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Posted: 13 years ago
finally I finished reading all the remaining updates.
wow!! your story is so cute & sweet.
loved their first kiss at the pool-side. he fulfilled her dream too of seeing Tiger Hill. I love the song u put "that's all I really wanna do". enjoyed their shopping too. she refused to wear the dress before Engagement Day, I support her.
& I think Blue will b best for engagement.😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😊
hope all of them are doing fine, i wanted to thank Pranjal, for her idea on picnic part, which you've loved it, so thanks a lot pranju, missing you...
Thanks a lot to pooja, shubhadharane, neethurose, aasma, jaisy, heer, rida, niki, mounika, maneesha, diyak, priyashree for liking it and commenting😊 Thank you so much guys😊
here's the engagement part, im not sure whether its upto your expectations, and yes the theme is blue😊

Part 27

Dhruv's dad is a cheerful person, he was best friend of Khanak's dad, and Khanak would mention him as her first crush, Khanak is very happy to see him, this was a surprise from her friends, in the next moment she's hugging him and tears are flowing freely from her eyes, he's hugged her back'.

Khanak: I missed you DD (she used to call him that in her past days)

DD: agar itna miss karthi thi, toh call kyun nahi kiya?? (chokes)

Khanak wipes her tears, moves out of the hug

Khanak: who meri naye wala bf ke saath busy thi!! (winks at him and smiles)

DD: achcha!! Aur uska naam Shantanu hai!! (smiling) (Khanak is shy) im happy for you beta!! (pecks her on forehead)

DD: achcha batao, kya kya shopping ki hai, abb main apni beti ki shaadi karoonga!!

Dhruv: Dad, seriously beti!! (makes a face)

DD: agar bahu nahi ban sakthi to kya hua, beti toh hai hi!!

Misha: toh phir Dhruv Khanak ki bhai hua hai na?? (pulling out of the senti part)

Raj: correct!! Abb se Khanak, dhruv ko bhaiyya kehke bullaigi!! (pulling Dhruv's leg)

Dhruv: oh plese main kisiki bhai nahi banne wala hun!! Waise dad main aur Khanak ne decide kiya hai, that we'll continue our affair part after her marriage!! (siddles up to her, Khanak pushes him)

Khanak: no ways of cheating my husband!! (blurts)

All of them: my Husband aah!!! (grinning)

Aayush: agar kisi ne meri mom ko tease kiya na, it won't be good!!

DD talks with Aayush, engagement preparations are on fire, they had to reach Khandelwal's house by evening.

Make up artist had come for her make-up, though Khanak had denied it, but her friends insisted her, only light make up was agreed by Khanak'

Khanak's dress

Her hairs were left in curls, she looking gorgeous in the dress, her waiste is exposed, it is adored by those beads, she had let her dupatta flow on her hands, her nech and ears adored with jewellery...

Aayush is wearing a cream coat on a black shirt and pant, looking very cute...

Evening, Shaan on otherside was all ready

looking like a greek god in his attire. Khandelwal's all are ready, Sunil and Akki in their 3piece suite, Madhvi and boo in their designer sarees, dadi in her simple attire

Khandelwal house is all decorated with white and blue flowes, house is all lightened up, looking good for the engagement party...

Guests all have come, they are waiting for the bride's side. Khandelwals are grouped and pulling Shaan's leg, they get the message that bride side has arrived, Shaan and everyone turned towards the entrance, Shaan's eyes searches for Khanak...

DD is standind in the front, with Dhruv, Aayush is in Dhruv's arms and Raj, he's impressed by Khandelwal's for their arrangement, Khanak is standing behind them with Misha and all other people whom she knew...

Khandelwal's don't have any idea about DD, DD is introduced to them, DD is happy after meeting Shaan, Shaan bends down to take his blessing, but DD hugs him, he's happy for Khanak, Shaan is impatient, he wanted to see her, his love, but DD is completely covering her, Dhruv and Raj, sees that, they are controlling their laughter...

Aayush jumps down from Dhruv's arms, goes to his dad.

Aayush: (Shaan picks him up) papa your looking handsome... (his eyes sparkling)

Shaan: thanks, aap bhi bahut achche lag rahe ho!!

Sunil: arrey hamari honewali bahu kaha hai bhai??

Dhruv: woh uncle ghar par hai!! (joking)

Shaan: what?? (terrified)

Raj: chill!! he's joking! presenting Miss Khanak Mishra...(all of them move apart, Shaan is mesmerized by her simplicity and her beauty, Khanak is shy, she's bent her head down, she goes towards dadi to take her blessings, she hugs Madhvi and khushboo and Sunil and Akki gives her a side hug, she's not looking towards Shaan)

Misha: Shaan you can close your mouth (giggles)

Akki pats him on his back, Shaan rubs his hair at the nape of his neck...

Madhvi: chalo chalo sab chalthe hai, engagement shuru karte hai... (Aayush is now transferred into Akki's arms)

They make them sit together, on the chairs which is placed in the centre of the hall. Madhvi brings a plate, and does teeka for both of them from Dulha's side, DD does teeka once again for both of them from Dulhan's side...

After that rings are brought



Khanak's ring

Vs Solitaire Diamond 18k Engagement Ring

Shaan's ring

They are made to stand opposite to each other, Khanak finally looks at him, Shaan is smiling at her, Madhvi gives Shaan, the ring, he takes it from her, he extends his left hand, she slowly keeps her left hand, he puts the ring onto her ring finger, ever so slowly, everyone claps...

Khanak also places the ring on his ring finger!! All are happy!!!

Mubbarak ho Shanak ki engagement ho gayi!!!!

Dadi gives them sweet, which was first eaten by Shaan and Khanak had taken the bite from the left off, that's one of the ritual...

Party is on, DD is easily gelling with Khandelwal's...

Dadi: Khanak beta, humne shaadi ke liye dates dekhi hai, dus din ke baad muharat nikal aaya hai, tumhare liye teek hai na??

Khanak is shocked, dadi bahut jaldi hai!!!

Shaan: arrey kya jaldi hai, dadi teek hai, dus din ke baad shaadi, Khanak teek hai!!

Khanak: no shaan!! i've still got my exams...

Shaan: exams hi toh hai, shaadi ke baad complete kar lena!! what say dad??

Sunil: haan beta!! we don't have any problem with your studies and your work, you can continue after your marriage also!!

Aayush: yeh!!! mumma aur papa ki shaadi hai!!!! (excited) Khanak is not ready, but her friends and DD convinces her, she's agreed for now, but still she's not fine with it...

Party continues, all are dancing, even Aayush, Khanak is trying to smile, but tension is clear in her face, Shaan has noticed that, but for now, all are coming forward to wish them, even Dr. Lata had come, she was happy for both of them. At one point all are busy, enjoying the party, Shaan talks to dadi and pulls Khanak to a side and takes her to his room

Khanak: Shaan!! kya kar rahe ho?? (they are now in his room)

Shaan: Khanak!! (holds her hands in his hands) kya hua?? why are you tensed??

Khanak: Shaan this is so early, i don't think so that im ready for a marriage right now!! Aayush, tum, mere studies, i have that fear that i'll mess up, agar main Aayush ko time nahi depaoungi then he'll be sad, agar main tumhe time nahi dun, then u'll be upset, agar main apne studies ko dhyaan na dun, then i'll be ruining my parent's dream...

Shaan understands her, he moves near her, cups her face...

Shaan: Khanak chill!!!! i know that u won't mess up with anyone of us, i agree to that Aayush requires attention, don't worry hum dono usse sambhalenge, aur tumhari studies, main ho na, i'll help you and your parents dream will come true!! and me, im there in your schedule now, so mere liye chal jayega, bus thoda sa time, hamare romance ke liye de dena... (Shaan is grinning, Khanak smiles)

Khanak: lekin Shaan!! your family??

Shaan: our family Khanak!! trust me, they don't have any problem with this!!

Khanak smiles and Shaan engulfes her into a tight hug, Khanak is resting her head on his chest, her hands at his back, Shaan is caressing her back...

Shaan: congratulations on your engagement!! Khanak mishra!!

Khanak: Same to you!! (still engulfed)

Shaan: waise Khanak!! tumhara sirname Mishra hai, yeh mujhe aaj hi pata chala!!

Khanak is out of the hug

Khanak: what do you mean, you didn't know???

Shaan: tumne kabhi bataaya hi nahi!!

Khanak: what?? aise kaise bataya nahi!! i have my full name on my id, which i wear everyday!!

Shaan: achcha baba sorry!!, aaj toh mat lado!! (pulls her, his hand now comes in contact with bare waiste, Khanak gasps at his touch, Shaan moves his hand upwards, so that its on her clothing now)

Khanak has closed her eyes, Shaan slowly cups her face and pecks on her forehead, Khanak slowly opens her eyes, Shaan is too close, faces inches away, Shaan's lips slowly closes on her lips, he kisses her fully, her hands rested on his waiste, pulling kurta down with force, this time she also responds to the kiss!! Both are lost in their wonderland!!!!

Still party is on😉

Please comment😊
if there's any mistake, please forgive😊
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayyy engagement hogayi i loved the D'day the dresses were so good specially the rings i loved the rings
DD so sweet i like DD hahhahaha dhruv continue affair part after marriage was damn funny and shan aye haye shaadi ke liye kitna bechain hai
khanak ka sochna bilkul sahi hai but our shan is there na as he has promised he will take care of everything aur jab shanak saath toh kuch nahi ho sakta
this kiss was really very needed at this time hahah😆
waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update
yipee engagement ho gai ... the dresses were superb
wow even the date for shadi i fixed
i love the entry of DD and ayush to jab aata hai wo moment super cute hojata hai
the rings were beautiful
dat is shoo shweet of shaan that he realizes that she is tensed and he makes her understand in the most shweetest way
they way he told her how to adjust time was super cute
wow studies and romance saath main hoga ;)
and tes hug and kiss hayeee... wht exactly was neede at that time
lukin fwd to the next part
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wohooo shanak engagement hogayi...The engagement attires are so beautiful and so the rings...awww the kiss was much needed...

now 10 daz for shanak's marriage...Lol khanak is having xams... then shaan has to do night out...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey doc..update is beautifull...wow they got engaged..their dresses r beautifull...the way he told to adjust with time was nice yaar...and their beautifull kiss was lovely...waiting for next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
shanak ki engegment is ready
loved the way DD, Dhruv n Raj cover her n how shaan was looking for khanak desperatly, when saw her he left his mouth open
So shaadi is after 10 days bt Khanak is worried abt her studies n how she wil manage with Aayush n shaan plus her studies
room part was hoot khanak respond to his kiss kya baat hai
she wil soon follow shaan's steps lolzzz
waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
yayyyg engagement hogi, cantr wait for the wedding preperations...
there dresses are beautifula nd thay kiss wqs so cute loved it's.. xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello:)
sorry guys, thought of posting an early update, but my lappy's charger is not working:(
i've given it for the repair, that person has taken the laptop with him, he told that he'll be returning it on monday, as the problem is with the laptop, im doing this by my phone, sorry won't be able to update this weekend also:(:(
take care, love you all, enjoy the weekend:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
no problem bbz, we can wait xxx

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