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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update Maria
loved Mayur conversation ,i loved the way Mayank trid to talk to her and the last line was amazing
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesom update
very amazingly written,loved Mayur
loved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic part
loved it
lease continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mayank is 2 fast...seedha propose kar diya 😛 He has 2 do a lot of hard work 2 get nupur... 😉 Interesting update...continue soon...thanx 4 d pm:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.

mayank is so quick ... well written.

continue soon.

thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely part...continue soon.
sorry for late comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update maria api
ramdan mubarak
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u sooo much everyone for such an overwhelcoming responce and beautiful commrents🤗means a lot to me...
plz keep reading it😳
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Destined Love

His voice had stopped her and she whirled towards him.

"Will you marry me?"

He bit his lower lip realizing how bluntly he proposed her but then he knew until he will manage to support himself well enough in this game he may get success..

Suppressing the urge to throw something at him, Nupur said, "did you say these words to every girl whom you gave lift?"

She narrowed her eyes giving him sarcastic look and for a moment Mayank taken aback but then he reminded himself his guts. "No, these words are just for one girl and that is you"

"What do you know about me except my name?"

Mayank gave her long brief look and then spoke, "Nothing and it does not matter to me and if something is matter to me is You"His blunt candor amazed her, for an endless moment, Nupur had searched his features as if she wanted to see something beyond his face but couldn't see.

"Why do you want to play with fire? You know you can get hurt?"

She lifted her eyes at him and spoke tossing a sarcastic, stiffen look at him and Mayank drew a careful breath, "I would love to accept this challenge" he said, making successful effort to hide his nervousness under his confident tone. And he saw Nupur stiffen and shoot a sardonic glance at him after his statement and smiled inwardly he was going well..

"but I don't have any interest in challenging others, I have my own ways" she stared back confidentially in those deep eyes, she didn't get the slightest notion what was going in that stranger's mind and what he wanted from her but his confident, his intense meaningful eyes were definitely affecting her and she didn't like it.

"Do you scare to accept challenge?"

Scarcely taking time to draw a breath, he turned to Nupur and said brightly, He knew he hit the right place as her narrowed, angry eyes scrutinizing every feature on Mayank 's face in a way that gave him the feeling she was about to hit or slapped him.

"I don't scare of anything" Perilously close to burst out she gasped trying to compose her saying stiffly. She would probably feel better if she threw her anger, irritation everything out of her system, she thought but then a slight smile on his lips gave her challenge, she couldn't accept defeat Never..

"Then I'll wait for your call, I am not in hurry"

He stared her for long moment, watching her shoulders shake with the spasms of irritation, anger, he knew he had been hitting at right place and it gave him satisfaction, he was going well.

Her dark deep eyes, her cheeks flushed with anger, her black silky hair tumbling riotously over her shoulders, she had the innocent appeal of a bewildered, mysterious, captivating beauty; yet there was defiance in the set of her chin and angry pride blazing in her eyes, warning him not to underestimate her..

She gave him brief angry look then whirled around towards gate, inwardly he smiled at the way her angry glare scanned him from head to toe.

He scarcely knew her. He was no teenager fool who believed that young boy and girl tumbled into love with one another at first glance. He had not even believed in love at all. But still he wanted this beautiful, mysterious girl to love him and only him. For once in his life, he had found something rare, and he was determined to keep this girl that way'to marry her and cherish her. He sank into the driving seat and drove towards his way.

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"Mayank are you sure you'll get succeeded"

"I am sure"

Still his last meeting with Mr.Bhushan flushing across his mind, three days had been passed but still she'd not called him and he'd not lost hope a bit, he was confident .

He smiled remembering her angry impertinence in the second meeting when she deliberately gave him long angry glare before going towards her house.

His trance of thoughts broke with the sound of bell and he saw unknown number flashing on screen.

Pt 7...pg 44

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here is next part,i hope you will like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful update 😍



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