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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja_Ch



Plzz add me in ur Pm list...


hmm...i m richa...definetly i will wait
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Thnx.>! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MTBT_12071316


hmm...i m richa...definetly i will wait
thanx 4 d rply



Hi Richa! It's nice to meet you (virtually)!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt



<font color="#336699"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Hi Richa! It's nice to meet you (virtually)!!</font></font>😃


same here dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
NOTE

Hi to all our readers!
It's me, Annie! A small announcement to make that Tich won't be able to update this month, since its Ramadan and many of you, readers, too have taken a break from reading/writing anything for this duration. But since we know that there are readers who love stalking this FF, we decided that till Tich was back, me and Fizz (lalmirch28) [who also will be updating only when possible], will be updating for now.

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Annie😳

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Chapter 5[A]: Closer

Maanvi: (holding the phone to her ear) Shut up, yaar, Jeevika!! (chuckling) Tu bhi na!! (shaking her head in disbelief)

Jeevika: (giggling) I told you! See I can hear you blushing through the phone itself!! (stifling her laughter)


Maanvi: Chup kar! (looking around to see if anyone was there) What if Viren hears you? (checking the door)


She sighed in relief when saw a glimpse of Viren, carrying Muskaan in his arms and rocking her gently, murmuring sweet nothings into her soft ear and making her quiet. She had lately taken to crying a lot, if she didn't find anyone with or near her and that had really put the two in a tough position. With Viren not able to take any break from his cases, Maanvi was the one who had to handle Muskaan all the time in the house. Even if for a second, she were out of her sight, Muskaan would start wailing loudly. Today after a long time Viren had come home early with no extra work to handle, and had offered to keep Muskaan busy for Maanvi. She was more than happy to oblige and had sighed in relief.


Jeevika Arora, her best friend, had moved in to Chandigarh a few months ago, before Muskaan's birth. She and Viren were more than happy to have her here. For the first few weeks she had helped Maanvi till she was able to walk herself and take care of Muskaan. Unfortunately she had to leave for Mumbai for an important project and could keep in touch with Maanvi only through the phone.

Now since she was back and a very special day was approaching, Maanvi didn't want to leave out any thing now.

Viren: What will I hear, eh? (his hands back and him approaching Maanvi suspiciously) Hmm?


Maanvi: (surprised to see Viren behind) Huh? Oh, nothing! (back to Jeevika) Yeah, Jeevika, why don't you come home for dinner today huh? It will be easy for us to plan then! What do you say? (slapping Viren's arms wrapping around her waist)


Jeevika: Sure yaar!! (excitedly) I'm on my way! (giggling) Chal, See you!


Maanvi: Yup, See ya! (ending the call and leaning back on Viren) What're you doing, Mr. Vadhera? (softly)


Viren: (sighing contentedly; with closed eyes) Hmm? Hugging my girlfriend! Why? Does Mrs. Vadhera have a problem?


Maanvi: (mocking a gasp) Haww... I don't know! You should probably go and ask her, Mr. Vadhera! What if she is doing the same to you? (turning to face him in his arms) Hugging her boyfriend? Hmm? (playing with Viren's collar)


Viren: (pretending to think) Hmm... (trailing Maanvi's spine sensuously) Then I'd better take advantage of it and take something that belongs to me from my girlfriend!! (leaning forward to kiss her)


Maanvi: (leaning back and giggling) Stop it, Viren!! (turning to her side and giggling still on feeling Viren kiss her cheek open mouthed)


Viren: (moaning) Maan!! (lifting her up with his arms rounding them below her butt) Let's see *grunt* who's going to save you now!!!


Maanvi: (squealing at the sudden lift) Viren?! (twitching her lips) Drop me!!


Viren: Of course, I will!! Let's get to the bed, won't we! (smirking at the horror etched on Maanvi's face)

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The door bell rang after half an hour, waking the two love birds from their nap. Viren groaned at the sudden ringing of the door bell and sweared at the person outside the door. Maanvi tried to escape his hold, holding her close to himself, when he tightened his hold around her waist. She turned to face him sideways, the blanket covering their legs and waist.


Maanvi: Viren? Let me go! It's Jeevika! (whispering)


Viren: (groaning badly) How do you know it's her?


Maanvi: Because I invited her! (stating it obviously) Remember? (placing a small peck on his lips)


Viren lifted his hand, slowly edged it to the sweet swell of her bosom, and encircled it with one sensuous finger making her moan loudly.

Maanvi could feel herself going wet the second his hand touched her there. The moan escaping her throat gave away her sensitivity there. He didn't know how much she had to control herself and slap his pleasurable invite away.

Maanvi: Viren! (warning)


Maanvi quickly got dressed and got out the room to hear the bell being rung the second time.


Maanvi: Viren, come one! Get ready!! (tying her hair up in a loose bun) Coming!! (almost running to get the door)


As the huge oak door opened, there walked in a lady in her mid twenties, dressed in a pair of dark blue jeans and a creme coloured Pepe top.


Jeevika: Itna koi time lagata hain kya? (huffing; suddenly noticing Viren coming out the room stretching in his trousers only) Achcha! Toh yeh chal raha thha! (turning to Maanvi's bewildered expression)


Viren instantly looked down at his bare torso and rushed in quickly to cover up with a loose T-shirt. Jeevika couldn't help but laugh loudly and hug Maanvi, who stifled a grin and returned the hug.


Jeevika: Kaisi hain tu? (breaking away) Sambhalke! Apne unnko bol, varna kahi aisa na hojaaye ki tere liye ek competition ho jaaye!! (chuckling)


Maanvi: Chup kar!! (slapping Jeevika's shoulder) And I'm good yaar! Tujhe dekh liya toh dil khush ho gaya!


Jeevika: Same here, Maanvi! (walking in to sit on the sofa) Achcha where's my Muskaan? It's been months since I met her!! (straightening to look for her)


Maanvi: (smiling widely) She's asleep now! She just went to sleep! (seating and making Jeevika to sit down) She'll be waking up again for her supper, then you can have your time with her!!


Viren: (walking out the room, a bit embarrassed) Aur Jeevika? How're you yaar? Didn't hear from your for a few months!


Jeevika: (smiling teasingly) Yeah, I'm sorry for that, Jeej! By the way, you've toned up really good now! Kya hua? Muskaan ka bhaag-daud ka asar hain? (resting her elbows on her knees, while one hand went up to rest on her chin in askance)


Maanvi got up to get some drinks for the three, making place for Viren.


Viren: (grinning sheepishly and nodding) Vahi samajh lo! (sitting on Maanvi's place)


Maanvi came in, with three glasses filled with a cool drink and thrust it in front of Jeevika's face.


Jeevika: (looking up and narrowing her eyes) Yeh formality kabse, haan?


Maanvi: (grinning sheepishly) Arre yaar! Tu nahi thhi na, iss liye! Aadat ho gayi! (grinning at Jeevika's amused expression)


Jeevika: (muttering and shaking her head in disbelief) Pagal! (smiling to herself) So, now since the special day's approaching, what're your plans, my dear proud parents? (nodding at the two)


Viren: We haven't yet planned anything about it! (sipping at the cool drink) We thought you could give us some suggestions! (waving a hand at her)


Jeevika: Come on! It's her first birthday!! You will have thought about something!! (chiding them worriedly)


Maanvi: (nodding in positive) We hav--


Suddenly they were interrupted by the door bell ringing. Viren set his drink down and nodding at the two that he'd see it, straightened and walked up to it. The ladies resumed talking.

He opened the door to see the only person whom he had never imagined to see on his doorstep. Ever.
Virat.

Viren: (his face contorting in confusion) Virat? (voicing his thoughts)


Virat: Hi Bhai! (nodding sweetly)


Viren saw him clad in a three piece suit of black and white again, like he saw in the shopping mall, with his arms filled with a huge bouquet adorned by the best of fresh flowers they could ever find in Chandigarh. Most of them were Red roses, with white lilies, and the rest for decoration. He looked back up to his smiling face and thought of his sudden presence a bit suspiciously.


Viren: What're you doing here?


The words had come out the way, he mildly intended to, but tried to clarify it.


Viren: I mean--


Virat: (brushing off the undertone of that question) I just--


Maanvi: (cutting in the conversation innocently) Who is it, Viren? (craning her neck a bit to get a better look of the visitor)


Viren looked and moved back a bit, to let the image of Virat be shown to the two ladies. One's eyes widened and her body stilled as she let his presence sink in, while the other one stared at the man confused, and looking at Viren and then at Maanvi, and back at the stranger.


Maanvi: (whispering) Virat?


Jeevika: Huh? (on hearing Maanvi mumble something)


Virat: (grinning at the two ladies) Hello, Maanvi! (with a small wave) uh...Bhai? (indicating if he could kind of step in)


Viren: (realising instantly) Oh! Sorry! (moving back to let Virat in and then closing the door) Why don't you sit down? (stretching his hand and pointing to the vacant spot on the furniture)


Virat: Thanks! (walking up to Maanvi and giving the bouquet to her) It's your wedding gift! Uh... (raising his eyebrows sheepishly) I couldn't really think of anything else! So... Congratulations! (extending his hand to shake)


Maanvi stared wide-eyed at the bouquet that held her favourite flowers intact in one. One of them she had long lost her belief in. The Red Rose. Her eyes were about to sting with tears, when she saw his hand extended in front of hers. She immediately thanked him and smiled politely enough to not let him know what she was feeling.


Virat watched Maanvi's face drain out of colour slowly, as she saw the bouquet. He breathed easy suddenly on seeing her smile, and receive it without any qualms. And right when her hand was enclosed in his, he could feel her heat drained from it too, and had gone cold due to something.


Maanvi turned to go back to the room, the voices of Viren and Virat drowning fast as she made her way in. She blinked hard not to let her eyes get stung again, like it did outside right now.


Jeevika excused herself and followed Maanvi to her room. She saw Maanvi standing there with the bouquet in her hands near the bed, with her back facing towards the door.


Maanvi's mind was racing with memories that she had buried long back. The touch she had shared with Virat just now, had awakened something that had long ago died in her. She grit her teeth to control herself and blinked hard, some tears betraying her and falling on her cheeks. Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder, followed by a voice, which made her sigh in relief of not being caught. Wiping her tears and placing the bouquet on the bed neatly, she turned around to see Jeevika with a question in her eyes. A question she very well knew what it was and to whom it was trained to.


Maanvi: (with a wet chuckle) That's...That's... Virat Vadhera. Viren's... brother! (attempting to smile and keep the air casual)


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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update..
loved it!!
cont..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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*unres*
yaar what is the past?? m so curious!!
thanx for the pm
Edited by arohi16 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!
I'm excited for the next update
Can't wait to read the next part
Continue very soon and thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Vry nyc update...luvd it
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