OS : Homecoming - Page 5

just read this. its awesome. the way u described Kushi's agony is beyond words. 👏

Am I supposed to believe that you are learning to write ??

Cause this OS was amazing !! And the ending just made me go like W-O-W !! And I was just too stunned to write anything, but then I thought Id better put in my comment, varna meri to band baajegi !!

Muahhh🤗
This was so amazing !! The aura you created at the beignning it made me feel so soona soona , and I started missing my Arnie baby tooo !! And I wanted to hug Khushi out there man !! The poor worried soul Khushi !! Feeling all restless and worried, bichari to so bhi nahi paati !

And then finally when he comes, the way she senses his Homecoming !! I love the titl and Im telling you you'd better not change it !! And how recklessly she runs to see him, touch feel and believe situation here !! And the way she runs her hands all over him !! Aww !! That was an amazing scene

And the hug at the end was just PERFECT !! I love this OS Varshu ji !! Muahh

Beautiful! 😆

I have read this one. i have read divine intervention as well. What else have I missed?

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

I have read this one. i have read divine intervention as well. What else have I missed?

Oh! :D Then there's just one other which is called Indulgence. Fluff alert! :)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/iss-pyaar-ko-kya-naam-doon/2949609/os-indulgence

That was just BEAUTIFUL! You put it so perfectly. Please do pm me the next time you post something.😊

Nicely written...n u described their emotions so well😊