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Maneesha_Shanak thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update...

shaan is so romantic and cute!!!!!!!!!

oh no farm house trip ended so quickly...waiting for shanak engagement...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
haye betaab shaan... he cant leave her alone for a moment
but the pool side scene was super cute
hmm at 5 in the mor but when i saw the pic it was worth it
lovely song selection
the pics are superb ...
the frndz masti was fun ti read
the super mom part was shweet
shaan is shoo cute he cares for her like crazy
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
yeyyy...he fullfilleD her wish ... OMG ...how sweet...futurE wifE...i M in luv wid u chandu. for these sWeet moments u hv penned...beautiful...Excited fr shopping...jAldi jaldi update karo yar...m too much exciteD...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊
sorry once again a short part as sister has come home after a long time, shopping part is in the next update i thought this was needed in their life...
Thanks to pooja, ONAego, shubhadharane, diyak, kritika, sneha, aasma, rida, jaisy, heer, mounika, maneesha, saroj for liking it and commenting😊
sorry if i've disappointed you...

Part 25

As soon as they had returned, Khanak and Raj had to take over the duty, Shaan had taken off, as dadi wanted to talk to him about engagement preparations, Shaan had called at her house, as her phone was switched off, got to know from Dhruv, that she'll be having night duty. Shaan had wished that he could see her or to talk with her, he was disappointed…

Suddenly his phone rang, he didn't have mood to pick up, but when he saw the screen flashing the name of his would be wife, hhis face lit up, he was overjoyed, he picked the call…

Khanak: Hello!! (slowly)

Shaan: Khanak!! I was just thinking about you!! (smiling broadly)

Khanak: achcha!! Sorry Shaan couldn't call you, I was in OT, and im totally exhausted!! (tired)

Shaan (irritated): then why are you doing that night duty?? Why can't you go home and rest??

Khanak: Shaan chill!! Shaayad tum bhul rahe ho, that im still learning, im still a student (softly) and I have to obey the orders of seniors!! Don't worry, I'll be fine!!

Shaan: do you want me to talk to Dr. Lata??

Khanak: no!! im fine, abb tum batao, dinner kiya??

Shaan: (smiles) nahi, actually I was waiting for you to serve me!!

Khanak: oh really!! Nice one Shaan!! But you have to wait for that…

Shaan: wohi toh nahi ho raha hai!! Intezaar!! (smiles naughtily)

Khanak blushes at that statement…

Shaan: achcha listen, me and Dadi have decided the theme for engagement!! It will be red!!

Khanak: nice!! Lekin red!! No Shaan I think it should be blue!! I love blue!!

Shaan: sorry Khanak!! It'll be red, its my choice (proud)

Khanak: Shaan!! But I like blue!! (argument begins)

Shaan: Khanak, its red!!

Khanak: no blue!!

They fought like this for some more time, until each of them cuts the phone angrily…

Khanak had a busy night, when she had come in the morning, her friends had greeted her, but she didn't have the mood to chat with them, she was informed that, Aayush had gone to school, she had collapsed on her bed after changing…

When Shaan had come to hospital, she had already left, he decides to meet her at her house after his duty… Shaan had reached her apartment, by noon, he was greeted by Misha, Dhruv was busy with Sunil, in the preparations of engagement, he was making the guest list for Khanak. After seeing Shaan, Misha had excused herself and had left telling that she was going to pick Aayush from school…

Shaan entered into her room, he was seeing her room for the first time, there was big photo of her, which her friends had gifted her on her birthday, and another photo frame of her with her family, she's smiling gloriously in both of them, her room, he felt somewhat serene, there, she was sleeping, her hair all over, her hands below her head, Shaan slowly moves to the other side, smiles mischievously, and sleeps next to her silently…

He tucks her hair behind her ear, Khanak stirs, Shaan becomes silent, he's just looking at her… As on cue, Khanak slowly opens her eyes, at first his image is blurr, she blinks, rubs her eyes, sees him, she's shocked, she suddenly gets up on the bed…

Khanak: Shaan!! (terrified)

Shaan: itni jaldi utne ki kya zaroorat thi!! (gets up too, he's sitting opposite to her)

Khanak: what?? Anyways, what are you doing here??

Shaan: tumse milne aur kis liye!! (shrugs) for your kind information, after that fight, you didn't call me back!! (pouts)

Khanak: oh!! For your kind information, ladaai maine nahi aapne shuru kiya tha!! (gets up on her knees)

Shaan: maine?? (even he gets up on his knees) main nahi tumne!!

Both of them are ready to fight!! Dhruv was watching this from the door (only the fight)..

Dhruv: guys cool!! Tum log bhi na!! (both of them cooled themselves and both of them got out from the bed)

Dhruv: achcha abb shopping chalna hai ki nahi??

Shaan and Khanak (together) : lekin Aayush!!

Dhruv: waah!! Kya timing hai!! Don't worry, Aayush abhi aata hi hoga and yes even he's coming with us….

Shaan and Dhruv had left the room, allowing her to get ready, she was ready within 15 minutes, she had worn a red kurti on jeans, Shaan was surprised, he had heard that girls take more time to get ready, he was impressed, at the same time Aayush enters…

Aayush: mom!!! (runs to her)

Khanak (bends down and hugs him): Hey Aayush!!

Aayush's notices Shaan, who was broadly smiling…

Aayush: Shaan uncle!! (runs to him, Shaan picks him up)

Shaan: hey champ!!

Dhruv: Aayush start calling him papa!!

Aayush: yes!! Abhi mein aapko papa hi bhulaonga… (hugs him)

Shaan: that's good (hugs him too, Khanak is smiling)

Aayush gets ready and he's ready to go for shopping with his mom and his new dad!! Dhruv was also accompanying them…

Please comment😊
guys suggest blue or red, even im in confusion...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow nice update chandu...😊

aayush called shaan papa...that was so cute!!!!!

I really wished to hear ayush calling shaan as papa...it was short but a sweet one!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow it was such a sweet update i loved shan's sleeping beside khanak
and i think blue colour is perfect red shaadi ka theme rakhna engagement ka blue and i love blue
waiting for the shopping man update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovey update Chanadu
they fought for engegment theme lolzzz
red theme for weddimg wil b perfect n blue for engegment
wow!!! Aayush called him papa. i love that
Awaiting for shopping part
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute update
shanak conv was shweet and their nok jhok was the cutest
hmm misha is very intelligent
he is so caring that he is ready to talk to dr lata for khanak
gud that ayush will now call him papa... i was waiting for that
i guess blue them will work as red them will be perfect for the wedding
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww ayushs shaan papa loool love the update bbz..
atleast uhave told us y ur late so thats ok and we need to remeber everyone has a personal life so its fine...

cantr wait for the next update bbz xxxz

oh how about blue and red lool
Edited by aasma1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww loved it chandu when aayush called shaan as papa...loving it...

waiting for the nezt part...

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