fan made 6th epi!!!! complete posted!!

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"oh lets go", vijay said to jay but she was in her dreamland thinking of AD, reciprocating himwith UV. He is handsome and a perfect match for her and a true rajwada and a player like UV and she is impressed like hell. It was after one whole year that somebody has attracted her so much that she can't keep her mind aside from his thoughts. Yeah she has to be quick in telling him, her feelings towards him though she couldn't lose him but this time it will be all fair. She was in her own turmoil, smiling and lost in her thoughts. Everybody was staring at her, so vijay just held her hand and shaked her lightly and she was now back to senses

"man where were u in some dreamland " manyata asked

Uday remarked "I think u can call it AD land " Saying this he held Manyata by her waist and pulled her closer.

"oh ho Abhaydev Singh, nice choice jay" unnati remarked being surprised

"finally j bhai has found an another toy named AD..haha" vijay said laughing loudly

Everybody laughed at it.

"Oh stop it Vijay bhai, he is just a friend for now " remarked J, blushing.

"U have met him an hour ago, Woah great speed j..!! " uday exclaimed!

"u all are so busy in ur discussion that no one noticed me in the whole party except vijay, and dada u didn't even tell me how am I looking " unatti said it with a dissappointed look

"unatti u are smart enough. Now ur dada's days and nights all belong to Manyata. He has no time for anyone now " Vijay says winking at Uday

Manyata blushed at this and Uday's face lit up with a blushing smile

"I think we should urgently get them married or else there childrens would be talking part in there parents marriage..haha " added J

"I tell you' they are so desperate for each other " vijay remarked

" I think now I have to take care for u all three ,one more complaint and u both love birds would be caged up in your respective houses. Did u get that and J do u wish to lose ur new friend??hmm...anymore queries or I think u all have understood " winked Uday

"I didn't hear or say anything, it was j bhai's fault " said Vijay puppy faced

" Oh my gosh'I don't know who are u and what am I doing here, it was unnati's mistake" replied J

" Aww'u both'I'll fire u both'my dada knows how innocent I am" exclaimed Unnati

" ya and I know you all three are the most innocent persons ever born on this earth..hahahaha" Uday said

" How stupid r we guys'we didn't even notice manyata turning red as a beetroot" said Unnati excitedly

"I think she might have been imagining her n Uday's children junior udayveer and manyata" exclimed J

"or maybe their honeymoon, I tell you " added Vijay winking at manyata

Manyata held Unnati's n J's ears because it was a high time to cut the feathers of the birds who were trying to fly too high

"sorry jiji, sorry bhabhi saa, now plzz leave us!!" J n Unnati said in one go

Manyata leaves them laughing

"That's not fair bhabhi saa u didn't punish ur brother"

"I think for him I'll do the honours " uday remarked putting his hand on vijay's shoulder

"what have I done now, I am poor lonely soul " vijay said making an innocent face

"ohh my poor brother in law I think now u should handle some business work and no meeting with unnati till one month alright"

"that's truly unfair dada" Unnati said pissed off

" yup uday it's a sin " vijay said







break time guys sorry for starting late 😃


we are back guys 😉

"what kind of sin is this" asked uday, confused

"Yep it's a sin because u both enjoy leaving us no scope to enjoy'!! " Vijay said making a puppy face

" so u both want to enjoy..huh..??, so kindly remember, don't ever mess with me "

Everybody gave defeated cum approval look

"so now should we leave" stated Manyata

Manyata and uday left in uday's car whereas j accompanied vijay and Unnati

As soon as j entered the car vijay inquired everything about AD .J hesitated a lot but after much ignoring and avoiding she gave up and poured out what she feels. She put all her turmoil in front of him asking a genuine advice as what to do

" j bhai I am really happy to see ur interest growing around that AD. But frankly speaking I haven't met him before but If he's uday's friend he truly would be a man of honour and by the way what about jagat..??"

" vijay bhai u know na I only liked him as a friend. He is not made for me and nor am I. He is truly not my types, but I respect him as a person and I truly want a partner having an opposing personallity who would be a challenge and so I found AD interesting"

"Okay now if its so then u must talk with him and confess ur feelings towards him'!!!! I'm sure he will reciprocate to ur love'and don't be tensed coz ur Vijay bhai is always with u'!!

I just want to tell u that u have to forget ur past and move forward'.and I'll be always with u'I promise..!! " J hugged vijay tightly and he hugged her back

"thanxx Vijay bhai'thanxx a lot..!!"

On one hand Vijay was happy for his sister but on the other hand he was upset for Jagat knowing how much he cares for J. He didn't want to make any comments about AD because he knew nothing about him and as a matter of fact he didn't want to interfere in J's life although it was Vijay's genuine right. He thought that it was solely her choice all he could do is to pray that may god gave her her true love. Poor girl had already suffered much in her past due to fighting for the thing which never belonged to her. But now she has changed and she truly deserves someone great in her life

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But on the other hand, there was silence all around. Manyata was thinking about the party n the trio's talks and blushed hard. Seeing her state, Uday smiled because he loves his princess more when she blushes because at that time her face glows like a child and her purity n innocence reflects on her face.

He leaned towards her and whispers in her ears in the most sensual way

" now where are u lost..??r u imagining our future honeymoon events..??"

His effort chills down her spine

Suddenly she came back to her senses and in a playful mood. Hit Uday's chest, "cant u change..??"

"how can I when I have such a beautiful fianc, so deeply lost in my thoughts that she even didn't where have I brought her"

"what we aren't at the rajmahal and why does this plcae look deserted.??" Manyata asked as she opened the window. The fragrance of the beach brought up a smile on her angelic face. Uday just stood there admiring her beauty.

Manyata constantly kept on calling him but when he did not reply, she pinched him hard.

"so can I ask in whose thoughts are u lost now" winked Manyata.

"someone really beautiful " Uday replied with the usual smirk on his face.

"with mesmerized eyes and who is it"

As soon as Manyata smiled Uday stated again, "yaa someone special but not u..!!!"

"Hawww''.uday.. halkat vede khasmanukhane..!! "

He leaned close to her and placed his finger on Manyata's lips which had already gone red with anger. "And that is my jungle billi'.for me the purest soul on earth and have I told u that u look like an angel who have descended from heaven when ur nose and cheeks go red"

She just playfully hit his chest and then placed her head on it lousily hugging him, and he hugged her back

"plz never ever leave me uday I love u soo much that I cannot stay even a minute without u "

"hey my princess, I'll never leave u until the curse of death reaches upon me. Till then nobody could separate usIt's not only our wish that we r together but it's our fate, we have destined to be together and it's our love which made us accept our fate happily "

"uday u always have answers for my all quests, U always make me feel special and I regret the days I hurt u and was trying to find my life somewhere else"

"aaha..!!! don't worry about them' u can compensate it with ur love " Uday winks at her

"uday ..!!!"

"ok alright leave the fight' u didn't ask me why I brought u here..!! "

"why..???" she asked innocently as child feeling safe in his embrace





break guys 😛

we are back 😉

"becoz tonight is full moon and in the bright light of full moon I have always imagined ur angelic face and u know we rajwada's never let our dream unfulfilled'. so shall we go out..???"

She nodded in approval and they both went out

Both went to the beach. They opened their footwear and walked on the wet sand holding each other's hand's and feeling the silence all around. Although there was silence all around, they shared frequent eyelocks and talked though the expression in their eyes. With the bright silvery moonlight on their faces they truly look like a couple made in heaven. They were so lost in each other that they didn't care for the time laying down on the beach both in each other's embrace, living the moment to fullest as if they were the only two left on the earth, the bright light making her face glow, giving her a mesmerizing touch. They both sensed the blood rush in them. Uday moved her up and then kissed her forehead, then her right cheek ,then her left cheek. Manyata felt his touch and closed her eyes. She was living the moment to the fullest enjoying his warmth his how breath tingling her skin made her more eager to feel him as soon as their lips were about to be unite uday's phone beeped. Their trans was broken. They separated but didn't leave each other. Uday looked at his phone and got really annoyed but as soon as he saw the name flashing" ACP ABHIJEET " he decided to pick it up. He knew there would be a serious matter

"hello officer"

" sorry to disturb u sir at night but it was urgent "

"no not at all tell me any problem"

"yes sir as u know there is trial on the father and son after 3 days. We have three witnesses in our protection but one has been killed and I am damn sure if we didn't take any steps the rest would also be killed. I think some of our department members have been with him becoz if this wouldn't be the case then he would have been alive as I personally have signed high techs security for them"

"no officer I have a plan. We have to take care of them soon. U just spread a news that they would be shifted to another jail and then bring them to uday niwaas here my security will take care and u just spread the news they have been kidnapped which will loosen up the tention in the evils trying to save chaudhury who knew that their position could also be shaken if chaudhury is blown up and this time I cannot spare him"

"don't u worry sir, everything will be according to the plan ,don't worry even I can't spare them as we are loyal residents of India, don't u worry sir we are wih u"

"thank u officer abhijeet "

The call was disconnected bt Uday still looked tensed and manyata couldn't see him like this. She had already heard everything. she came closer to him to console and then hugged him. she gave a peck on the cheek and told him, "don't u worry uday a moment ago u told me about our fate and if it would be there fate to finish them up nobody could stop it and now leave it on their fate. U are doing what u can and by the way u don't look good when serious, now smile please", she gave him another sweet kiss on his cheek

A smile crept on his face, "u have seriously improved princess "

"I have to be becoz I am going to be future Mrs. udayveer singh and now shall we go "

"Ya wait I have brought something for u'now close ur eyes"

she closed her eyes and he ended up putting a bright gold and diamond necklace around her neck"

She was spellbound by the beauty and the elegance of the necklace



"uday it wasn't needed"

" why u said that u are future Mrs. yuvraj udayveer singh and by the way its ain't that good but after ur wearing it, the beauty of the set has indeed increased. Dear u are my sunshine, u are my sunset ,u are my everything' I LOVE U PRINCESS.. " then he hugged her tight

"I love u too u but I am scared sometimes a lot..!!! Hope this is ain't a dream 'that once I woke up there nothing to be happy"

"this is reality princess'. I wont leave you so soon, I'm a lizard..I'm too sticky", Uday winked at Manyata

They went back to the car and left for the rajmahal .It was bit late. Both were scared entering it, if the they got caught by Brijraj they would be fired for sure, but they ended up safely reaching manyata's room and then soon manyata gave him a good night kiss on his cheeck and told him not to stress himself altough she wont let him get stressed and they bid good bye

Uday left the Rajmahal soon

Vijay was really super pissed with manyata as she was not at home. Its been 3 o' clock and wasn't even attending his phone calls. He came in her room searching for her.

"here are u", Vijay said but there was no response from Manyata, she was long lost staring at the sun and at the necklace in her hand

"manyata bhai "

"han vijay bhai ap kab aye"

"ye hume poochna chahiye wese ye beautiful present uday ne diya"

"han vijay bhai woh hum dono long drive pe chale gaye the"

"is there something else..??? u looked tense manyata"

"vijay bhai the prob is uday is tensed with the akash and chaudry matter"

"ohh mera pagal bhai uday will handle every thing or jaha tk stress ki bat u shoud cheer him up"

" but how vijay bhai "

"u plan a date for the both of u or a lunch or an outing "

"she hugged him u are the best best vijay bhai my ray of hope in the darkness"

" now you see yuvraj udayveer singh yuvrani manyata ka surprise "


precap :In the morning uday woked up and saw a bouqet on a table with red roses he knew who had sended it there was note with it




writer : rocker12

editor : aklover-16




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yipe.
finally coming...

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Yay 6th Epi started hve been waiting
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guys thank you for ur support and comments

the main credit goes to ria ( aklover-16) and anjie (anjilika13)
i really scratched there brains heard in order too write this epi😛
truely ria u changed the look of the epi with your editiing u did an awesome job 👍🏼
great to have u anjie as a leader and ria as a member 😉
regards
rocker12
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Yiippeee...finally it began but now where will u post the name of the writer n the CC members..???
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Originally posted by: AKlover-16

Yiippeee...finally it began but now where will u post the name of the writer n the CC members..???

dear i was busy posting i will post in the thread itself coz it was such a hurry as nobody posted :( on time
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pm sent :)
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yaar who was given to post today??
til 8:50 no one posted it!!!
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Originally posted by: rocker12

yaar who was given to post today??
til 8:50 no one posted it!!!

actually i thought id tell u or ria to post it when i went fr sometime after sending pms...bt then due to netwrk problems i wasnt able to come n then i hd ti go to tution too
srry again...i guess im nt really a good leader...
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Originally posted by: Anjalika13

actually i thought id tell u or ria to post it when i went fr sometime after sending pms...bt then due to netwrk problems i wasnt able to come n then i hd ti go to tution too
srry again...i guess im nt really a good leader...

no not at all dear just clarifing as there were 3 names written :)
and no sorry,s needed we are human and u are an awesome leader :)

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