now?? "

"I want to stay with you till Maan comes. Can I?? "

"Sure you can, pagli you don't need to ask. But what haapened. Aur aane ke pehle ek phone kerna chahiye than a, what if I would have left"

Geet just made a baby face and came inside, placed all her books and cell on the table and sat down with long face on couch.

"Ohh this girl, doesn't think before doing anything. I was just about to leave.It's only in Maan's capacity to handle you" But then she turned to see tears on Geet's eyes.

She immediately came near her and wipping her tears "Kya hua baccha, what's the matter.. you felt bad of your di's words "

Geet shaked her head in No and hugged Meera tight. Meera after a while separated her and wiped her tears and then called to collage that she would miss a class and requested a colleague to manage.

Geet said all about her talk with Sameera.

"This is what Yash and I feared with Maan's decision to leave her with Sameera." But she said nothing to Geet.

"Just tell me one thing, you don't trust Maan"

Geet came to immediate defense "No Meera di, I trust him more than even myself" and she again started crying

Meera tried to again console her "Then what's the problem? "

"Yesterday whole night I kept thinking wrong about him, how could I do that. Main unke bare me kuch bhi galat kaise sooch saktee hoon, Meera di, I am feeling so restless and bad of my behavior"

"Do you want to call him" "No Meera di, I will cry, I know and then he will be disturb. Unhe bas lagta hai unhe mujhse fark nahi parta per pareshan to ho jate hain na woh"

"I will never tell him anything about this. What will he think about me otherwise."

Then Geet kept herself engrossed in study, somewhere trying her self to make him happy, guilt of the mistake she had done, though it was other thing he did not know about it anything.

Maan got busy with seminars and lined up interviews with channels. But still when he use to return home all tired he would try to call her, but Geet did not pick. She feared, she will pour her heart out to him and she did not want to trouble him on his tour.

From Meera he only knew that Geet was OK. But so many questions surrounded his mind.

It was day before Maan would come and Geet wanted to make him forget everything and thus went for shopping to surprise him.

Maan took his luggage and got out of custom to take taxi.Geet could not hold her happiness seeing Maan after so long.

Ohh.. she was all over FIDA on him. He was in his casual jeans and dark brown short shirt, with short sleeves and shirt out of jeans. Three top buttons opened, his sharp chiseled features' Geet could not hold herself for surprise and ran to him and hugged him tight.

For few seconds Maan could not gather what was happening. He had been thinking of Geet and he thought he had become crazy to even hallucinate her at airport.

But after a while he realized "Maan Maan" that she was chanting with happiness Hugging him was all true.

Maan separated her "Geet, you here? " "Surprise.." But by now, Maan was already lost in surprise. Geet was in western frock, 3 inches above her knee, all surrounded with frills and off shoulder, holding with thin strap. Her curly hair opened and with slight touch of makeup she looked out of world.and jumping she looked like an alive Barbie doll.

No way she looked like a wife but a very young bubbly innocent baby girl but one who had the power to even move saints.

Maan gulped his saliva.

"Surprised seeing me like this na.. How am I looking" she asked innocently holding him by his arm. No way was she going to leave him an inch away at this moment.

What was he to say, he was totally lost in her look. Everything looked cute on her yet she had the power to make anyone feel hard anywhere.. just as was Maan's condition now.

"Boliye na"

"very beautiful" he tried to manage. "And you super handsome as always" He managed to smile on this but all his concentration was on controlling his hand which were itching to hold her bare smooth white sleek arm and feel them.

And the desire were no where saintly. His thoughts were going wild. How could he Maan singh Khurana be so out of control. He was a man in control but not at all at present.

He knew, if he loosed himself even a bit he would do something that should not happen. She was a baby girl and who had turned 18 just a month before her marriage.Just becoz she was his wife, no, No way.

But his misery was not ending. Geet was in no mood to be even a bit separate from him and how could he put her away. Reason that he can't control himself. So he just kept gulping his saliva, tightening his fists trying to control the desire which were getting wilder and wilder as she kept changing her position and as her frock shifted showing her thighs here and there on whole way back home, Geet was all over him, chatting and chatting, none of which was going into his ear or mind.

While Geet was enjoying the feel of him so close to her. The touch of his muscled broad body made her feel so much secure.

As they reached home Maan excused himself and went to kitchen, poured a bottle of chilled water on himself.

He shied after a while "Uff yeh ladki mujhe pagal kerdegi"

But the again "Maan" Maan closed his eyes, shaked his head and smiled at his child wife.

One side she was a pool of desire while on other side she was story of innocence.

He opened his eyes to see Geet "Geet give me 10 mints. I also need to talk something with you"

"Ohh no, hope he will not talk about that cutting phone call' babaji nahi, please"

Precap: "Geet running away won't help, I want to know everything in detail"

If I don't get lost writing Maneet then

Precap 2: Maan Sameera talk.

NOTE: Gals, Maan's brain here is strong but soon his heart will overtake his brain but you all have to keep patience. He needs a real strong Jhataka.

Now if you all liked this update, please press like button and also comment to let me know your views. I love each and every one of yours comment. They are so so special. Forgive me for not replying back individually. It is completely due to lack of time dearies.

I am also planning to start a new FF after YRKU, but in YRKU Maaneet romance is only not ending, what to do.

-Anu

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first...
Sameera ka plan flop hogaya...
Geet is so cute...
Maan had hard time controling...
precap awaited...
continue soon...
new ff ...bring it on...
Edited by reachsky2011 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
'INOCENT LOVE'... the title is very well JUSTIFIED...in this part. Maan thought that its his imagination But i bet he wouldnt have imagin this kind of suprise from geet ...spl. After her indiffrence. Maan...toh ahi se pagal ho raha hai... Kabhi tense hota hai toh kabhi smile ... Now what- serious talk or INOCENT shararaten...
Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago

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