MG FF DEMON'S ANGEL Last Pt&Epilogue28/1/2013 P-98 - Page 11

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omg ab kya hoga firse geet maan ke shikanj mein aagayi...😲
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thank god geet bach gaye
now his father will take her vd him
superb update
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Maan babu ko ek slap to bnta h jaanu.
Awesom update
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Priyanka jaanu kiska slap banta hai?
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hayee richa ..ye mere maan se kya karwa rahi ho

poor geet .. mere maaneet ko kya ho gaya
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pls tell me you are updating soon pls
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*DEMON'S ANGEL*

PART - 9


MAAN found her nd take her to his bed again. Dis time he was full in hs form. He have no intension to drop his lust. He cm on her nd to made shut hr scream he slammed his rough lips on hers. Her voice caught in her mouth. Geetakshi lost hr all hope nd stop defending. Her body is still aching badly wid last nite encounter. Now she dnt hve ny hope left. She laid lyk a dead body. Maan stop nd luk at hr eyes whch r life less nd still. Maan cnfusd seeng hr lyk dat. He check hr heartbeat 2 make sure dat she is alive. D sound of hr heartbeat is lyk music 2 hm.He lost in dat,bt his concentration brokd wen he hears a knok sound on hs door. He recented nd opn d door. Hs security gurd is trmbling wid terror,coz he knos he might kill him 4 distrubing him.

MAAN fuming:tume pta hai na firr b tumari itni himmat.

S.GUARD:shama kre Yuvraj kintu apko suchit krna jruri tha
[sorry sir bt its imp.2 alert u]

MAAN:aisi konsi aaft aa gai thi jo tumne apni jan ki b prwah nai ki?

S.GUARD:yuraj is ladki ka baba maharaj or apni puri sena(men force) k sath yaha aa rahe hai.

MAAN:kya?

GEETAKSHI hear dis nd it gves hope 2 hr. She stands again:ap tume tumhare kiye ki saza milne ka samay aa gaya hai.


MAAN glared hr nd grabbed hr wid hr hairs. She whimpred in pain.

GEET:aahh

MAAN:bahut zban chal rai hai magr 1 baat bta du,ki tume hona hi hai.ab to bhgwan b tume mujhse alag nai kr skta.chalo mere sath.

MAAN dragged hr out forcily nd she wriggling conti.,to whch he made hr unconcious again nd put hr on his shoulder. Digvijay nd Darun also reached dere nd sw Geetakshi wid him. Digvijay felt ashmed on hs act nd morovr felt guilt 4 ignored hs cruel acts.

DIGVIJAY rored:Yuvraj chhod dejiye us ladki ko uspe apka koi adhikar nai hai.

Maan ignored hs father's warning nd sat on hs horse wid hr:maharaj aap isme na pade to achha hoga. Geetakshi meri hai or meri hi rahegi.use ap to kya duniya ki koi takat mujhse juda nai kr skti.

DARUN glared hm:dusht chhod de meri beti ko wrna tujhe marne se pehle 1 bar nai sochunga.

Maan ignord evry1 nd ran hs horse. Digvijay orderd hs men 2 arrest hm at ny cost. All force followed hm. Darun's men was also behind him. He was madly run hs horse 2wrds d jungle. Darun's many men attacked him wid posinous arrow,bt unfortunately all stabbed in Geetakshi's body. Maan was so stubborn. He wont stop hs horse nd entr in d deep dark area of d jungle. All men force all enter behind him. Suddenly Maan's horse enter in a area through invisible wall and vanished from d eyes of all soldiers follows hm. He 2 luk behind nd found no1 is behind hm now. He was still in jungle but d place was seemed so heavenly. Dere is much diffrence in d atmosphere and air of this portion. He cant able 2 undrstand where he was now. He stop hs horce nd chek Geetakshi who's body was strt turning blue due 2 d effect of posion. Blood is also oozing frm hr injuries. B4 he can do nythng suddnly a young boy attacks on hm. Maan get involved in fighting wid hm. Meanwhile Guru Satya nd his 6 saint cm dere. Maan enter in d area whch is vanished frm d eyes of world. They were dere but Guru Satya made an invisible protective wall around dis area. Now only those entr in dis 2 whom dey want entr.

GURU SATYA:Aditya shant.

ADITYA:pr mahaguru ye ajnabi yaha ghus aaya hai.

SATYA:shant vats(SON)hum dekhte hai. Aap yaha kaise aaye vats?

MAAN:hme nai pata.hum yaha kaise aa gaye or aap log kon pehle to kabi nai dekha is jungle me?

SATYA:hm kon hai wo b jaan jaoge kintu is samye is kanya(GIRL) ki jaan bachna zada zaruri hai.

MAAN:ap ise bacha skte hai?

Guru order nd many girls came nd tuk hr wid dem. All were moved behind Guruji. Girls placed her in a cottage of Guruji. Maan was scared 4 d frst time. He dnt wont 2 loose hr. Guru Satya dragged out all d arrows frm hr body nd placed som ointment on hr injuries.

MAAN:ab to ye theek ho jayegi na?

SATYA smild nd luk at hs face:ise jeevit rkhna to sirf tumare hath me hai vats.

MAAN:main samjha nai main kaise?

SATYA:ise vish lage teer lage hai.maine jo dawa lagai hai wo us vish ka asr km to kr skti hai lekin puri tarah se samapt[FINISH COMPLETELY] nai kr skti.

MAAN:koi to ilaz hoga na iske pran[LIFE] bachane ka?

SATYA:hai lekin zohkim[DANGEROUS] bhar hai.

MAAN:ise pane k liye main har khtra utha skta hu.bataiye kya karna hoga mujhe?

SATYA:soch lo?

MAAN:Maan Singh sochta nai hai sirf kr k dikhta hai aap batiye kya krna hai mujhe?

SATYA:1mah[MONTH] hai tumare pas.is 1 mah me tumhe 4 alag dishao[frm 4 zones] se 1 khas cheez lani hai unhi ko mila kr main iske liye dawa bana sakunga.Lkin un sabi cheezo ko pana namumkin hai isme jaan jane ka b khtra hai.

MAAN:ap sirf ye bataiye lana kya hai or kaha se baki meri zimmedari hai.

SATYA:thek hai pehle tume purv disha[EAST ZONE] zana hai or waha se swarnkamal[Golden lotus] lana hai jo waha k junglo me kahi ugta hai.lekin koi nai janta ki kaha. Un jnglo tak jane ka naksha[MAP] ye raha.ise tume kafi madat milegi...
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geet hurt maan can save her waiting for him to save her



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... CONTINUE...

SATYA:Lekin yaad rahe tumhare paas us Swarn Kamal ko lane k liye kewal 1 saptah(WEEK) ka hi samay hai. Kyunki har disha se 4 cheeze lani hai or har cheez ko lane k liye sirf 1 saptah ka samay hai. Meri dawaiya ise kwal 1 mah tak hi jeevit rakh paayengi uske baad main b ise nai bacha paunga.

MAAN:Aap chitna mat kariye main har disha se jo b cheez chahiye launga.bas tab tak aap log iska dhyan rakhiye.ise kuchh nahi hona chahiye.


GURU SATYAbhagwan tumhe shakti de. Is yatra(JOURNEY) me Aditya tumhare sath jayega.

ADITYA dont like Maan coz he alwyas kept his eyes on him since Maan meet GEETAKHI. So he knew how he is and what he done with her.

ADITYA:mahaguru main kyu?

GURU SATYA:Kyunki hum chahte hai tum yuvraj k sath jao.or is yatra me inki sahayta(HELP) karo.

MAAN:hme is kaam k liye is maskhare ki koi avashyakta nai hai.

GURU SATYA:yuvraj cheenti chhoti avashye hoti hai par hathi ko nachane ki shamta(CAPABILITY) rakhti hai. Aditya kisi b pashu/pakshi(BIRD/ANIMAL) ka roop lene me saksham(ABLE) hai. Isliye ye apke sath jayega.

MAAN:theek hai lekin isse kahiye ki ye mere raste me nahi aayega warna main bhul jaunga ki ye mere sath hai.

GURU SATYA:aap nikalne ki tayayri kariye.


All people of Guru Satya helped him for his journey. He get redy to leave.

MAAN:jane se pehle main 1 bar Geetakshi ko dekhna chahta hu.

GURU SATYA:theek hai par jaldi keejiye.

MAAN wnt 2 her. She was unconciously laid lyk a dead body on a bed. But still her face seemd so angelic. He sat near her and gazed her conti. He caressed her face.

MAAN:main nai janta ki tum me aisa kya hai lekin tum meri kamzori bann gayi ho.tumhe paye bina to ab main marr b nahi skta.tumhari jaan bachane k liye mujhe jo b karna pade main karunga lekin tumhe kuchh nahi hone dunga.

He bend on her face and kissed on her forhead gently. At the same time Aditya came in the room and knocked on the door to made him realize about his presence. Maan alerts with the sound.

ADITYA:mere khyal se ab hume chalna chaiye safar bahut lamba hai.or jinti jaldi jayenge utni jaldi laut sakenge.

MAAN:hmm.

Both take necessary items with them and leave the ashram.

SANATAN:mahaguru ab kya hoga?

SATYA:Maan ko Takshak se ladna hai to use is 1 mah me hi taiyar hona hoga kyunki i mah k baad Takshak ki tapsya puri ho jayegi or wo itna shaktishali ho jayega ki uska samna Pavitr Aatma K alaa or koi nai kar payega.

SANATAN:mahaguru Maan to sirf apni vasna purti(LUSTFUL DESIRES) hetu gaya hai.wo kya samna karega Takshak ka.upar se uske 25 varsh ka hone ka samy b nazdeek aa gaya hai jisme uska mrituyog b hai.

GURU SATYA:kewal ishwar pe bharosa rakhiye.wo jo karenge uchit hi karenge...
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wow lovely part so maan is gonna save geet's life...dekhthe hai aage kya hoga...😊

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