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Posted: 13 years ago
It's ok
chandu will wait for the update on sunday
njoy the party n hv fun
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Posted: 13 years ago
babe, no worries have fun xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chandu8881

Hello😊
sorry guys im in a hurry, was preparing for my brother's b'day party, didn't get time to complete im really sorry and tomorrow going out with my family, will be back by tomorrow night, im really very very sorry, hope you forgive, i'll update on sunday for sure...
sorry once again, take care😊
love you all😊


ok chandu enjoy😊

have fun...will wait 4 ur update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
u said u will update today so r updating waiting for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
its k bt missing ur update...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hello😃
sorry for the delay😊 u people are so cute, jaisy, sneha, mounika...
Thanks a lot to pooja, neethurose, aasma, jaisy, heer, mounika, maneesha (both of them), rida, saroj, Sneha for liking and commenting😊 Thank you so much guys, hope its upto your expectations and also compensating for your waiting😊 i've become so filmy, can't beleive, i've included a song here also, i have to stop it😆, sorry if i've disappointed you😊

Part 24

After sometime, Khanak is resting her head on his left shoulder, half asleep, he's messing with her hair, straightening it, curling it'. It's already half past midnight'

Shaan: Khanak!!!

Khanak: hmm'(struggling hard to be awake)

Shaan: I love you!! (pulling her more closer)

Khanak: hmm' She has entered into her dreamland'.

Shaan: when are you going to reply??? Khanak doesn't answer, she'e slept off' Since she didn't respond, Shaan looks down at her, she's sleeping, she's snuggled into his chest, she's secured in his arms, Shaan smiles at her sleeping figure' He reluctantly gets up, he wanted to spend some more time there, but it was getting colder. He slowly got up and carried her in his arms. He carried her to her room, mde her sleep, covered her with the blanket, she stirred in sleep and moved closer to Aayush. Shaan bend down slowly whispered good night and pecked his would be wife on her forehead and had left the room silently'

Next day morning 5:00

Shaan tiptoed into her room, he was fresh and squeaky clean, it was clrearly telling that he had not slept whole night. Khanak was in deep sleep, Shaan moved closer and shaked her'

Shaan: Khanak!! (near her ear)

Khanak buried herself into the blanket, Shaan had no idea what to do, he slowly carried her in his arms, brought her to the hall, placed her on the sofa, she's still sleeping. Shaan didn't wanted her to wake up, but he had too'

Shaan: Khanak!! (taps on her cheeks) Khanak opens her eyes, half.

Khanak: Shaan!!(in her sleep drugged voice) (closes her eyes and settles herself on the sofa)

Shaan: haan!! Tumhara Shaan!! Abb utho!! (taps her once again)

Khanak: (opens her eyes) Shaan, problem kya hai, soney kyun nahi de rahe ho?? (Frustated)

Shaan: Khanak please utho!!! We have to go out and I want to show you something!! (Enthu)

Khanak: (fully awake and fully frustated) Shaan!! Itni subah subah kaha jaana hai tumhe??

Shaan: tum chalo toh sahi!! (makes her get up, she reluctantly gets up and freshens)

Shaan is driving, Khanak is sitting next to him, fully irritated, Shaan smiles at her, he tries to get hold of her hand, she takes off it from him, furiously' Shaan lets her be, as he loves her, then obviously he should her ways'.He had reached, actually they had reached, he had reached happily, she was sulking all the way' Shaan got down, moved to her side and opened the door for her, she gets down and tries to look around, though sun has rised, but its covered with fog, she goes till the end, she's trying to see, Shaan holds her hand from back'

Shaan: ghirne ka iraada hai kya!! Main tumhe itne zaldi nahi chodnewala hun!! (pulls her towards him) infact main tumhe zindagi barr nahi chodunga!!

Khanak tries to get to move out, her struggles are thrown into the air, finally she agrees to him'

Shaan: sorry Khanak!! I know I've not left you sleep!! (holding his ears)

Khanak smiles at him, bring back his hands down, lekin Shaan where are we?? Yaha pe toh kuch nahi dikhayi de raha hai'

Shaan: ek minute!! (by this time sun has fully raised, due to the bright light, fog is all cleared, she could see that view, which she wished to see from childhood, but she had not got chance, as her father whenever they used to come, he would promise her to take her, but couldn't do that. She's so mesmerized by the natural beauty, it's the tigers point')

( this is the website for you to watch, sorry they are not giving the option to copy the photo - <a href="http://www.tripadvisor.in/LocationPhotos-g608474-d2013756-Tiger_Point-Lonavala_Maharashtra.html"><img alt="Photos of Tiger Point, Lonavala" src="http://media-cdn.tripadvisor.com/media/photo-s/02/39/5f/36/the-view-of-the-mountain.jpg"/></a><br/>This photo of <a href="http://www.tripadvisor.in/Attraction_Review-g608474-d2013756-Reviews-Tiger_Point-Lonavala_Maharashtra.html">Tiger Point</a> is courtesy of TripAdvisor)

Khanak: Shaan I can't believe this!! (fully excited) am I really here?? Am I still dreaming?? (closes her mouth in shock)

Shaan: this is real Khanak!! I knew this was one of your dream, to see tigers point, in the morning' actually Dhruv told this!!

Khanak: thanks a lot Shaan!! (hugs him) this will be the best morning in my life'

Shaan: I don't think so Khanak!! You still have the whole life to spend with me, I promise to fill your life with surprises (looking at her)

Khanak: Shaan!! I don't want anything unless you're beside with me!! Mujhe bus choti choti si Khushiyan maayine raktha hai, mujhe bus tumhare time chaiyiye mereliye aur mere Aayush ke liye'

Hearing those words from her, which was clearly telling tell him that even she was in love with him, had brought tears in his eyes, he hugged closer to his heart'

Shaan: I'll promise to be the best husband for you and best papa for Aayush'

Khanak: I Love you too Shaan!! Hearing those words, he wanted to jump in joy and yell to the world that she belongs only to him, but he moved out of the hug, pecked on her forehead'

Shaan -

Dekhun tujhe, chhoo lo tujhe, Sochun tujhe, sunu tujhe
Bas yunhi tujh mein dooba rahun
Dooba rahun dooba dooba rahun
Main tujh mein hi tujh mein dooba rahun

Thats all I really wanna do - x4 (Khanak was surprised, but she continued on, moves out of the hug)
Khanak-
Dekhun tujhe, choo lo tujhe, sochun tujhe, sunu tujhe
Bas dil tujh mein dooba rahe
Dooba rahe dooba dooba rahe
Dil tujh mein hi tujh mein dooba rahe

Thats all I really wanna do - 8 times
Shaan- (walking along the roads hand in hand)
Pehle mein tujhse milta tha
Abb main tujh mein khulta jaaun
Khwaabon mein agar haath badhaaun
Haath tera paaun
Khanak - Haan khushboo ke jaise mujhe odh le tu
Har khayal mahekta ho
Ehsaas leke tere saath ka
Har lamha sarakta ho
Shaan - Dooba rahun dooba dooba rahun
Main tujh mein hi tujh mein dooba rahun

Thats all I really wanna do - x4
Khanak ' (walking in the streams, opposite to each other, thowing some water on each other)
Kya yeh chhalka? kya hua hai?
Do kinaare mil rahe hain
Sang sang hum paaniyon pe chal rahe hain
Shaan - Neende nahin hai yeh main aa raha hoon
Aane do leharane do
Saanson se teri main judne laga hoon
Khwahishein bann jaane do
Khanak -
Dooba rahe dooba dooba rahe
Dil dooba dooba rahe

Thats all I really wanna do... x7

The song was meant for both of them, he was just singing for her, and she for the first time singing for him'

Both of them had reached back at home, all were waiting for them, Dadi wanted to go to a temple, it was decided that they'll be visiting Ekira devi temple, famous in Lonavala, after that boating for Aayush and Bushy dam for all of them

(website for Ekira devi temple, same problem, no option of copying the photo, they've given a series of website, you can use any one to look at the pic - <a href="http://www.tripadvisor.in/LocationPhotos-g608474-d2475669-Ekvira_Devi_Temple-Lonavala_Maharashtra.html"><img alt="Photos of Ekvira Devi Temple, Lonavala" src="http://media-cdn.tripadvisor.com/media/photo-s/02/79/07/12/filename-dsc05837-jpg.jpg"/></a><br/>This photo of <a href="http://www.tripadvisor.in/Attraction_Review-g608474-d2475669-Reviews-Ekvira_Devi_Temple-Lonavala_Maharashtra.html">Ekvira Devi Temple</a> is courtesy of TripAdvisor)



boating for Aayush



bushy dam

A special pooja for Shanak and Aayush's sake at Ekira devi, after that Aayush had gone crazy for boating, Shanak with Aayush in one boat, Raj is with misha, Dhruv is left with dadi, sunil is with madhvi and Akki with boo..

After that, her friends had wanted to visit bushy dam, their wish was also fulfilled, once again Raj was seen Misha, Dhruv can't shut his mouth..

Dhruv: oye Raj!! tu kab se Misha ke saath rehne laga?? (his eyebrows dancing)

Raj: (not wanted to left out) jab se mujhe pata chala hai ke, that Misha's husband is leaving her (winks at Dhruv) Misha quickly leaves his hand, and glare at him.

Misha: oh please!! dream on!! he would never leave me...(confident)

Shaan: kya confidence hai (gelling with them)

Khanak: hogi kyunn nahi, love marriage jo tha... (smiles) Misha is blushing...

Aayush: mom!! (he's gone way forwards with Akshay) Khanak is terrified, she tries to move to him as fast as she can, she know that he's safe with Akki, but still she is the mother...

Khanak: Aayush waapas aajao!! (she's about to fall, Shaan holds her, she smiles at him, but Shaan was tensed)

Dhruv: oh super mom!! apne aapko sambhalo pehle!!

Shaan: Khanak please be carefull!! (still holding her hand, both of them are close enough)

Raj: (clears his throat) this is called public place...

everyone at unison,yells RAJ!!!!

Everyone are super tired with amount of fun they had today!! All of them were very happy, a sudden call to Sunil and Akki,had informed that, their trip was over, still they had to see so much, no one had the wish of going back, but they had to, it was decided that they'll be leaving early in the morning...

Shaan had shown some concern towards Khanak, he had left her to sleep and rest...

Coming up: shopping for engagement

Please comment😊
Edited by chandu8881 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oooh loved it, love shaans character the way her feels for khanak and everyone close to her... engagement wooow man cantr wait then there will be shaddi tayris loool.
ur not filmy we like these kindof this loool
xxx
p.s. u gonna update tomorrow
Edited by aasma1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awww shan is sooo sweet and caring and so romantic also i love these budthals

he picking her up in his arms made me blush hehhehehe

trip over so soon oh no :( but its ok we had lots of fun

waiting for the engagement shopping

update soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update
Poor Khanak!! shaan didn't let her sleep, he took khanak to full fill her dream at tiger point n sew early morning view
they sang and become filmy lolzzz i love that 😆
they visit other places and had fun, the picture are mind blowing Chandu. seems the place is very nice and once to see
Dhruv kabhi nai sudhrega she called khanak
oh super mom!! apne aapko sambhalo pehle!! i loved this line
they all are very funny
awaiting for shopping part
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update...loved shaans suprise for khanak...😊

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