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okay guys, this is my second os and it is a request by all the raji fans,i'll do it in two posts, its going to be kinda diff from the regular ones. this os is going to be a cliffhanger, i'll leave it of at a high point and it anyone else can carry it on the way they want it to go, your add on can be even just a few lines. pls remember to keep it hangingđ. requests are most welcome (it would be very nice if u can pm me). all raji scenes will be in redđ. so here goes...
* scene starts with where it left of in saturday *
Gopi is really scared and has no idea what to do, suddenly she hears a phone ringing and turns around to see it is Rashi's phone. she picks it up and reads the caller id "JAAN".
Gopi: jaan?? this must be devarji!
She immediately takes the call. Before she could even say hello jigar starts speaking.
Jigar: hello, Rashi? Jaan where are you and why weren't you picking up your phone? Pls...
Gopi interupts in a stammering voice
Gopi: Devarji... its me...Rashiben...(cries)... Rashiben is in danger
(Jigar shellshocked)
Gopi: pls come here quickly...she needs you...(cries)
Jigar (scared and numd eyed) : what happened to rashi? where are you two?
Gopi: we're on savita aunty's compound... pls come quickly
Rashi is still sobbing and asking gopi to help her
* mm hall *
jigar runs down the stairs and heads out the door, ahem sees him and follows worried.
* near the hole *
Jigar (worried) : gopi bhabi where is rashi?
Ahem: what happened to rashi?
Gopi (sobbing) : she...she... fell in the hole (cries in helplesnes)
Ahem amd Jigar : Kya??!!??
Jigar kneels down near the hole in disbelief
Jigar (extra scared): rashi??
Rashi (from in the hole crying): jigarji please save me im really scared, pls jigarji, i will die if i stay here any longer, i wanna be with you, pls come get me.
Jigar (tryng to be normal) : rashi, sweetheart dont worry, im here now, i'll gat you out asap, you trust me right, so calm down baby..
Ahem: jigar we have to get her out of there as quickly as possible.
Jigar: but how?
Ahem: if we call the rescue team it might be too late, we have to do something ourselves!
Jigar: bhai we should try sending a rope down to her and pull her up.
Ahem: but where are we gonna get a rope?
Gopi: ahemji there is a long rope in the store room in our house, we should go and get that.
Jigar: bhabi you and bhai go get the rope i'll stay here with rashi.
* mm *
ahem and gopi enter the house and gopi goes to the store room to get the rope. meanwhile ahem informs evrybody about rashi. they all rush out with the rope.
* near hole *
jigar takes the rope and slides it down the hole. everyone around him but he forgets it as he starts talking to rashi...
Jigar: rashi, jaan...grab on to the loop and we will pull you out.
Rashi: what? i cant do that, what if i fall? (cries, ultra scared)
Jigar: nothing will happen to you baby, trust me.
Rashi: no jigarji, im not brave enough to do this, i will die. (cries harder)
Jigar: Rashi... dont talk like that. listen to me rashi, you said i was your jaan right, so as long as im here how can anything happen to you? and rashi you are my jaan if your not ok how can i be. i love you baby, pls for me, hold on to the rope and let me pull you up here... into my arms.
Rashi (scared) : okay!
jigar starts pulling the rope aith the help of ahem. evryone around is tensed, especially gopi. as rashi is being pulled up she bruises herslf, at some places enough for blood to start flowing.
as soon as she comes out of the hole. jigar grabs her and presses her into him. it hurts rashi in someplaces but she doesnt mind as she never felt this safe.
everyone around thanks krishna bhagwaan
Rashi (reliefed): jigarji i love you, pls dont let go of me...
Jigar: i love you too, and after today dont you ever go far from me, i cant live without you jaan.
Rash: i...(faints)
Gopi: RASHIBEN!!!!!
Jigar: Rashi...rashi...
Ahem: Jigar we should take her to the hospital, she is badly scared.
jigar lifts rashi up in his arms like she is a delicate feather and takes her to the car and leaves for the hospital with ahem driving. all the othera follow in a different car.
* at the hospital *
jigar enters with rashi in his arms and calls for a stretcher. he puts her down slowly as if she'll shatter like a glass if he didn't. as the doctor comes and takes rashi into the room jigar lets go of her hand in despair and utter fear. his face looks like he has put his life on the line.
Ahem: i'll go and finifh all the formalities.
hetal puts her hand on jigar and tells him evrything is going to be fine. jigar hugs hetal and and tries not to cry but tears still stream down his eyes. evryone reassures him everything is going to be fine. when jigar had settled down on a chair lost in memories of him amd rashi's special moments he was unaware of what was going on write in front of him.
urmila came barging in crying 'hay mharo dikri, hay mharo dikri'
Kokila: urmilaben this is a hospital pls keep quiet.
Urmilla: vevanji you always rome aruond like a smarty pant, where was your smartness when my daughter did not return home with you 2. why weren't you smart enough to look for her huh?!!?
Kokila: urmilaben how dare you question my smartness,you have no right to do soo.
urmila looks at her ina who does she think she is way. before she could further accuse kokila...
Hetal: kokila urmiben is absolutly right, why didn't you act the way you should've after gopi telling you that rashi is missing, you shouldve been more careful.
Chirag: kokila this time you dont have time show us right and wrong because this time you are wrong
Kokila: mota bhai...
suddenly the doctor enters. hearing rashis name jigar comes back to reality...
Doctor: mr. modi your wife is absolutely fine but she is quite frightened after the incident which is not good for the baby ...(evryone confused)... so we have given her a sleeping injection
after hearing baby it took evryone a time to revive them selves. everyone was completely silent. then...
Jigar: baby???
Doctor: oh, so you all dont know? well then, congratulations mr. modi your wife is pregnent ...
hope you liked it
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