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smitar

@smitar

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Posted: 13 years ago

Absolutely fabulous! Absolutely!🤗👏

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Posted: 13 years ago

This was just mindblowing

the emotions you put in to it

that she stopped running away from his things and embraced them

then the stars indicated his arrival and how she ran to him and grabbed hold of him to not let him ever go again.

lovely os! 👏

Edited by -Chinnu- - 13 years ago

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Sidra

@siddy9171

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Posted: 13 years ago

That was truly beautiful! Her pain was expressed with such finesse. Loved it!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it, Varsha!

It brought out Khushi's emotions very well and I loved the line about her finding solace in things which reminded her of Arnav instead of running away from them...

And the Heer-Ranjha lines were very nicely used! :)

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shagun

@shagun_sarun

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Posted: 13 years ago

u write it beautifully👏

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anodaksgfan

@anodaksgfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

awww varsha this was totally cute...

loved it to bits..

the stars indicating his arrival..

and d heer ranjha lines...stole my heart away once again..

lovely os !!

and yes u have to write more!!

Edited by anodaksgfan - 13 years ago

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

touches the heart... in very few words, you've brought out their anxiety, relief and love for each other... their silence spoke volumes... hopefully we'll get such a scene in the show but fear that we are in for melodrama rather than understated emotions

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

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Posted: 13 years ago

Subtle :) Not too many words but you have been able to convey so much :-)

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

amazing! I loved the way you wrote about khushi's feeling - it felt so real!

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 13 years ago

#10

So beautiful to read--especially the bit about two pieces of a puzzle coming together.

My heart just clenched when you wrote about Khushi shaping her body into the shape that Arnav had been in when he slept on the recliner last. Gorgeous image. A woman drawing strength from that, trying to get close to his memory. Lovely work.

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