CARRYING ON (new raji os+cont) {finished}

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raji_virman

@raji_virman

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

guys if some one doesnt cont by 2mrow then i shall do it the day after😃 but pls it will be sooo much better if we get someone elses imaginations also😃😃😃

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raji_virman

@raji_virman

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Niobi.arshi
hey awesome!!!!now who ll continue it?????
plz some1 update

thnx, post some requsts to dear it'll be easier for me to make you people happy😃

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jaweria

@jiyakapoor

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Every one was shocked and happy too

Jigar:''Can we meet her ??''

Doctor:'' Why not but only one person can meet her ''

Urmila:'' I...

Jigar: '' I'll go "

Doctor:" Ok!! "

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Jigar entered he saw Rashi on the bed he went toward her and sit next to her and he holds Rashi's hand

a drop of tear fell on Rashi's hand

Rashi opens her eyes she spoke in a very darely audible whisper '' Jigar JI ...!!!!''

Jigar asked '' are u okay ??''

Rashi replied ''yes''

Jigar says '' thnx for the good news''

and Rashi smiles

SCENE SHIFTED

urmila said to kokila in a complaining voice '' AAj meri dikri jis haalat main hai us ki zimadar sirf or sirf aap hai ''

Kokila replied'' I have'nt done this... Rashi is herself irresponsible''

urmila said ''thikche then i am taking my daughter to my house where she is not treated like a slave''

kokila replied ''so u think that we treat her like slave she is equally treated...

urmila cut her off n said '' huh if she was treated nicely so she would'nt be in the situation she is in right now??''

kokila left speech less

hetal says '' what r u saying wewarji ''

urmila stopped her from saying any thing

and said that '' I said na rashi is coming with me so she is coming with me!!!''

SCENE SHIFTED

jigar was holding rashi's hand and said '' U made me scared''

Rashi sais ''o really ??''

suddenly urmila entered the room

and said to rashi that lets go home n u r going with me.You dont need to live with these modis

Edited by jiyakapoor - 13 years ago

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jaweria

@jiyakapoor

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rashi.krishna
wow.. nice...😍

thnxdear iknow its short but i just make situation that urmila take rashi from jigar

i hope u understand

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madhuri_reddy

@madhuri_reddy

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

@sarah...it's awesome😊 liked the jann concept❤️ great start.

@jiya...now want to see jigar & rashi dialogue after urmila words...superb concept😊

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ankita_raji

@ankita_raji

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

@sarah...superb...loved it...wish we could see all this onscreen😍and jaan☺️

@jiya...nice twist...can't wait to read jigar and rashi's reactions to wut urmila has said😳

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jaweria

@jiyakapoor

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: madhuri_reddy
@sarah...it's awesome😊 liked the jann concept❤️ great start.

@jiya...now want to see jigar & rashi dialogue after urmila words...superb concept😊

k why not u can u continue further plz

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jaweria

@jiyakapoor

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ankita_raji
@sarah...superb...loved it...wish we could see all this onscreen😍and jaan☺️

@jiya...nice twist...can't wait to read jigar and rashi's reactions to wut urmila has said😳

thnx ankita