**Sunny August Day**last part page 6

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I m back with new one!!!! I was writing it in school😆 .I knw it's crap..Still..I wanna dedicate this OS to Sujana❤️..Enjoy!!!

**Sunny August Day**

Chapter 1:

I was in love with Rey and if anyone was more surprised about this fact than me, it was Rey himself. Honestly, that was no surprise, since I basically tell him every day that I hate him.

We had a long history, him being my next door neighbor for all the eighteen years we'd lived. We were even born on the same day, which resulted in joint parties and me screaming bloody murder and crying because I hated him so much, driving my mum nuts. I can't even really tell where the hate came from, but somehow it had slowly turned into love over the past months.

The hatred I'd felt whenever he was having a new girlfriend, turned out to be jealousy directed toward his girlfriends, when carefully analyzed.

I was stunned when I found out that I was in love with him. One day when I had just been sitting innocently behind my desk, minding my own business and working on some lame school project, I had stared out the window and there was Rey playing basketball outside his house. Boy, was he well toned. I had kept on staring until he glanced up to my window. I had snapped my head back so quickly, I got a cramp in my neck and cursed loudly, slowly coloring. Ever since that moment, he somehow always appeared in my fantasies.

And now, at this very moment, I was holding his arm and he was looking at me in surprise. I don't know what had gotten into me, but as soon as I'd seen him walking from his house to his car, I'd raced down the stairs nearly breaking my neck in the process. My mother had given me a weird look when I didn't even do as much as take a breath. I grabbed the doorknob and yanked the door open.

Outside, I tripped and almost fell face first on the street if Rey hadn't been so quick and supported me with one arm.

"Wow, careful Kriya," he said and I tried to regain my balance by holding onto his arm. "Why are you rushing out like this? Didn't think you'd have time to give me your daily insult?" he asked and his blue eyes sparkled. Apparently, he found me amusing.

When I didn't speak, but instead just stared at the gorgeous black haired, black eyed boy, wondering why it had taken me so long to notice that he was utterly perfect, he cocked and eyebrow. "Uh, Kriya? Are you ogling me?" He sounded a bit off and shot me the strangest look.

"Shut up," I whispered and pulled his head down. Right before my lips could touch his and me practically inhaling the same air he was, he stopped me.

"What the hell!" he nearly shouted out. "What were you planning on doing?" he asked. "You weren't going to kiss me, were you?"

I snapped back to reality. "Don't be such a wuss, it's not a big deal," I argued annoyed. Why the heck did he push me away? I wasn't repulsive was I? Oh god, could it be that after all these years I'd finally make him hate me?

"Obviously you're very confused," he said, shaking his head so violently, I feared that it might fall off. "Kriya, look at me," he put his hands on my shoulders to keep me off bay. "You hate me, remember? I'm Rey. Don't go and freak me out like that." He muttered something under his breath I couldn't catch.

"I'm fully aware of what I'm doing," I assured him. "I don't hate you. I got over that way back. I like you Rey, I think I might actually be in l-," but he never let me finish that sentence. Instead, he clamped a big hand over my mouth.

"No," he snapped. "Don't you dare say it. You're crazy. You're obviously crazy. Have you been drinking this early?" I shook my head. "No, didn't think so. I would've smelled it. You must've planned this. My god, you go all the way in your hate rage against me. I can't believe this. I have to go."
And he did. He was fast. It took him maybe three seconds to get in his car and drive off, leaving me alone, on a sunny August day.

Next part : http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3096193&TPN=6#


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Posted: 13 years ago
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:Res:

::Unres::

First one to comment but the last one to unres..😆😆

Kria hated Rey or thought she did from a while.

Glad she realised her feelings for him atleast by now.

Loved the factors she possessed.

Hatred and jealous bcoz of the girls around Rey.

And what is this Rey upto??!!

If Imnt wrong, I think he likes her from the very beginning..

He is playing on a safe side..

Loved the last scene,

Kria came running to see Rey and good he holded her safe.

She was above to kiss him and he pushed her...yucky boy!!

And when he told her, u hate me ryt...I was ROFLing hard!! 🤣🤣

Awesome Update..

N pls update dis really soon.

Since I kno the rapid rate of ur updates pls do dis one first na..

Sorry for late unres too...all because of my sis!!


Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res shit meow i missed d change to comment first on my jaan work :( 😭

unres 😆😆

god i wish i commented first ... i always wanted to do dat on ur works but ...FATE doesnt want me to do dat 😭😭 chal chod ...:/

OMG...! u dedicated it to me 😲😲 😳😳😳😳 GOSH really i checked it twice was it me hahahhahahahah :P :P PP i am crazy i know hahahahha :P

so ya thank u so much dat u dedicated it to me ... me loves u nd u know it 🤗🤗

so kriya hates rey at first... coz coz no reason hahahah ...😆😆

love d fact dat dey share d same bday date hayeee dat was real cute 😳😳

d way she saw him playing basket ball nd fell for him awww ...! nd he just saw her ... WHY? did he feel d gare of her ? 😳😍

she was abut to kiss him 😳 but hallla ... he stoopped her ... WHY??/

he said she was confused why was he shaking his head hahah 😆😆😆 he is confused soul not kriya ... he is confused abut his feeling twards her ...!

gosh he just stopped her frm saying dos magical words i feel EWWW..! why? yaar rey ..! maybe he dnt wanna hear dos words dis soon may be ...😕

chal u mean dis is crap common not at all SERIOULY a big fat no.. dis is rocking... me loved it ...! nd d title is like BANG ON...! 👏👏👏

thanks for d pm 😳

update real soon ...! wanna know wats nxt for us nd KRIYA ..!
Edited by sujana9 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AHHAHAHAHAH OMG!!!! Lol maine to PM bhi nhi kiya abhi taak😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love45

AHHAHAHAHAH OMG!!!! Lol maine to PM bhi nhi kiya abhi taak😆


hahahha suchi me r FAST ..😆😆😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujana9

res shit meow i missed d change to comment first on my jaan work :(


Suju I thot of the same thing after commenting...thank god u didnt see ur angry avatars!!🤣🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujana9


hahahha suchi me r FAST ..😆😆😳



Holly COW!!! HAHAHAHAH I m insane!!! Now i m reading it again..it's totally crap re
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing OS dear...
loved it...
beautifully described...
n rey dint let her say d three majical words...y???🥱
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha


Suju I thot of the same thing after commenting...thank god u didnt see ur angry avatars!!🤣🤣



arrey i was like she is writing many nd i wish to comment first but ALAS i end up last ... but tday lucky i was ol.. so i thought i will be d first but tu ne kar diya tha re :( UAAN UAAN ..! arrey i did not get u des line u didnt see ur angry avatars!! u ya me ? 😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love45



Holly COW!!! HAHAHAHAH I m insane!!! Now i m reading it again..it's totally crap re

Not a crap...I liked it!!

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