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Posted: 13 years ago

when will you continue it?

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i m just loving it day by day
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Writer Note

Thank u sooo much everyone for such an overwhelcoming responce and beautiful commrents🤗means a lot to me...
plz keep reading it😳
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗


Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Destined Love

Sinking into passenger seat beside a stranger she sucked in her breath in irritation, she did not know why the hell she get agreed to accept his help for the first time in her life, sinking back at seat she titled her head a bit and couldn't help but the note the looks of the man sitting on driving seat. He was very attractive, with the certain stamp of authority all over him, and those pair of deep brown eyes looks like deep sea of hidden emotions..

"Are you regretting taking my help?" His lips twitched, Nupur lifted her brows, eyeing him with slight surprise how he got to know what she had in her mind.

"Ermm.No.."

"That doesn't seems so.."his deep voice was mellow but his stare sharpened with inquisitively as they wanted to search a way to her heart, those eyes that seemed to search her face as if he were looking for her soul and she could not give right to anyone to find way towards her heart."When I said.. No, I meant it" she put her chin up and looked him right in the eye. Although she was fastening stiffness, roughness over her face but still her face was so innocent, captivating, she had no flirtatious wiles; she didn't need any, he thought wryly'those eyes could seduce a saint.

"I've habit to look through the eyes because they don't lie" but before he could study her expressions she tore away her eyes, "you should change your habit because sometimes they lie"

He couldn't miss the sarcasm in her voice and either it was not just sarcasm but something deep hidden in her voice he didn't want to consider why it was becoming important to him to know more about this girl, he merely knew her but a captivating strange force pushing him towards her.

A pin drop silence prevailed in the atmosphere and giving her glance through the corner of his eyes he finally broke the silence.

"I am Mayank Sharma, owner of Sharma industries and your father's partner in one of huge project"

She gave him-non-interested look and again turned away her face in other side looking outside the window ,Mayank waited for her to say something or encourage their conversation, or ask something about him or tell him about her but when she didn't, he assumed she was not interested in those specific topics. That struck him as strange but he smiled to think that what the reason he was attracting towards her because she was not like other girls, she was a strange, captivating beauty. In his experienced, girls loved to know about boy's savings, his future plans how he will accomplish dreams of his future partner but Nupur didn't want to know about him anything and he didn't want to loose hope, he never accepted defeat so easily even in the worst periods of his life.

"That was the reason Mr.Bhushan had invited me on dinner, your parents are very nice"

Mayank saw the pain that flashed across Nupur's eyes at the mention of her parents the same he had felt in her picture. Nupur inhaled deeply without showing him his words were really hitting her heart-scars.

"And your mother cooks very well"

He continued ignoring those changing stiff expressions on her face.

"Can we talk something else" An awful lump of grief swelled in her throat and he stared her for a moment and understood he had hit the wrong place but why she was reacting like this when he just talked about her parents, he felt it odd and could not understand anything.

"I've no experience about what girls like to talk about but I can say one thing confidently I am good listener"

Giving her glance with the corner of his eyes he spoke with slight smile, She looked up at him regarding her with utter surprise he did not get offended at her stiff tone.He returned her gaze, his deep brown eyes smiling warmly into hers . . . no, not warmly, Nupur realized. Intimately!she tried to divert her eyes but somewhere she knew it was impossible This man had really gut to dissolve the wall of roughness she had fastened around her and she feared.

"Nupur!!!Please say something, I want to listen you"

After the silence between them, the sudden sound of his deep baritone voice had an electrifying effect on Nupur's senses, and her head jerked up. Trying to cover her reaction, she regarded him with blank expressions on her face, when he smiled, he looked dangerously handsome. And when he was silent and thoughtful, as he'd been just a moment while saying those words, she found him honest.

She tore away her eyes swallowing her lump she looked straight and felt relived she had been reached at her home, "Thanks for helping me"

As he stopped the car near the gate she quickly slipped out without wasting a moment she wanted to escape from there, "Nupur!!!"

His voice had stopped her and she whirled towards him.

"Will you marry me?"

Part 6..pg 36

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here is next update,i hope you will like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow that was superb update
really amazingly portrayed emotions,each and every word was beautifully describesd the emotions of character
loved it
wowww Mayank proposed her..lets see what she say
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update :)
whoa! Mayank was quite quick!! ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was superb update
very amazingly written!!!
loved every bit of it..
Mayank proposed her,will eagerly waiting for next update
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update Maria
loved Mayur conversation ,i loved the way Mayank trid to talk to her and the last line was amazing
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update!!!
so Mayank is attracting towards Nupur,good,loved their convo
i really wanted to read Nupur's reply
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic part,beautiully written part,loved Mayank's last word
please continue soon

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