A heart pour from Ashutosh to Nidhi

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Posted: 13 years ago
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From Ashu to Nidhi...

Ek ladki thi anjaani si... meri car se wo takrayi thi...
ladh jhagadkar jab mili hospital mein, mujhe dekh chakrayi thi...

Apni hi duniya mein jeeti thi... Apni hi dhun gaati thi...
Jaane kahan se sabko, apna bana le jaati thi...

Har adaa mein uski ek shararat thi...
Uske har dhang se mujhe badi hararat thi...

Jaane kaise wo titli meri zindagi mein rang bharne lagi...
Jaise meri khamoshi mein kuch karne lagi ...

Jaane kaise us ladki par main dil de baitha,
Par kuch na kehne par main tha aitha...

Dil se door karna tha muskil, basaana bhi na tha aasaan...
Main toh kar deta izhaar, par wo na ho jati pareshaan...

Aakhir Dosti ne mila diya pyar ko khuda ke darr pe,
Phir sawaar hua suroor pyar ka hum dono ke sir pe...

Apne pyar ko dete anjaam, par hum dard sehne lage...
Takleef ke daur mein jab apne hi KUCH TOH KEHNE LAGE...

Maut ko bhi salaam karke main uske paas laut aaya,
Dard mein lipti uss ladki ko kahin gumsum sa paaya...

Meri har khushi lautayi usne bas wohi nahi thi...
Sab kuch tha mere paas, bas uski hi kami thi...

Sachha tha pyaar, aur pyaarey they apne,
Aakhir poorey ho gaye humare sapne...

Wo meri, main uska, koi aur na tha dooja...
Dil tha uska mandir, pyar tha meri pooja...

Laakh chaha todna humare pyar ko, meri meet ne...
Par dobara pyar usse karne par majboor ki uski jeet ne...

Tum aayi toh, hoon main aaj, warna tha adhoora...
Nidhi, tum aur sirf tumse hai jeewan mera sawera...

With loads of love
ASHUTOSH

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Vow!!!!!!!! So beautifulll...👏 👏 👏

Liked it to the core...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 WOW! Superb poetry, very beautiful . Liked it a lot.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ mudra di n sarika ji... thanx a lot 4 liking it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aazeen02

From Ashu to Nidhi...

Ek ladki thi anjaani si... meri car se wo takrayi thi...
ladh jhagadkar jab mili hospital mein, mujhe dekh chakrayi thi...

Apni hi duniya mein jeeti thi... Apni hi dhun gaati thi...
Jaane kahan se sabko, apna bana le jaati thi...

Har adaa mein uski ek shararat thi...
Uske har dhang se mujhe badi hararat thi...

Jaane kaise wo titli meri zindagi mein rang bharne lagi...
Jaise meri khamoshi mein kuch karne lagi ...

Jaane kaise us ladki par main dil de baitha,
Par kuch na kehne par main tha aitha...

Dil se door karna tha muskil, basaana bhi na tha aasaan...
Main toh kar deta izhaar, par wo na ho jati pareshaan...

Aakhir Dosti ne mila diya pyar ko khuda ke darr pe,
Phir sawaar hua suroor pyar ka hum dono ke sir pe...

Apne pyar ko dete anjaam, par hum dard sehne lage...
Takleef ke daur mein jab apne hi KUCH TOH KEHNE LAGE...

Maut ko bhi salaam karke main uske paas laut aaya,
Dard mein lipti uss ladki ko kahin gumsum sa paaya...

Meri har khushi lautayi usne bas wohi nahi thi...
Sab kuch tha mere paas, bas uski hi kami thi...

Sachha tha pyaar, aur pyaarey they apne,
Aakhir poorey ho gaye humare sapne...

Wo meri, main uska, koi aur na tha dooja...
Dil tha uska mandir, pyar tha meri pooja...

Laakh chaha todna humare pyar ko, meri meet ne...
Par dobara pyar usse karne par majboor ki uski jeet ne...

Tum aayi toh, hoon main aaj, warna tha adhoora...
Nidhi, tum aur sirf tumse hai jeewan mera sawera...

With loads of love
ASHUTOSH

Wow, Aazeen, I have no words. That was totally out of this world beautiful.
Since last week, I had decided that other than my ff posts,I was going to be a silent viewer in the forum, but your post, just blew me away, and I was forced to speak up.
What an outstanding post. Hats off to you.👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow! loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful poetry, you have a gift, great job
👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow Aazeen ...Loved it too much .Kya baat, Kya baat ,Kya baat.

This is the story,on which so many of us are mad like anything.You are gifted artist, made such good poetry ...Dil garden garden ho gaya.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ rrdsu, nini, ssktlk, anjalini ... thanx a ton 4 ur lovely replies...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Libra

Wow, Aazeen, I have no words. That was totally out of this world beautiful.
Since last week, I had decided that other than my ff posts,I was going to be a silent viewer in the forum, but your post, just blew me away, and I was forced to speak up.
What an outstanding post. Hats off to you.👏

Oh Anu di... M totally floored... Thank you so much... For me u decided to give a reply... Thanx a lot...

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