RS: Asman ki chand and Superhero

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's a beautiful moonlit night.Navya comes to d balcony.The moon is full in d sky.Cool breeze is blowing.It touches navya's body nd mind.She fells good. .

Anant was having shower after returning 4m office.When he comes out sees navya not in d room.He realises she must b in d balcony.So he goes there. .

In d balcony navya was reliving her&anant's college days.Anant comes there.Sees navya. . .standing alone. . .her hair is flowing with d cool brezze. . .her eyes to d moon, seeming like talking with moon.His heart beats a bit fast.A smile comes on his face seeing this heavenly beauty of his loving wife.Navya is in his favourite blue saree.That has made him luv her beauty more..

Anant comes near to navya.Navya sweetly smiles to him. .
Navya: anant. .dekhona kitna khubsurat sham hai
Anant: hmmm...garden se phoolo ka kitna khubsurat khusboo araha hai
Navya: aur asman meh chand toh dekho. . .aca lag raha hai jace. .muskura rahe hai..
Anant: jante ho...keu muskura rahe hai?
Navya: nahi...keu?
Anant: chand v anant-navya ki pyar dekhke sharma gayi hai. Aur iss liye sharma k muskura rahe hai..

Navya blushes..blushingly smiles to him..

Now both r silent.Enjoying d beauty all around them.Suddenly navya realises anant is starring at her
Navya: kiya hua? Ace kiya dekh rahe ho?
Anant: chand..
Navya: mr.bajpai...chand asman meh hai..

Anant comes closer to her.Holds her face in his hands.Then looking romanticly in her eyes says..
Anant: mera chand toh yaha hai..mere pass..
Navya: (blushingly) matlab?
Anant: uc chand ki khubsurti meri iss chand ki khubsurti ki samne kuch nahi hai. Aur iss chand ki chandni meh hamesha khud ko kho jata hoon mein..

navya blushes. .smiles & nd hugs him..
Navya: agar mein chand hoon toh tum kiya ho jante ho?
Anant: ummm..nahi. Tum bolo na..
Navya: tum iss chand ki asman ho. Aur hamesha mujhe apni shine meh chupake rakhte ho. Mujhe kabhi dur jane na dena...ace hi apni shine se lagake rakhna..

anant hugs her more tightly.Both enjoys their hug

after a while they finishes their hug.Shares a hot eyelock.Then both looks at d moon..
Anant: jante ho navya..jabse tum meri jindegi meh ayi ho..tabse mein superhero ban chuka hoon..
Navya: superherooo!!!
Anant: hmmm...batao iss superhero ka naam kiya hai?
Navya: ummm...superman!!!
Anant: superman?. . .nahi
navya: nahi?...ironman?
Anant: ummm...nahi..
Navya: toh phir batman!!
Anant: yeh v nahi..
Navya: toh phir kiya hai anant...bolo na

anant smiles naughtyly.Turns her turns her nd holds her in his arms tightly.Romanticly moves her hair 4m her back.Then takes his lips to her ear nd says..
Anant: 'your man'..
navya gets surprised. She makes a sweet blushing smile..
Navya: acca? Toh meri iss superhero meh kiya kiya super powers hai?
Anant kisses hotly on her back,neck,ear lob. .
Anant: iss superhero ud nahi sakta...pad tumhe leke pyar ki asman meh kho ja satka hai..
anant takes his lips to other side. Kisses her neck nd ear lob...
Anant: iss superhero meh ladne k liye super powers nahi hai...pad apni super girl ki chehre peh muskan lane k liye sari dunia se lad sakta hai. Tumhari khushi k liye apni jaan v de sakta hai..
navya's eyes fills with tear...
Anant: lekin iss superhero meh ek super power hai joh aur koyi superhero toh kiya iss jaha meh kisi k pass nahi hai...
anant turns her to him.Holds her face in his hands..
Anant: mein apni supergirl se itna pyar karta hoon...itna pyar karta hoon...k uc pyar k samne rab v jhuk jate hai
navya cann't control her tears.She bursts out nd hugs anant tightly..
Navya: keu itna pyar karte ho mujhe?Keu? Aab iss pyar k bina ek pal v jina muskil hai mere liye.Kabhi v iss pyar ko mujhse dur mat karna...tumhara supegirl sayed mar jayegi
Anant: arey...pagal ladki! Yeh superhero sref tumhari hai...aur kisi ki nahi.Tumse ek pal ki duriyan iss superhero ka jann le leta hai.I luv u so much..

navya controls her.Then they sit on d balcony.Navya keeps her head on anant's sholdier.

After a while she goes sleep like that.Anant picks her up on his arms carefuly.Then he lays her down on d bed.Few hairs fell on her face.Anant moves them.Then kissing her forhead he sits near her on d floor beside d bed.Then holds her hand..keeps it on his heart..
Anant: sun rahi ho?Yeh dil kace rab ki sukriyan kar raha hai.Unhone apni jannat ki iss chand ko mere pyar banake bhej diya.I promise u bahot pyar karunga tumhe.Itna pyar ki uc k samne sat asman v chota pad jayega. I luv u so much..
anant sitting beside bed..keeping his face on her hand goes sleep..
Edited by Sagar_Minhaz - 13 years ago

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-Divya.S- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wah wah sagar kya dialogues hai, excellent, mindblowng, romantic n touchy.. superb yar, i juz loved it.. it was a marvelous rs, do write more yar.. tu toh anant ke jaisa bangaya dialogues likhne me.. 👏 ⭐️
Edited by -diva-shamya- - 13 years ago
Ultrachic thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was amazing with touching dialogues of Anant...gud one!
keep writing more!!
asihaseen thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!!!what to say.just loved it.keep writing more and more
neetha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ahhha sagar mere chotu..kya romantic lines hai.😃.nt bad huh..tu toh ek dum romance ka hero ban gaya hai.😎.very nicely penned..👏do write more

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