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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
Edited by janu_2006 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Sameera is so jealous of Geet...she tried to poison Maan's mind against her but failed...I loved how he answered her and lost in Geet...

I hope Maan should not confide with Sameera that what he is thinking about his relationship with Geet...

awesome updates...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PS:Add anuffpm for PM regarding Updates

Part 21

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It was 8am in London and Geet as usual was sleeping in her dreamland with Maan. It was Saturday and Sameera was all ready for breakfast. Nakul had come and prepared her breakfast but was waiting to make hot paratha when Geet comes down as he knew and was instructed from Maan that Geet will eat only very fresh ones.

Sameera was so pissed of with all this luxurious behavior of Geet and more pissed off that Maan took all these useless wishes of her seriously. And on the top of it madam would sleep until someone woke her up. It was Maan's duty in home to wake her up. However busy he was, he would wake her up, fix her sheets and make breakfast for her. Actually he did not like anyone else doing these things for her, he was possessive for these but would not accept.

So Sameera all irritated came to wake Geet up who was in her Dhuta Danav's dream.

"Geet get up, nakul is waiting for you in Kitchen for you breakfast"

Geet, still all asleep is talking to Maan "Nakul why , I wanna eat the pratha you make"

Sameera was all furious, now she is supposed to cook for so called wife of Maan.

"Geet" She shaked Geet harshly. Geet immediately woke up and found herself somewhere else and it took her a while to realize she was at Sameera's place.

"ohh Sameera ji, sorry.. who I thought it's Maan" then she got a little girly shy on her face'

"Actually was dreaming of him" and she blushed looking down, unknown to the fact the person in front was burning with anger.

Geet realized Maan was not here and urge to talk to him was strong and without thinking what hours it must be in NY, Geet ran to Nakul, asked him to wait for half and hour and Nakul said OK.

Sameera's misery was not ending, seeing Geet's luxury of being Man's wife was clearly visible, but she did not know, Geet was not Maan who preferred doing thing on his own, Geet was a princess of Handa family and Khurana Family and she knew how to make people work for her.

"I will call Maan" she said to herself when Sameera thought "Does she even have idea, hat hours it must be in NY"

What sameera didn't knew was Geet never needed to think when Maan was concerned.

Maan's cell rang at 3 am in the morning when he was in deep sleep but he picked the phone. He was well aware Geet could call him anytime without keeping the track of hours

"Hmm Geet" he said, without even looking at phone.

"Maan" geet said excitedly and looked at Sameera who did not move an inch as she did not consider their relation as husband wife.

"What are you doing Maan" "Geet, it's 3 am in morning, what do you expect me to do" but he was filled with life

alsaya alsaya sa mann mera

raat ke iss pehar me

Aise me meethi aawaz tumhari

halchal machati hai mere dil me

"But I wanted to talk to you" "to karo na, Ok tell me what all happened between Good night and Good Morning" Maan teased her but did not know it was going backfire by her innocence.

"You know, I read M&B before sleeping and you know what" she lowered her voice

"I dreamt of us" though she said it in a breath, she was blushing all red and heart beat with extraordinary speed.

Maan closed his eyes with the sensation she filled him with her words. First of all that hour of night it self has its magic and on top of it was Geet talking and that too this way' Maan felt anytime he could loose.

"Geet" he said in horse voice

"Now I don't have control on my dreams" she complained

"Ok, go get fresh and have your breakfast, don't keep Nakul waiting" he tried to sound as much practical as could be.

Get was also shaking from within with what she said "hmm" is all she could utter. When Geet was done she saw Sameera still there but Geet did not like this, Maan was so personal to her but it was Sameera's house, what could she say. But then she ignored, she talked to Maan and wanted to feel the movement he heart was experiencing.

On other hand, Geet's stay was a complete torture for Sameera. Not being in her position was killing her.

Geet then talked morning and evening with Maan and other then when Maan was busy with work, he would pick her phone.

Geet would call Maan and she would keep talking to him all useless in the hours he was free and Maan would just keep listening.

On Monday Sameera just ran away to university as early as possible, not being able to digest Geet and Maan's relation.

But whole day in collage gave her some idea. She could not see Geet flying so high and knew by now, it was tough to deal with Maan where Geet was concerned. She did not want to loose her reputation in front of him.

At night, when they were having dinner

"Geet why are you forcing yourself on Maan if he does not love you"

Geet, who was already not very comfortable with Sameera, did not like her speaking about their relation.

She just gave a smile but did not say a word

"Geet your staying quiet is not any solution.. Maan's life has turned upside down since you have entered his life. You are not getting the message that he is so clearly giving you that you are not part of his life. He is a gentleman and he won't say it all clear but you should understand, especially when you claim you love him. Is this how you love him? "

Geet still said nothing to Sameera but got confused. But Sameera felt satisfied saying her heart out and putting the high flying Geet in confused state. Then Geet said'

"Maan does not want to get rid of me Sameera ji. I love him and my love will bring him close to me and I never see him going far away from me. Its his life style and I don't have problem with it. I don't know much but whatever time he is with me, he makes me feel so special. Why will he do so if he wants to get rid of me."

"Main unkee sabhi bateen nahi samajhtee but I understand Maan's heart. It never asks me to go away"

Sameera wanted to break Geet's trust on her love. The love which was making her feel so inferior.

"You don't know Maan as I do. I know him from long and you are new in his life."

"I am new in his life but I am his wife. My mother says, wife always knows her man in a way which no one else knows. I know Maan in a way which you will never know."

Sameera felt anger rushing down her veins, how this girl dare say this. Now she wanted to give shock to Geet.

"Really, you know him so well, so do you know he was going to marry me and it was finalized when suddenly he was forced to marry you. This marriage was forced on him."

Geet's mind went numb hearing this, the glass she was holding slipped from her hand. She rushed to the room. Sameera had a satisfactory smile on her face. Her work is done. The night was so suffocating to her at Sameera's place.

Today again Sameera and she lay on same bed, Geet was numb when she got call from Maan. He had waited for her to call but after not getting her call he got worried and called her.

Geet disconnected the call. Sameera was smiling from within. Maan made several calls but Geet kept disconnecting and then switched off the cell.

The Sameera got call in her cell, she victoriously picks her phone

"Hi Maan, how are you"

Maan was not in sense to even greet her "Sameera, please give the phone to Geet and ask her not to cut it, please" Sameera again burned from inside. These days Maan gave her no importance at all.

Geet just took the phone and disconnected.

Next: Maan back to London.

Part 22

Thanks to all of you for your support. Please keep doing so. Please press the like button and do comments as I really steal away time to make these updates.

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
gggrrrhhh...i hate dat chudail sameera...
maan u hv lot explaining to do...
cont
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Posted: 12 years ago
gggrrrhhh...i hate dat chudail sameera...
maan u hv lot explaining to do...
cont
i think i m d 1st to comment...
dinka chika...
p.s:-sorry 4 reposting...
Edited by lively-piia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ossum dear
loved it
omg msk is falling much love with her
and damn this sam dear
now what will msk do ?
do he cleares her all dounts
and liked the answers given by geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was an awesome update anu...

I loved maaneet moments... though they are far, the phone convos were completely lovely...

This sameera is grrr... she tried so many antics... since all failed, she just blurted about their once so called decision of getting married... and Geet back to irritation...

And now maan cant even speak to her as she would not listen at her current state...

Eagerly waiting for maan's return and anu, please update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sameera grrr
how can she do that

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