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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊
Thank you guys for liking and commenting😊 next update onwards touring Lonavala, this one is Shanakilicious😉 hope all of you like it😊

Part 23

Both of them had moved in, it was a beautiful house surrounded by greenery, Shaan was impressed, Khanak had felt like as though she had come back home…

Shaan:wow!!! Its really nice Khanak!! Does anyone stay here??

Khanak: thanks!! Yes!! Ramu kaka stays here, he takes care, come, u still have much more to see it.

Both of them have moved in thehouse, its quite huge, all are settled and moving around, Shaan is just beside Khanak…Aayush comes in front of them…

Aayush: Mom can we go for boating???

Khanak: (bends down) yes!! But tomorrow, I've to call for the guides… Aayush is upset, but suddenly gets cheered, goes to Shaan…

Aayush: uncle aapne swimming pool nahi dekha na, chalo mein dikhata hun (pulls him with his strength)

Shaan moves out with him, while Khanak allots room for everyone ad has got plans, meanwhile outside..

Aayush: pick me up (to Shaan, straining his head to see him)

Shaan smiles and picks him up, they are near the pool…

Aayush: uncle, main aapse kuch pooch saktha hun??

Shaan: yes!!

Aayush: aap Mom ko pasand karthe ho na??

Shaan: (surprised) Aayush!!! Khanak ne bataya tumhe???

Aayush: nahi! Lekin mujhe pata hai!! Aap mere mom ko kush rakhenge na??

Shaan: haan!! Aur aapko bhi!!

Aayush: toh aap mom se shaadi kar rahe ho?? (excited)

Shaan: yes!! kyun tum nahi chahthe??

Aayush: offcourse chahtha hun (hugs him tightly, Shaan hugs him too)

Shaan: Aayush your happy na??? (Aayush moves out of the hug)

Aayush: bahut zyaada!!! (both of them are grinning) Both of them move in…

Aayush: mom aap Shaan uncle se kab shaadi kar rahe ho??? (in front of everyone, as soon as he asks that question, everyone control their giggle, Khanak is shocked hearing the question, she closes her eyes in horror, Shaan is grinning)

Dadi: jaldi ho jayegi!!

Shaan: haan agar tumhari mom manjaaye na, to aaj hi hojayegi, kyun khanak???

Khanak eyes flee towards him, she glares at him, he's broadly smiling, Khanak runs out from there and enters the kitchen, Shaan has followed her…

Khanak is just standing and smiling, dreaming about her marriage with Shaan, thinking of that makes her body shiver, Shaan is just behind her, she opens her eye as she could feel his breathe on her neck….

Shaan slowly hugs her from back, Khanak responds and leans back on him, Shaan makes her turn towards him she has closed her eyes. Shaan brings his fingers and feels her every features on her face, her lashes, her nose, her full lips… His touch on her lips makes her to open her eyes, he could see that she was trembling, she has completely leaned on him, her hends were holding his shirt at his waiste, both are lost in eachother eyes…

Dhruv (from outside): bhai hum bhooke mar rahe hai yaha pe… (controlling his giggle)

Hearing this Khanak moves away from him slowly, she's smiling, Shaan is frustrated…. He pulls her back, Khanak is shocked, she tries to push him, but he's too strong for her…

Khanak: Shantanu!! Shaan is surprised hearing that, but still won't move a bit…

Shaan: haan Khanak!! (broadly smiling)

Khanak: shayad aapne suna nahi!! Voh…. she's stopped by him, as he had kept his index finger on her lips, he lingers on her lower lip, his eyes focused on her lips, her toes curl at his touch, both are very close to each other…

Aayush (from outside): Mom!!! (screams) Khanak and Shaan are horrified!! They quickly get off each other and runs outside in unison….

Outside Aayush is jumping in joy, all are happy, Shaan and Khanak are puzzled, Aayush sees them, comes near Khanak, pulls her down and hugs her tightly….

Khanak: Aayush kya hua?? Sab teek hai na?? (pulls him out of the hug)

Aayush: Mom aapki aur Shaan uncle ki engagement date fix hogayi!! (excited)

Shaan is happy even Khanak too, Dadi comes near her, she stands up…

Dadi: beta humne paanch din ke baad date fix kiya hai, teek hai na?? (with a smile)

Khanak is shy, she bends her head down and nods lightly, Dadi hugs her, all are happy, even her friends too…

Sunil: chalo bhai kuch kaa lete hai, bahut bhook lagi hai!! All move towards the dining, everything is gujju…Ramu kaka is standing next to the table and smiling…

Khanak: how sweet kaka aapko yaad tha!! (gushes)

Everyone take their seats, Shaan and Khanak find each one of them next to each other, Aayush is next to Khanak….

Shaan: yeh sab?? (looking at the food)

Khanak: this is tepla, dhokla, khandavi…. Pata hai tepla with aachar is the best…(dreamy)

Shaan: wow!! Maine kabhi try nahi kiya!!

Khanak: abb try karlo!! (she serves him slowly, everyone enjoys the food)

Evening also went smoothly with corn pakoda, as it was cold, all enjoyed and Khanak had took everyone around the farmhouse, as they had grape vegetation behind, they had a good walk, since ramu kaka was talking about everything, Shaan and Khanak were left behind, Aayush was enjoying his time with Akshay… Shaan and Khanak had held hands all the way, the group had decided to give them privacy…

After everyone returned all had been tired, but Shaan was not, they all had dinner, it was decided that tomorrow they'll be exploring it, everyone went to bed early…

Khanak, Aayush and Misha in one room. Shaan was not able to sleep, he slowly stepped into Khanak's room, saw her sleeping with Aayush, had a sudden wish of getting into the bed next to her, but stopped himself, moved towards her side, slowly near her…

Shaan: Khanak!! (wispers) Khanak stirred in sleep…

Shaan: Khanak!! (sweetly and lightly shakes her) Khanak opened her eyes slowly, she's shocked, she gasps and sits on the bed…

Khanak: Shaan!!! (horrified)

Shaan: aaram se bolona, chalo na bahar chalthe hai!! (casually standing)

Khanak: Shaan!! You've gone mad (stands in front of him)

Shaan: voh toh tabhi hogaya tha, jab maine tumhe pehli baar dekha tha!!! Abb chalo… (brings her out, not allowing her to talk)

Outside the room,

Khanak: ek minute Shaan!! Main kuch lati hun, bahar bahut tand hai!! (turns to go in, Shaan stops her)

Shaan: main hoon na!!! (Khanak is confused, Shaan holds her hand and brings her near the pool, it was so cold she moves closer to him, rubbing her arms and yawning) Shaan smiles at her. He coolly sits down, and inserts his legs inside the water in the pool, as though he's used to this weather, offcourse he was staying in London, waha par tho isse zyaada tand hogi na, Khanak smacks her head, but she's not used to, she feeling very cold…

Shaan: sit down Khanak!! Makes space between his legs….

Khanak: you must be joking!! Mein yahi bet jaati hun (makes an attempt of sitting next to him, but Shaan pulls her hardly that she lands in between his legs and her legs inside the water, Khanak shrieks because of the cold water, hugs her legs to her upper body)

Shaan: Khanak kuch nahi hoga, leave your legs!!

Khanak: pagal hogaye ho!!! Kitna thand hai!! Aisa tho mere legs ka saare vessels(arteries and veins) clot hojayenge (pouts sweetly)

Shaan: dumbo ki tarah baat mat karo!! Tumhari body ke liye jo heat chaiyiye voh main dedoonga… (Khanak is confused, Shaan slowly releases her legs and they get inserted into the water)

Before Khanak could ask further any questions, Shaan had hugged her closely, his chin resting on her shoulder, Khanak could sense that he was nuzzling her neck, her hair sticking to his face, she has closed her eyes, Shaan getting himself familiar to her fragrance….

Khanak: Shaan!! Why I am sensing some trouble?? Shaan laughs throatly, and hugs her tightly…

Shaan: Khanak I was scared!!! (lloking at her from side)

Khanak: during car race!! (Suppresses her giggle)

Shaan: nahi jab Aayush told that you were not spending enough time with him!! Khanak is silently hearing…

Shaan interlinks his fingers with her…

Shaan continues, I was scared that you would regret the decision of getting along with me, his hold tightens…

Shaan makes her turn towards him, sideways…

Shaan: Khanak I can't think of a life without you!! Khanak couldn't answer that, she gently cupped his face raised herself and pecked him on his forehead, slowly comes down, Shaan makes her sit on his lap, her legs crossed sideways, both are looking into each oter eyes, intensely, Shaan's hand is now on her waiste, pulls her towards him, Khanak shivers at his touch, Shaan slowly moves his face towards her, seeking her permission, she closes her eyes, raises her head and parts her lips, giving him permission, Shaan gets it, closes the distance between him and her, by slowly kisses her on her lips, he covers his lips on her lower lips, she arched her back, Shaan holds her tightly, Khanak's hand is holding his shoulders tightly….

coming up: shanak at tiger's point and the whole group in bushi dam...

Please comment😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg thwy kissed wooow poved it amd what a shanaklicious update up where right chandu..
thanks xxx

p.s. only ave time to write this at work
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww lovely lovely lovely
the kiss was to die for hayeee so sensual i m dead now hahahaha
i loved the line 'voh toh main tabhi hogaya jab tumhe dekha' wow it was wonderful the interlinking of their fingers was so warm while reading all this my dil was doing balle balle hahahahaha
and ya about i think 8 or 10 years i m not sure the roads of lonavala were not good but now they have made big big lanes and all streched out the plains of the express highway
reading the precap i cant wait for the next waiting eagerly for the next update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update chandu...finally they kissed...pool romance is amazing...
precap is interesting...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update chandu
all around greeny n Aayush OMG!! asking shaan to marry his mom how sweet 😆 after 5 days engagement wow!!
kitchen scene was awesome shaan hugged her from back n other shouting at them for food 😆
wow!! pool side romance kya baat hai shaan lage raho 😉e
khanak feeling cold n shaan giving her heat 😳 holding her tight n make her sit between his legs
their first kiss on pool side hayyeee!!!!!!!!!!!😳
loved the whole update
looking forward to tiger point
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Posted: 13 years ago

hey it was awesome...😃

aayush is happy wid shanak marriage n deir engagement is within few days grt...😃

kichen part loved it...shanak convo superb...

n poolside romance...😍...

eagrly waiting fr nxt part...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
ayush conv with shaan was super cute "aapko mom ko pasand kartay ho na"
hayeee... 😊
shanak conv was lovely
i actually wanted him to talk abt the ayush part and she make him realize that she luvs him a lot by a sweet gesture... one that was much needed
slowly and gradually they are getting close and that simply lovely
wow em so excited that engagement is fixed
lukin fwd to mati at dam and shanak moments at tiger's point
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
WOWWW...waiting fr dere engagemnt:::...shaaN n aayush ll shaRe son-fathEr reltioNship ...lovely...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊
sorry guys im in a hurry, was preparing for my brother's b'day party, didn't get time to complete im really sorry and tomorrow going out with my family, will be back by tomorrow night, im really very very sorry, hope you forgive, i'll update on sunday for sure...
sorry once again, take care😊
love you all😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ok chandu will wait till sunday for the update

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