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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi1022

wow nyc teasr
me excited for nxt update

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Wow..Superb teaser..⭐️👏
Eagerly waiting for an update😊
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Originally posted by: srirad

Wow..Superb teaser..⭐️👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
dil khush kardi tumne.
what a teaser !
now I am very much excited to read next part.
how much time will take to get the update complete ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh superb teaser yaar...
Humari tarah yeh dono bhi pagal hai for our munda...
Omg maan n rishsb k face toh dekhne layak honge...
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superb teaser dear...
priya and geet..super combination..
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PART-7

@padma di,@tamannadi,@divya22, @kahkashansakina...sholly mein ne bahut wait karwaya last week se😳

@dumas-sorry dear..i dont have time to give translations this time as i gotta go to complete my college work..sorry dear..i know u r not comfortable with hindi..but iam sorry this time...😭




when both were glaring at each other...train moved suddenly...geet lost her balance who stood with crossed arms n bumped with maan who stood opposite to her..she is about to fall down but maan saved her holding her waist...





maan smirked at her.."u don't need any help from anyone..huh!!he said sarcastically...






geet got irked with his smirk...she freed herself from his hold n bent down to pick her bagagage which is still lying on ground of the train... At the same time passing glares to maan who stood smirking at her actually enjoying her cute cute faces looking at her baggage...but that naughty smirk made geet angry she is thinking that he is taunting her with his smirks but our naughty maan is in his own world...





when he is in la la land some one passed from there slightly touching maan's arm which made him loose hold on the file which was in his hand...one of the paper in it flew away due to air n geet who is busy arranging wheels of her baggage caught it before it flows away completely from their sight.."oh no!!!"she heard maan saying it n then smirked as she got chance now...



she looked up at him innocently who seemed li'l bit relaxed as she caught that paper..."do u need any help??"geet asked innocently eyeing at the paper in her hand ...maan raised his eyebrows as he understood what she is trying to do..."batayiye do u need any help???"






our egoistic maan said "no!!!..maan singh khurana can do things by himself..u don't need to" n he bent to take paper from her hand but she stood instantly hiding paper behind.."oh maan singh khurana can do things by himself na..so I'll throw this paper again..u can go n get it back"



maan:are u mad!!!how can I get it from running train..and now give it to me..it's very important paper..



geet again hid the paper behing her not giving him chance to take it"muje nahi pata ye aapki problem hai..krish ban kar hawa mein udiye muje kya...u don't need my help so iam throwing it back"n she pretended as if she'll do it really...




"hey geet wait...don't behave like crazy girl n give it to me"maan said still in authoritative voice...

This made geet more angry..."I helped him by saving his paper from falling n ye mujse aise baat kar rahe hai jaise mein unki slave hoon n he is the king to order me...ruko abhi maza chakathi hoon"



Maan:if u have completed ur murmuring session give it to me..



Geet:nahi nahi nahi bilkul bhi nahi..i'll throw it for sure..and she turned but just to pretend...but our maan is very quick to hold her waist n pulled her towards him...geet is shocked with this sudden act of him n looked at him with wide eyes..maan smirked at her n grabbed paper from her.."don't mess with maan singh khurana...u cant win over me"..





Geet is fuming with anger now...he moved forward to go from there...geet quickly left her baggage which she was holding, intentionally on his way...this made maan to slip n his forehead collided with the wall of the train which made him wince in pain...geet giggled making faces as if thinking"accha huwa..."..maan glared at her n moved from there with express speed...geet giggled at him n she too moved...






Maan came to the compartment where his mom n dad were already present.."pagal ladki jab dekho kuch na kuch karthi rehti hai.."maan mumbled while opening his lappy...priya looked at him confused but shrugged..."sach much chalti firti disaster hai..ya toh khud girti hai ya doosre ko giradethi hai"maan again murmurmed while running his fingers on keys...priya giggled listening to him also surprised as she never listened this type of talks from maan that too about a girl..she is about to ask maan but heard..."oh iam so sorry uncle I didn't do it intentionally..my bag was so heavy n I didn't see u passing from here...aapko lagi toh nahi na"geet is talking to some old man while helping him to pick his things...priya n rishab who listened her sweet n polite talks smiled at her...







Maan finally looked at that side as he know it's his chalti firti disaster who again must have bumped in to someone or the other.."lo...musibat ka naam liya n she is here" maan said n again engrossed himself in his lap top not paying any attention to her...thinking she might move from there but for his luck geet came to the same compartment...she saw maan sitting there n left her bag in shock and again on maan's feet..."ouchh!!! pagal ho...tum sach much disaster ho"maan said wincing in pain...





Geet is angry as he is saying pagal again n again.."aap bhi toh teek se bait sakthe the na..poora train aapka nahi hai...u would have not stretched ur legs n sit as if u are in ur bed room"




Priya n ram giggled also shocked to see maan singh khurana,mr.arrogant is listening to someone..wow she is really a unique piece..she is only the one who dared to answer him back...

Maan:tum chup hi raho..tumse toh baat karna hi bekaar hai..aur tum mere compartment mein kya kar rahi ho??

Geet:accha aapne kab khareeda...no one said me that mr.maan singh khurana is the owner of this compartment...

she then took out her ticket to check her seat number...

maan:tum...

Geet:kya tum...first u get up from here...

Maan looked at her amused"what???"

Geet:ha..this is my seat...my favourite window seat..



Maan smirked at her.."oh ur favourite window seat...I wont get up..do whatever u want"n maan leaned back with crossed arms...he closed his eyes as if relaxing ...



Geet thumped her foot in anger.."dust danav kaheeke"she said very loudly n sat beside maan as there is no other option left..she knows her dustdanav wont get up from there...





Maan who listened her saying dustdanav that too so loud fumed in anger..he glared at her as if he'll eat her now at that spot alive...geet gulped her saliva but again came to sherni mode..."kya kaha tumne"maan said leaning towards her while geet leaned back scared of his anger.."dhust..dhustdanav...ha dhust danav kaha mein ne..suna aapne"geet spoke bravely...




Bechare priya n rishab sat there with their eyes n mouth opened widely in shock..they are looking at both of them as if they are aliens...they are shocked n surprised to see maan like this..he is fighting with that girl,n this girl is giving nice replies to her rude son..omg this is 9th wonder for sure...she is the one who made maan shut his mouth...priya is looking at geet with out even a blink...








geet finally looked at priya n felt embarassed as she was fighting with him since few seconds n sat straight...our maan babu who is fuming with anger said"how dare u are..u said dust danav to maan singh khurana"...geet gulped her saliva looking at his anger filled eyes..."ha...ha..kaha mein ne..aap maan singh khurana ho koi bhagwan thodi ho..ab rakshas ko rakshas hi kahenge na...she turned to priya..pata hai aunty mein ne inka paper girne se bachaya n he is scaring me instead of saying thanku...ab aap hi batayiye aunty sabko help ki zarurat padti hai ki nahi..but he says maan singh khurana needs no help(mocks him)" huh!!



Maan:oh accha ab meri complaint meri mama se kar rahi ho...




Mama..geet looked at priya n then maan confusingly..."huh!!you don't know who is who but u'll always be ready to switch on ur radio..waise who asked u to catch that paper..maan singh khurana knows how to save his dear ones n his valuable things..."he said with attitude...before geet could answer him again priya n rishab burst out laughing not able to supress thair laugh...maaneet looked at them embarassed...priya is laughing like anything holding her stomach...after few seconds she stopped when maan glared at her but again burst out laughing n said...

Priya:oh toh maan ye wahi ladki hai kya..wat u said..pagal,miss.radio mirchi chalti firti disaster...she then realised what she said n bit her tongue...



Geet's mouth widened in shock.."hawww...aunty ye sab kaha inhone...aap ne muje pagal kaha...pata hai aunty ye bhi kuch kam nahi hai dust danav hai das sar wala ravan...ya toh goorthe rehthe hai ya toh chillathe rethe hai..lagtha hai inko insaano se allergy hai...sab par kisi na kisi bahane chillathe rethe hai..



Maan:tum.,..

Geet:ha mein kya???aap hamesha tum par kyun atak jaathe ho...agar aage yaad hoga toh baad mein batayiyega...






Rishab:bas bas bas..bas karo tum dono..bacho ki ladthe ho...maan u keep quiet now...bechari ko kyun tang kar rahe ho..



Maan:papa mein use tang kar raha hoon ya o muje...huh!!lagtha hai aap pagal ho gaye ho is ladki ki bak bak ki wajah se...




Geet made puppy face looking at priya n priya eyed maan to stop teasing her...geet smiled at priya n then gave victirious smile to maan..maan shook his head n again engrossed in his lap top to avoid jhagda again...






Later geet n priya had formal talk but for geet it's not formal..she again started her blaberring n mentioning each n everything about her life...priya is very much impressed with this fun loving girl..she just loved her smile...




Priya:kitni pyaari ladki hai...hamesha muskuraathi rehti hai...aur ye maan bechari se jhagda kartha rehtha hai...





After sometime geet saw that priya is reading magazine with lot of interest not even blinking her eyes..she peeped in to it n her eyes twinkled in excitement...

geet:wow GURMEET...geet exclaimed in excitement looking at his pic in magazine...

geet without looking at maan n rishab who are amused with her facial expressions settled herself beside priya...

"wow aunty matlab aap bhi GURMEET kia fan hai..."geet said almost grabbing magazine from her..

"matlab tum bhi"priya asked with same excitement...


"bahuth bahut bahut badi fan hoon aunty...i just love his smile,his acting his eyes everything...aunty u saw his robo dance in jhalak it was..

"amazing na.."priya completed...

geet:hai na...

both smiled n shared hi-5

and both went on n on n on...maan's n rishab's eyes widened in shock as they saw this crazy side of priya for the first time n another crazy girl joined his mom who is more crazy then her...

"ufff"they thought n enjoying their cute antics...


shorry friends i forgot to write precap😳


PRECAP

Maan lifted her head from his shoulder n made her sit properly...he crossed his arms n closed his eyes..after a second he felt weight on his shoulder again...

Geet again placed her head on his shoulder..this time she held his arm tight encircling her hands around his arm...maan sighed n closed his eyes'.



so friends this is part-7..hope i reached ur expectations..if not iam shorry😭😭



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Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
im first to comment😲
im so happy
awesome dear
loved it
continue soon
keep rocking
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow fabulous part
maaneet nok jhok very cute
priya and geet scene r awesome
loved it

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