OS : Homecoming - Page 2

Originally posted by: Inked

So beautiful to read--especially the bit about two pieces of a puzzle coming together.

My heart just clenched when you wrote about Khushi shaping her body into the shape that Arnav had been in when he slept on the recliner last. Gorgeous image. A woman drawing strength from that, trying to get close to his memory. Lovely work.

Thank you so much Maya! :)

To be honest, I never actually even thought about the recliner. I'm feeling a little stupid right now, for not having considered it! :P But I was thinking that the chair he used while out on the poolside, where he sat while signing the papers, the one where the holi confession happened? It needed a little more screen time ;)

So glad you liked it! :) Thanks again!

awww... i wish this will really happen.. 😍 loved your os!! thanks for the pm..😉

LOved it.. this is pure love... Amazing girl...

That was so touching. The way you wrote their reunion was so... I don't really know how to describe it other than 'silent'. Calm, tranquil, serene maybe?

aww this is well cute! :D

Beautiful<3 Hope something similar happens in the show!(:



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Wow! This was amazing! Loved it

Originally posted by: arisai

That was so touching. The way you wrote their reunion was so... I don't really know how to describe it other than 'silent'. Calm, tranquil, serene maybe?

Like they don't need words. I could almost hear the tinkling of the wind chime and then feel the silence that must've been in the air when she went over to him and his voice mysteriously echoing through the air when he says her name.

Also the "hawaa" that miraculously blows through Shantivan at opportune moments.

They really should invest in some draught excluders...

Wonderful stuff.

P.S. I also felt the need to add how impressed I am that you UTILISED THE POLICE. I mean, I know in the show they're almost guaranteed to have Khushi going to investigate by herself and come across him miraculously as his heart calls hers towards him... But in reality, people would USE THE POLICE. It's easy to forget they exist when you watch Indian Dramas 😆

Thank you so much! :D I always visualize a scene before I write and try to bring that out with my words. And from your comment I'm immensely proud to note that I have actually succeeded in what I wanted to convey! :) So thank you! lol and what is a story without cliches. ;) ArHi romance is incomplete without the hawa and the duppattas :P

LOL glad you noticed that about the Police :D If I had a good enough idea about how Khushi would play superwoman and save her husband I would have tried that but I simply am not able to think in that direction and hence had to resort to the legal system! ;) :P

Once again Thank you so much. It was a wonderful comment! :)

That was BEAUTIFUL !
I hope something similar happens in the actual show !

Oh, Varsha...
How I wish this could happen!!!
My tv sooo misses BS!! ;)
Loved the way you described Khushi's emotions...

Thanks for the pm... :)