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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing Update Kriti.
Loved it.

And haan Thanks spam ke bich maise comment dhundne ke liye.
Loved it.

And Loved the update.

Finaaly Vp ka rang sab ke samne aa gaya.
And Kria gosh usne Rey ke bare mai kuch kyu nahi bola??
Shge is hiding so many things ??

Thanks for pm.

P.s:sorry in hurry so cooments ek month tak short bhi rahenge.
Update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago

humaari waali toh puraa pakaati hai 🤢
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyssh update really liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazing i read it it is wow
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox


aroma darling...
I'm in love with your comment yaar...
ha ismain taarif ki jagha dant puchkar hai...
fir bhi dil khush ho gya...
thank u soo much for this comment...

oye tuje khush hona chahiye ki mane long comment kiya kyu ki vese main always res karti hoo then bhool jati hoo or samne wala ko pm kar k jaad dilana parta hey ki res kiya hey unres kar do second thing main itna lamba comment ajj tak devil rockerz k thread i mean neeti sis k thread pey hi karti hoo ... so if u want long comment once again to darling jaldi update kardo ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...
Kria ka secret was superb...
Loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome updtae

loved it

hmmm so kriya came to St.louis on a mission

eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Kriti_rox


hey kriti

thnk u soo mch for updting 🤗 🤗

u noe spamming karne mein kitni mehnat lagti hai ??

😆 😆 so as u want a lambaaa waala comment

here u go

hope its lambaaa nd u like it

m trying my best to giv u a lambaa comment

huh??? kya hua tuje???

oohhh teko comment chahiye

ook okk me apni bak-2 band karing

nly commenting here u go


Chapter 2

Vo :Nhi Hai TOh Main abhi kar deti hoon...(all look towards the owner of the voice and found smriti ghai wearing (same clothes which she wear in Bade ache lagte gai as neha...simple but modern)... hhhmm... waah waah kya entry maari hai

... nyc i relle lyk her look in her bade acche lagte hai

gang :smriti aunty 😆 bechare gang shock ho gayi smriti ko dekhkar i wanna see their shocked faces

smriti walk towards the kriya and vp...she take the papers from vp hand...pick out the pen from vp's shirt and sign it...

dude she is the ICP 😲 meko lagaa koi aur hoga

jaise karan sir yaa rdx...

Sm :waise aapne apni aankhon ka test karwaya... 😆 😆 lol true

Vp :huh..??? dumbo abhi tk samjha 😆

Sm :ha mujhe lagta hai...aapki aankhon ka num bad gya hai...isliye toh char char aankhein hone k bawajood bhi...High Court ki stamp nhi dikhi...aur High court ki stamp lagi hui hai...toh ismain mere sign ho ya na ho kuch farak nhi padta... srsly chaar-2 aankhein hai phir kch dikhayi nai deta isse huh 😡

Vp :aap kon hai... arey kitna dumbo hai yeh yar abhi tk yeh nai samjha huh???😡

Sm :kriya ye VP kitna buddhu hai...ise kisne Vp ki post par rakh liya... hhmmm... i ttly agree with her isko rakha hi kisne vp ki post k liye

Vp :excuse me dekhiye aap tammez se baat kijiye...aap jo bhi hai... tameez aur aapse never frgt it

Kr :mujhe na lagta hai VP shock main chala gya hai...isliye toh aapne head of ICP k column main sign bhi karliye foir bhi puch rha hai aap kon hai...koi itna dumb kaise ho saktahai... srsly koi itna dumbo kaise ho sakta hai yaar isse dikhta nai k ICP uske samne khadi hai huh...

Sm :ab puch rha hai toh bata dete hai...so MR VP...main hoon Mrs Smriti Ghai...head of ICP or kriya ki mom...aur kuch puchna hai...nhi...toh theekhe fir mere paas aapke liye gift hai... aahhh wanna see vp's face mann 400 volts ka shock laga hoga 😆

(smriti handovers the spme papers to VP...he's is shocked beyond limits...)

VP :ye ye aa aap nhi kar sakti...aur kis kis wajha se aap mujhe suspend kar rhi hai...

yayiee vp suspended

me soo happy

All :SUSPEND... 🤣 🤣

sabke chehre dekhne chahiye 😆

Sm :wajha ek nhi bohot hai...par abhi k liye aapke liye itna jaana kafi hai...ki aap kisi bhi colg school main Principal Vice principal ki post k layak nhi hai... yaa rite woh kahin ka bhi princi nd vp banne k layak

Vp :nhi wajha toh aapko mujhe dene hi padegi...maine aisa kiya hi kya hai...jo mere saath aisa kiya ja rha hai... arey itna sab karke bi puch raha hai ki maine kya kiya??

Sm :kya kiya hai toh suniye...aap is colg main aaye apne personal matter ki wajha se...Shivam Malhotra aapka beta hi haina...aap is colg main aaye taaki aapke bete ka colg ya ye kahe wo colg jismain aap Ex principal the sorry principal hai...aap yahan aaye taaki aap yahan k students ko dance se roh sake aur automaticaly hi aapka colg footloose jeet jaaye..aap is colg main aaye taaki aap is colg ki bani banayi repo ko bigad sake...am i right or wrong...

vp shivam ka dad hai??? 😲

ohhh issliye uss worm ko college mein admission mila

dude sch a 🤬

uuuggghhh hw can he be sooo selfish nd sickk mannn 😡 😡

(all is shocked after listening the truth of vp...for them there is shock day...) 🤣 🤣 aaj inn sabke liye shock day hi hai



Sm :AM I RIGHT OR WRONG...????(she screamed...and all colg get cared with her voice including vp...except kriya who knows her mom and her anger very well) 😆 😆 😆 smriti k gusse se ache acche dar jaate hai toh vp kya cheez hai 🤣

VP :right...

(and next moment police came...and take him to poloce station...)

vp finally gayaa!!!

(and then smriti and kriya face all colg...kriya avoid looking at her friends...but smriti only looking towards them)

Sm :ab aap log apni practice start kar sakte hai...ab koi bhi aapko dance k liye nhi rokega...(after saying this she walk away...kriya also want to go away but gang...cover her from four side and bombard her with ttheir question...)

bechhari kriya ab phas gayii aahh kitne ques puchte hai yeh log

Kr :(cover her ears from both sides) SHUT UP GUYZ...mujhe kuch bolne doge... 😆 😆 gud sabko chup kara diya

Sw :ha guyz use bolne do😊

Kr :thank u swayam 😊

Kr :ok ab tum sab ko tumhare saare questions k ansers dungi...main AICSL abhi nhi bani...balki is colgmain aane se pehle ki hi main AICSL thi...aur st. louis colg bhi main ek mission se aayi thi... 😲 mission ????? kriya pehle se hi AICSL thi yeh kaise kb hua ????

Vish :dide kaisa mission yaa neko bhi batao

Kr :mission tha weakling aur dazzlers k beech ka divide mitana...princi bohot pareshan the tumlogo k is divide toh unhone mom ko call kiya aur unhe yahan sitution samjhayi...aur mom ne mujhe yahan bhej diya...is divide ko mitane k liye...mom bhi mere saath india aayi...coz unhone bhi colges ki inspection karni thi...fir maine st. louis main enter kiya...ek middle class...sapne dekhne wali ladki banke...aur jab main yahan aayi...toh maine dekha yahn ka haal usse jyada bura hai jitna maine socha tha...aur fir kya kya hua sab jaante hi hai...is divide ko mitane k liye maine sabse pehle dazzlers ki ego ko todna caha...unke ego ko callenge karna caha...aur wo kaam itna mushkil nhi tha,,,,coz yahan toh chotti chotti baat dazzlerz apne ego pe lelete the...aur dance team mere plan main nhi tha...par yahan dance karta dekh main apne aapko rok hi nhi paayi...kaise rokti...dance mera passion hai...mera first love hai...jisko bachpan se main mom se chupati aayi hoon...mom ko mera dance karna pasand nhi tha...waise mom khud hi bohot achi dancer hai...par dad ki family ne mom ka dance karna pasand nhi tha...isliye mom ne dance chod diya...aur na hi kabhi mujhe karne diya...par maine chup chup k dance kiya karti thi...aur yahn aayi toh yahn har taraf sirf dance hi dance tha...aur koi rokne wala nhi...toh banali maine apni dance team...sab plan se tha...princi ne white band diya wo plan tha...aur Mr. Karan Malik...ye bhi plan ka hi hissa the...

😲 kriti tune toh story ko poora palat hi diya


All :kya...?😲 me too

Kr :ha...Karan malik mere jiju jai...real nhi...meri cousin k hubby...aur woh ek bohot bade pshychiatrist hai...unhe maine hi bulaya tha...sab plan se hua aur finally divide mit gya tha...fir main tum logo k saath itna ghul mil gyi thi...ki main bhul hi gyi thi...ki main kon hoon...mom ko maine nhi bataya tha ki mission complete ho gya warna wo mujhe wapas london lejati...aur main tumlogo ko chod k nhi jaana chahti thi...fir ek din shivam aaya...usne jeetne k liye hum sab ki saari kamzoriyan pata ki...aur usne fir mom ko bata diya ki main dance karti hoon...mom ko gussa aaya...aur unhone dehradun jaane ko kaha jahan mere nanu rehte hai...wo ek din bhi mujhe mumbai main nhi chodna chahti thi...fir elims wale din tumlog aaye...aur fir mom ne shrat raki ki wo mujhe jaane degi...lekin elims k baad hi hum dehradun chale jayenge...aur maine mom ki ye shrat maan li... karan sir kriya k jiju???😲 kitne shock degi tu meko aaj ?????

huh kriya ko mom ko sacchi mein dance pasand nai nd she took her to dehradun nd dis bloody chee- worm huh cheater looser kahi ka huh

Sw :kriya tum hum sab ko batake bhi toh ja sakti thi na...hum log tumhe rokte nhi... haan aur tum log usse jaane dete na

Vish :ha dude aakhri baar mil toh sakti thi na... ahhkri baar ????

huh

Kr :guyz main milna chahti thi...tumsab se...par meri himmat nhi thi...ki tum sab se milke wapas jau...isliye nhi mili...aur main yahn wapas na aati agar mujhe pata na chalta ki yahn vp ne dance banned kar diya hai... 😭 😭 😭 bechaari kriya i understand her situation

Sw :fir thanks to vp...uski wajha se tum hum sab se mili toh shi...

srsly usne yeh accha kaam toh kiya jiski wajah se kriya wapas aa gayi

Vish :ya man...hhhmmm...

Ne :neha saying u not missing neha...awwiee

Kr :aww neha tumhe kaise koi miss nhi karega...actually I missed u all...sgaron..viky...nilesh...simmi rinni...sabko miss kiya... awiee kriya missd rey bt not rey???

Sh :kriya tumne rey ka naam nhi liya... hmmm batao batao...

Kr :(in mind) miss toh unhe kiya jaata hai...jinhe hum ek pal nhi bhul jaaye par rey ko main kaise bhul sakti hoon...wo toh mere dil main hai... hhhm... kriya rey ko kaise bhul sakti😭

bt rey woh toh ek pal mein kriya ko bhula diya nd gaya taani k saath 😡 😡

the tilte is true rey is not worthy of kriya's love

Sh :kriya tumne jawab nhi diya...yes plz answer yaar rey ko bhi pataa chale hw mch u luvd him nd he...😡 😡

Kr :hmm wo...wo...main abhi...and ran out from there...

arey why did she run away frm there atleast bataa toh deti unnwaahh not fair yaar


*Phew*

main toh thak gayi yaar

kitna bada hai

hope u lyk it

sorry mera dimaag nai chaling so fr now this mch only

updte soon

m waitin fr it

Edited by cookie_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg . . . . Kriya's mom 😲
unexpected . . . 😳
vp is shivam's father . . . . No doubt vo itna kameena kyun hai 🤢
police pakad ke le gyi . . . 😆

ek competition ke liye log kya kya karte hai 🤪

kriya was on mission . . . .

lolzz . . . . Its not war thingi . . . Its cold war 🤣

but in sab me to rey ka dil tut gya na 😔

she love him too . . . . . 😳

God,, Help them 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

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