Finding The Light (VirMan) PART 40 FINISHED! - Page 31

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ZAHARA.


Hhahahaha, I kid I kid ... OR DO I? :PPP 😉


You better be kidding about that leap my ekta kapoor no: 2!!! :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
urghhh i m too late to answer i knew that riddle's answer better luck next time
how much suspense u r keeping but that make ur story more interesting
awee i m loving this hubby-wife game
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow!!
Loved the latest chapter! Eager to read the next chapter, thanks for the PM by the way!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
ammazing update as usual...⭐️
virman in mumbai alone...wooww m getting pretty xcited...😍
luving their hubby wifey game ...n nw dulha -dulhan...these two r always super adorable...
thnx a loot for the regular updates n the pm dear...
plzz cont sooon n if possible make the updates a bit more loonger...
m soory...always greedy wen it cums to virman😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: alicemath

ammazing update as usual...⭐️

virman in mumbai alone...wooww m getting pretty xcited...😍
luving their hubby wifey game ...n nw dulha -dulhan...these two r always super adorable...
thnx a loot for the regular updates n the pm dear...
plzz cont sooon n if possible make the updates a bit more loonger...
m soory...always greedy wen it cums to virman😃


Sometimes I just write a chapter in one go, and it's sometimes short. Other times I do it deliberately because each chapter is like one scene...get it?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey dear continue soon .. loved your story a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago
I think my favourite chapter is chapter 26...heheh *SPOILER* ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter Twenty Five: I'm here.

Viraat and Maanvi arrived at the block of flats that Ariana Morelli owned. Maanvi's heartbeats were getting louder and louder as she took one step further. She was hesitating: the first official steps to finding her parents and she was scared. She held onto Viraat's arm as they walked together.

"Viraat, I'm scared." She whispered. He stopped walking and turned towards her, placing his hands on her shoulders and looking into her eyes.

"What did I tell you? Never be scared, I'm here." He said softly.

A moment went where they stood still, looking deep into each other's eyes. A couple of people went past them, aww'ing at what they thought was a couple in love.

"I want to hold my girlfriend like that, and just forget every trouble." A young man said to his friends as he looked away and gave Viraat and Maanvi space. It was then when both of them looked away from each other blushing.

"Urm," Maanvi couldn't find of anything to say simply letting the moment fade to silence.

Viraat held her shoulders once again and told her, "Are you feeling scared now?"

She shook her head and smiled, genuinely feeling stronger and more confident. He held her in his hands and they walked up the stairs to flat No. 103, where Ariana Morelli lives.

"We're here." Viraat stated as he knocked on the door. No answer.

"I'll try." Maanvi said before looking softly on the door, and then harder.

Suddenly, the door opened and a woman stood wearing a dark green sari.

"Yes?" She asked looking up at Maanvi and Viraat.

"Are you Ariana Morelli?" Viraat asked.

The woman scrunched her forehead, "No. Madam has gone for the day. I'm her maid servant. Do you need to send a message?"

"No, no. We need to speak to her…it's kind of important." He stated.

"Oh, Madam will be back tomorrow. You can come again then."

"What? Tomorrow?" Maanvi objected. "But, can't you do anything? It's really important." She looked at Viraat and pleaded to him.

"I'm sorry but Madam won't be back until tomorrow. If you need her, I'll send her a message." She said softly.

"No, don't worry. We'll come tomorrow." He said saying goodbye to the woman and watching the door shut.

Maanvi tried not to cry, "Viraat what do I do now? Everything is wrong."

"Look Maanvi. Don't worry, tomorrow is another day. Everything will be fine." He assured her and Maanvi was instantly assured.

"Okay. But now what?"

"Maanvi, have you ever been to Mumbai?" He asked her and they walked down the stairs.

She shook her head, "No. But I heard the samandar here in beautiful."

"So, shall we go?"

"What? Really?" She said excitedly.

"Of course, anything for my wife."

Maanvi squealed and hugged him tight before running off back into the car. Viraat ran after her, telling her to wait up.

Edited by ZAHARA. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww very nice part so virman alone in mumbai,... waiting for the update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
NOTE: I'm not going to complete this anymore. My life is so bad right now. I just can't. BYE.

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