CARRYING ON (new raji os+cont) {finished} - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
Jiya very very nice update plz continue... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Moavia

Jiya very very nice update plz continue... 😳


Sure
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
👏awesome update jiya😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: raji_virman

👏awesome update jiya😃

thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Both Rashi and Jigar were shocked
Rashi:"what ??"
Urmila:"can't u hear u r coming with me to your home"
Rashi"But mummy mm is my home"
"Just shut up rashi i said na u r coming with so u r and if u will not i will never talk to you" said urmila in angry voice
Jigar "But Why Mummy ji What happened ?"
urmila smug and said " you can't keep my daughter happy this is the reason"
Rashi"Mummy!!"
Urmila " Shut up if u will not come with me main tumse sare rishte tor doon gi"
Rashi was shocked
Urmila:"and yes i asked doctor he says tht u will be discharged tonight i am going to pack ur bag
Rashi:Mummy plz mummy i can't leave without jigar ji plz mummy plz ..."
Urmila wents out
Rashi was crying and jigar hugs him and both started crying
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at night jigar was holding her hand and was helping her to walk properly
when urmila comes
Urmila:"Rashi come on lets go"
Rashi look at Jigar he was crying
Urmila"Rashi I said lets go"
Urmila hold rashis hand and said lets go


Rashi " mummy please mummy"
jigar n rashi both were crying
Edited by jiyakapoor - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26
luved it jiya...but it ended so soon ...u can continue naa😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
nice update jiya but I wish it was a longer one...plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
yeah please write longer ones... i luved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
first of all thnx guyz n sure i will but after me some one else k
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AT MM
jigar was crying and ahem was consoling him
ahem:"jigar stop crying"
jigar hugged him and again started crying


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AT URMI HOUSE
urmila:''rashi go and take some rest it will be good for ur and ur baby's health" and she smiles
rashi look at urmila and said
rashi:"u will never know what is good for me and what is not"
urmila:"what u mean i don't care for u I don't care for ur happiness"
rashi:"my happiness??... mummy i was happy with jigar ji why don't u understand..."
and she started crying
Urmila look at her and said " i am going to sleep n u too go to sleep"
n urmila went to her room
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rashi entered her room she opens her bag and take out jigar's photo


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here jigar is sitting alone and is also looking at rashi's photo



they both were crying and looking at the picture thinking of the good times

BACK GROUND MUSIC STARTS

[ye dooriyan
ye dooryan
in rahon ki dooriyan
nigahon ki dooriyan
hum rahon ki dooriyan
fanahon sabhi dooriyan]
Rashi sitting on dinning table thinking of jigar
aaannn
urmila comes and asked her why u r not eating but rashi is sitting like a statue
[kyun koi paas hai
dur hai kyun koi
jaane na koi yahaan par]
Jigar in office thinking abut rashi
[a raha paas hai
jaanu na me hu kaha pe]
rashi walking in park n
thinking abut jigar and looking at couples
[ye dooryan
in rahon ki dooriyan
nigahon ki dooriyan
hum rahon ki dooriyan
fanahon sabhi dooriyan]
jigar looking at their wedding photo album
[kabhi hua ye bhi,khali rahon pe bhi
tu tha mere saath]
rashi sitting in the dark and crying
ka
[kabhi tujhe mil ke,lota mera dil yeh khali khali hath yeh bhi hua kabhi jaise hua abhi tujhko sabhi me paa liya]
jigar driving car in a high speed n suddenly stop it and again started crying
[tere mujhe kar jaati hai dooriyan
satati hai dooriyan tarashti hai dooriyan fannaho sabhi dooriyan]
jigar and rashi walking on a same street and suddenly rashi and jigar see each other

rashi and jigar were crying rashi ran and hugged jigar tightly

"i love u"
said rashi
"i love you too" replied jigar
and urmila was watching this all

thnx plz do comment

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