Prishna OS: Pinto's Birthday

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Hey everyone, I'm back with another Prishna OS, and this one I got the idea from the idea of Pinto's Birthday, I really don't think we will get Pinto's Birthday anymore but nobody knows the future, let's see what happens, anyway I hope you all like it, and I hope I don't bore you guys with it. I wrote this when I was writing Part 3 of my other OS so the ending is quite similar and this one is the more Romantic OS, I got the ides from past FF's I have read. Do comment and criticize, I would love to read all your feedback of it. Enjoy!

It was Pinto's Birthday today and everyone was busy preparing for his Birthday. Pinto was trying to get close to Krishna so he could at least steal a kiss from her, but Krishna was to busy helping Ganga with the preparations. Sargam notices Pinto trying to get Krishna so she decides to tease her Devar and went up to him with Sonu and said "Devar Ji, if you don't mind can you take care of Sonu, while I am with KRISHNA" and sent Sonu to Pinto to keep him busy.

Pinto understood what Sargam was trying to do, but had no other option and took Sonu to his room. In Pinto's room Sonu was annoying Pinto and wasn't leaving him alone, so Pinto decides to give Sonu his phone to play with to keep him busy.

- Some time Later-

Finally it was time for Pinto's Birthday Party, it was only a small one as it was his first birthday after marriage so the family agreed to keep it small. Krishna's family came and gave their presents to Pinto. Krishna baked Pinto a cake as a present.

Pinto cut the cake and thanked everyone for the presents, but his concentration was only on Krishna.

Everyone was having their cake and chatting to each other. Pinto tries to get Krishna attention and when he does he tries to get her to go to him, but Krishna doesn't and instead she goes and sits next to Sonu on the Sofa who is happily eating his cake, Pinto goes and sits on the other side of Sonu and tries to get Krishna to look at him. Sonu notices Pinto fidgeting and is confused so he asks him if he wants more cake. Pinto says no and Sonu offers Krishna as well and Krishna closes in to take a bite. Pinto sees this and changes his mind and closes in for the cake as well, Sonu accidently moves the cake away and Krishna and Pinto end up nearly kissing.

Pinto looks at Krishna who's lips were a few Centimetres away from Pinto's and is really shy, Pinto on the other hand is smiling and was about to kiss her when he got interrupted by Sonu, who he had forgotten was there. Krishna goes away from there and goes next to Chanchal and starts talking to her.

He then saw her going into the Kitchen and decided to go in with her too. He enters the kitchen a few steps away from Krishna, he kept looking back to see if anyone was looking. He enters the kitchen, only to be pulled by the ear by Sargam and out of the Kitchen. Sargam says to Pinto " Devar Ji, it's your Birthday Party outside, so what are you doing going to the kitchen?" Pinto quickly replies "Urm I was just going to drink water". Sargam knew the actual reason and says to him " Accha, If that's the case then I will bring you water".

Pinto knew it was impossible to meet Krishna now so he said to Sargam "Bhabhi, its ok I will go and sit with the rest, I don't need water anymore" with a hint of sadness in his voice. Sargam clocked on that he was dejected but she had to do this, she had to do it for Krishna. Krishna who was watching all this from the kitchen thanked Sargam when she came into the kitchen.

After some time, Vidyapati and family had started to go home and the Singh family were also packing up. It was night time and everyone had gone to their rooms to go and rest after the party. Pinto hadn't seen Krishna from the time he got stopped by Krishna, so he decided to go and wait in their room.

Pinto enters his room to find it beautifully decorated like how it would be on a Suhaag Raath; he walks in to see another cake for his birthday. It had 'Happy Birthday Pinto Ji' written on it. He looked around the room and was admiring the decorations when suddenly he felt Krishna come up behind him and hug him. He turned around and hugged her back. Krishna says "Happy Birthday Pinto Ji". Pinto is really happy and doesn't really know what to do. Krishna figured out that he was speechless and so she took him near the cake and bought the knife up so they can cut it.

Pinto and Krishna both cut the cake together and Krishna gets a small piece up to feed him. Pinto in the process bites her finger, Krishna quickly tries to take her finger away but Pinto holds her hand and soothes the pain with small kisses. He slowly starts going up her whole arm with kisses. Krishna quickly takes her hand and turns around. Pinto smiles at her shyness and then looks down at the cake to get an idea. He gets some cake and goes in front of Krishna and puts it on her cheek, close to her lips. Krishna is surprised and was about to wipe it off when Pinto stops her and he closes in on her and licks the cake away.

Next Pinto put some cake on Krishna's lips and was closed in to lick that as well. In the process of licking he kissed her on the lips, Pinto was over the moon, he couldn't believe that he had actually and finally kissed Krishna on the lips.

Krishna who now shy and was kind of sticky went to the bathroom to wash her face to remove the sticky mess on her face. Pinto followed her to the bathroom and went up behind her when she was washing her face. He hugged her from behind. Krishna freed herself from his grip and started to wipe her face with the towel. Pinto looked around and saw the shower and got an idea, he picked up Krishna and Krishna was shocked "Pinto Ji what are you doing?". Pinto says to Krishna " You will see what I'm doing" and grins at her. He takes her under the shower and turns it on. Prishna both get wet and Pinto puts Krishna down. They both stand the under the shower staring at each other.

Pinto gets closer and kisses her wet, quivering lips, he put his fingers through her hair and pulled her closer until there was no gap between them. Pinto was messing with Krishna's senses and all she could do was kiss him back. They finally broke away from the kiss and Pinto saw how wet they both were. Prishna stepped out of the bathroom and had changed into some dry clothes. Pinto's hair was still wet and had water dripping, he went and hugged Krishna from behind and wetting her with his hair again. Krishna smiles and frees her self from his hold and walks over to the bed.

She gets an envelope out of the cupboard and takes it to Pinto. Krishna says to Pinto "this is the actual birthday present from me" while giving the envelope to Pinto. Pinto opens up the envelope to see tickets for a Honeymoon trip. He was really happy and looked up at Krishna, Krishna smiles at him and nods. He hugs Krishna and says "Thank you soo much Krishna, you don't know how long I waited for this, thank you soo much".

Krishna says to Pinto "It's getting quite late so let's go to sleep". Krishna turns around to go when Pinto holds her hand preventing her from going. He pulls her back slowly and hugs her from behind, he whispers into her ear in a Husky Voice "I know for a fact that this bed wasn't decorated like this to sleep on". Krishna was shy and looked down at the floor. Pinto carefully and slowly leads her to the bed; he stops next to the bed and hugs her even more. He moves her hair to one side and nuzzles her neck. Krishna was feeling soo different, she was feeling like this for the first time, Pinto then starts to kiss her on the Neck and bites her too while kissing. Krishna gives out a small scream when he does so. Pinto kisses her in the place where he bit her to soothe the pain. He takes his hands and touches her bare waist. Krishna was loosing herself to Pinto; Pinto turns her around, picks her up and gently puts her on the bed.

Krishna was sitting in the middle of the bed smiling, looking down and feeling really shy. Pinto comes and sits next to her. He gets her hands and takes off her bangles; he kisses her wrists after he took them off. He moves to her earrings and places kisses on her ears when he takes them off. He finally moves to her neck and kisses her neck after he takes the Necklace off.

He gently pushes Krishna down and turns the lights off and covers them under the Duvet. Pinto and Krishna had finally become one...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Vidyapati ji - you were never this romantic with Saraswati -
that's my complaint!!!!!!!😊

Really really beautiful...I doubt we will ever get such a scene...so good to imagine this!

Honestly this one was too good...
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Originally posted by: kmfan_2



@ Vidyapati ji - you were never this romantic with Saraswati -
that's my complaint!!!!!!!😊

Really really beautiful...I doubt we will ever get such a scene...so good to imagine this!

Honestly this one was too good...

Aww Saraswati Ji I am so sorry, I should have been more romantic but what to do, I had to get my daughters Career on track 😉 😳 and Thank you for liking my OS. 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fizu OMG OMG What a sizzling and so so romantic Scene .😍☺️😳 . I was blushing like mad while reading and is getting goosebumps . It's so so romantic my dear .AWOSOME 👏 . I wish if not exactly same but We should get almost simliar t it and Prishna conumaated on Pintu's bday . Wow Nothing Better then this .I wish In the show also Prishna consummates on Pintu's bday 😍
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Originally posted by: moniluvskinshuk

Fizu OMG OMG What a sizzling and so so romantic Scene .😍☺️😳 . I was blushing like mad while reading and is getting goosebumps . It's so so romantic my dear .AWOSOME 👏 . I wish if not exactly same but We should get almost simliar t it and Prishna conumaated on Pintu's bday . Wow Nothing Better then this .I wish In the show also Prishna consummates on Pintu's bday 😍

Thank You Moni for liking the OS and yeah I also wish for something similar. Embarrassed
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow I love it, just soo romantic .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautiful OS Fiza...i was grinning like an idiot while I read it 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fizu u naughty girl my word what a chapter it was so hot. I cnt stop blushing after reading it. I didnt think my blood pressure could get any higher after u got me thinking ab pintu in the shower bt it just did wow what a chapter smoking hot. I want more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Fiza super hot , this was so romantic even I was smiling while reading it , its just sizzling wow
hope we get something close to your beautiful OS
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I read this OS more than twice, will you write more stuff on Prishna?

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