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Posted: 13 years ago
lOved it chandu...update nxt soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
HELLO😃
i know you people would have been disappointed by me, im sorry, my sister was hell bent behind me, she didn't even allow me to touch my lappy😭
i'll give you a hint, if im not online and not updating, the reason would be my brother or my sister, if not pakka i'll update...
if you want late night updates, then its possible, you have to tell me😊
this update will be about shopping, how easily they know each other and entery of a very important person in Khanak's life...
Thanks for neethurose, diyak, aasma, jaisy, mounika, heer, rida, maneesha, saroj, yasharanrocks for liking it and commenting😊
Thank you so much guys for your encouragement😃
oh next update will be engagement function, i don't know the rituals involved, as our wedding (kannadigas wedding) is totally different, is it ok if its only the ring exchange ceremony, if you want anything added please do tell😊
love you all
chandu
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊

Part 26

They had entered into a good shopping place, Soch, they had decided, that they would go for clothes first and then for the ring. Dhruv is missing, Aayush is in Shaan's arms and Khanak beside him'

Aayush: mom!! Lets play a game!!

Khanak: game?? Even Shaan is confused!!

Aayush: yes!! We'll search a shervani for papa and papa will search a dress for you and for me, what say?? (he winked at her)

Khanak: lekin Aayush we don't know his choice'..

Shaan: yeah Aayush, and I seriously don't know what to buy for your mom'

Aayush: papa don't worry, Dhruv uncle will help you, mom even you don't worry, I'll help you'

Khanak: and you know his choice' Aayush noded sweetly, Khanak and Shaan are surprised, Dhruv joins them, Aayush tells him this, Dhruv does a thumbs up, and now Aayush is forwarded to Khanak's arms, their ways are different, Shaan had to go for 1st floor for her dress'

Shaan and Dhruv entered a counter, and they asked for engagement dress, they showed a boat load of dresses, some Dhruv disliked it and most of them was disliked by Shaan, he wanted a simple attire for her but yes fashionable, he knew atleast so much, by the way she dressed, it had told him that, she is the perfect girl for him, even he is the same, isn't he??

Finally, both of them had agreed to a dress, offcourse it was blue in colour, as Khanak wanted it. Now its time for Aayush's dress'

On the other side, Khanak and Aayush are in great confusion, they had ended up for 2 shervanis, but they had to choose 1, as we know she was bad at choosing, even when she used to shop for her father or brother, if she would have liked two of them, then she would buy 2 of them, but now can she buy 2??

Khanak: Aayush dono hi le lete hai!! Whichever he likes, he'll wear!!

Aayush: mom, don't make it complicated, comeon pick one!! (encourages her)

Khanak is in utter confusion, Aayuh gives the support, and finally she selects one, she's not sure whether, Shaan likes it or not'.

Khanak and Aayush had waited for them in the lobby, as they had taken so much time to come back, Khanak was agitated, she's not fine with her decision, what if he doesn't like it, she had never seen him wearing traditional clothes, she just wanted to drag him and ask about her choice, but she couldn't do that, Aayush cooled her, he randomly talked making her cool, now she had forgotten where she was, she was just listening to her son talk, who was making her laugh, hadn't he grown?? She felt like as though he was grown very much that he was now talking like a big child with responsibilities and she also feared that, he would leave her. She hugged him to her chest, tears in her eyes'

Khanak: Aayush!! Please don't ever leave him!! (chokes down)

Aayush moves out of the hug, wipes her tears, Mom!! If you tell to leave me also, then also I wouldn't leave you!! I promise!! Now stop crying mom!! Aapki engagement ho rahi hai, aur aap ek chote bachchi ki tarah ro rahe ho!! He tickles her, making her laugh, he knew how to keep his mom cheerful!! Now he'll be accompanied by his new papa, to make her cheerful!!

Finally, Shaan and Dhruv had made their way down, both of them not sure whether each one of them likes each others choice or not' They found mother and son talking freely, and Aayush making her laugh and even the staff'

Aayush: papa aap aagaye!! (Khanak turns to see at him, Shaan could guess that she had cried, but he didn't wanted to ask her in front of everyone, he knew her so well, that even in his absence, he could tell what his love was doing' but for now she was smiling, her eyes now showed the curiousity to know what he had brought for her'

Khanak: what took you so long??

Both of them shrugged easily'

Aayush made Shaan to look at the shervani, Khanak is looking at him intently, his eyes roved over the material, he slightly touched it too, yes he had liked it, it was just the way he wanted it, his eyes had lit up seeing the material, yes now he knows that, his love also knows him well, he looked up st her, she was waiting for him to tell something, but'

Aayush: papa try it now!! Even Khanak noded to it, he agreed too'

When he had come out, we could say that Khanak would fall, thanks to the chair, she was leaned on'. He was looking best in this attire, he was just looking like a greek god!! His face to die for!! Aayush couldn't control his joy, he clapped, seeing his papa, even Dhruv liked it!! Khanak smiled gloriously at him, she appreciated herself for her work of selecting a perfect shervani for him, her future husband, thinking about that made her feel like as though butterflies in her stomach'

Now its Aayush's turn, Aayush was looking very good, Aayush liked Shaan's choice for him, he didn't have the heart to take it off, he had to'

Finally Khanak's turn, she took the bag which held the dress, she didn't open the bag in front of him. Dhruv and Aayush had gone out, as Aayush wanted to eat!!

After 5 minutes or so, she returned, but she was wearing her normal dress, Shaan is confused'

Shaan: Khanak!! You didn't like it??

Khanak: no!! I mean I loved it!! (glorious smile)

Shaan: then why didn't you wear??

Khanak: that's because you are not suppose to see me in this (pointing towards the dress) befor engagement fuction'

Shaan: who told that??

Khanak: myself!! (proud)

Shaan: Khanak please pehnke aao na, I want to see you right now in this dress!! (orders)

Khanak shakes her head in no, it irritates him. They pay for it and leave the place. Shaan is trying to avoid her, Khanak is enjoying his irritation, shes controlling her giggle' They enter into Tanishq for the rings, they are seated next to each other, they've asked for the rings, the person who's gonna attend them, he's searching for their best collections, Khanak moves closer to him'

Khanak: naraaz ho?? (near his ear)

Shaan ignores her and looks around the shop'

Khanak: Shaan!! Meri taraf dekho toh sahi!! (makes him look at her) sorry!! (holding her ears)

Shaan can't be angry with her for longer time, he had actually understood her, her feelings, it was so much important for her, his appraoval on her wearing the dress on that day, he now smiles at his own behavior''

Shaan: atleast ring toh pehnke dikhaogi na!! (mocking)

Khanak: nahi!!

Shaan: why??

Khanak: if you want, I'll wear it on my right hand's ring finger, but not on the left one'.

Shaan: ok!! (smiles knowingly) The person shows the rings for both of them, even Dhruv and Aayush joined them, ring was finalized too'

Cards for the engagement was also decide, they had returned to their houses, tired, happy'.

The next 2 days had fleed, now even in hospital everyone new about them, some were happy and some people had their own gossips, guests were decided, Khandelwal's house, venue for the fuction'

On the engagement day, Khanak had taken leave on that day, she's tensed, her friends and her neighbours are their with her, but she wished for her parents'

Aayush also calmed her, telling that he was there for her, there was a sudden chearing outside all of them looked at the direction, it's Dhruv's dad!!

Please comment😊
Soch, is the place where i had shopped for my brother's wedding, photos of the dresses and ring in tomorrow's update😊
sorry once again if i've disappointed you...
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
babe ima gonna come back and comment.. but I dont mind late updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey 😊 sisters r always like that dont ask my sister trouble me and irritate me so much 😆
the update was damn good man i loved aayush's game it was very nice liked shan's irritation when he is irritated he looks cute hehehe
hey now who is this imp person in khanak's life i only know one and i think thats dhruv but he is happy for her i mean he is harmless so who is this another person
omg cant wait to know about it plzzz update tomorrow 😃
amd ya i also dont mind late updates
Edited by jaisyjazz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely update...
They have shopped for each other and have liked each others choice...that was so cute!!!!!!

hehe poor shaan he need to wait till the engagement day to look khanak in the engagement attire...


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Posted: 13 years ago
hey doc all the updates r lovely..especially the kiss part near the pool side man...😃
shopping for engagement was really cute and sweet..loved it doc...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update Chandu
The shopping part was awesome, Aayush wanted to play a game to find clothes for each other, This was superb idea, they knew each other choices vry well
khanak refuse to wear the dress, she want shaan to see her at engegment it self, they select the ring
wow!!!
waiting for next part and dhamal wala update in the engegment
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
actually its quite interesting that they have to choose the dress for the othere
i liked it that she'll be wearing the dress on the engagement... his approval on that day is goin to be more meaningful
ayush and khanak moments were super cute... ayush to sach main bara ho gaya hai
awww he cant remain angry with her and she said that she'll wear it in the right hand was shweet
she at times acts like a child in front of him... but she is so young and i guess he luvs to pamper her
lukin fwd to the engagement
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry ima late, was fasting all day amd got back from work amd fell asleep loool...
but anyways the update was lovely, loved how the chose for eachother... I loved ayush hes such a gem

update soon xxx

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