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Chapter 6: Sita sings the blues
(part-1, part-2)



Sita sings the blues, Part-1

Note: Guys this chapter opens some layers of Akki (Kushi's son).

Recap: Akshay thinks Arnav is trying to flirt his mother, so he warns Arnav to stay away from his mother giving Arnav and Maami a mento's moment

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After playing for a whileAkki returns home, with stains of mud all over the body. Kushi told him to take a shower, while she is working on her laptop.

Mumbai, Kushi's Appartment, (Night 7.30pm) , Akki in bathroom

Buaji: Akki bahar aajao nandkishore, aur kintne dher rahoghey andher.
(translation: Akki, for how long you are going to stay in bathroom, come out fast)

Akki: "Naani call amma"

Buaji:" amma kyu, she is doing her office work, so she told me to dress you up."

Akki:
He is all wet and water dripping from all over his body. "Naani, I don't have a towel, please call amma"

Buaji: Arey babua, jise tum chupana chahthey ho usey mein saalo pehley hi dhekliya, ab baahar aao nandkishore.
(Akki, the thing you want to hide from me, was seen by me years back, so please come out)

Akki: . He opened the door and rushed into his mother, hugging her knees tightly and covering his manhood with her pallu😉.

Buaji: Arey ruk jao nanda Kishore, pheleyhi humra sar bilkul bum ke jaisen patraha hai
(Please stop running, I am already suffering with head ache)

Kushi'.. Kushi''.. is aapat ko tumehi sambaal
(Kushi, just take care of this problem [here Akki] )

Kushi: She Laughed at Akki who is trying to hide from Buaji from getting exposed😆.

Then she dressed him up. Even before she asked him he told her that he has to finish his homework, which is very different from his normal, where he makes hundred deals before finishing one homework. Then he had his dinner too without playing any hide and seek game.

Her eyes followed his every moment. She very well know her son and his mind games. She know that he is upto something but she kept quiet. Then he gave a final stroke, Mummy if you give me milk, i will finish that too. She was shocked opening her eyes wide, usually he does not like milk, and makes hundred excuses. Now She is confirmed that something is brewing in his mind.

She gave him milk and asked him whats the matter.

Akki: "Amma, first you say Akki is a good boy😃 (with a big smile on his face) . It is his trial to gain her attention😉

Kushi: she gave him what the look...and took him near and repeated the same. Then she asked him
"Akki, now say what do you want?"

Akki: He stood silent for a second, silently making few calculations in his mind and given a innocent look at her as he leaves towards their bed room making her to follow his footsteps.

Kushi: Akki..., Akki wait... where are going?, what do you want?, while following him.

Akki: "Amma, please can you give me that red color box from my compartment. (Pointing his finger to it)

Kushi:
"Oh! is it this box?" and looked at him.

Akki: Hmm yes

Kushi:
"what is that box? I mean what does it contain?"

Akki:
"Amma, it is my last year's birthday present from Daadi (Buaaji), she took me to a gift store and asked me to pick one, so I chose this"

Kushi:
"Ok, now tell What is it Akki?

Akki: Just open it amma, you will know it yourself😊.

Kushi: She started unwrapping it saying
"Hmmm...What could it be? oh! a Tea cup set!" , She laughed at him and asked him" Now, why did you got this weird idea of having tea after finishing your dinner?"

Akki: He smiled at her, walked closer to her and kissed her, preparing her for what to come as he knows very well that his next move is going to hurt her which he never wanted but has no choice.

Kushi: She melted little bit seeing his love and asked him if he wants to drink tea.

Akki: Amma, first you listen to me...this tea cup set is a special one. On my birthday I want all of us to drink tea in these cups.

Kushi: "Ok, I promise😊. But why is it so special dear?" ( in a curious voice)

Akki: Mamma it is a family cup set, each cup is meant for a special person, and started showing the cups, this cup is for you, this is for me and these four cups are for other members in the house and here comes the last cup, for the head of the family.

Kushi: She is dumb struck, life slipped a second while listening to the last sentence and mumbled "head of the family'.?" in a worried tone.

Akki:
"Exactly Amma, head of the family my father. You told me that he is going to be here on this birthday of mine" , looking at her for her answer with all his senses fixed on her face.

Kushi:
In a jerk she lifted her head and looked into his eyes, he is damn serious, she tried to hid her eyes from him and said "Akki, your father is a very busy person and live very far from us. Also he has lot of work to'..(and stopped looking at his angry face)

Akki: He moved a step closer and seriously looking into her eyes without even blinking, daring her to complete her sentence.

Kushi: Finally she finished her sentence, "He has lot of work to finish, so he told me that he cannot come..."

Akki:
Anger took over him😡 and his voice rose "From past three years you are repeating the same sentence. Even my friend's father stays in America, but he comes to see him every three months". 🤢

Then he closed his eyes and took a second to control his anger and looked expectantly into her eyes and asked her "OK its fine if he dont come but atleast call him, I want to talk to him on phone on my birthday"

Kushi:
She felt guity. It is getting difficult to look into his eyes. She knows that he has traits of his father and will keep hunting until he gets his prey. Then she thought that she has to be strong in dealing with him. She quickly put a hard mask and said

"He has no time to talk, so please stop being stubborn",
in a rough voice.

Akki: He is devastated with her words. He took a gulp and then grids up his lions and screamed at her "How many days you are going to say the same thing mamma?, where is my father? I want to talk to him right now?"

Kushi:
She felt like as if someone pulled her soul out of her, as she looks into his questioning eyes. She is becoming weak with her evolving emotions, clutching her pallu.Then she took a deep breath, grabbed his shoulders and warned him "Just shut up" (in a sharp voice)

Akki:
😡😡He was very angry at her and his eyes turned red.

"You shut up and call my dad, I want to talk to him right now" with a tone matching her intensity.😡

Kushi:
That is a straight arrow to her patience, enough to trigger her madness😡 She did not know how to control her emotions in an impulse she gave him a tight slap.

Akki: Aaah.. and ummhh😭 ummhh😭. He started crying but still not giving up his "I want to talk to my father"

Kushi: It is hurting her to the core, pain is visible in her eyes, tears welled up.😡😭 and she slowly said "I said shut up Akki"

Akki: But this little one is one tough nut, who is firmly standing on his grounds, crying and at the same time continuously shouting. "I want to talk to my father, I want to talk to my father I want to talk to my father,..."(each time more loudly)

Kushi:
His words are pricking her heart like needles but she is helpless, seeing his madness she slapped him once again😭.

Akki:
He is crying but not moving from there.

Buaji: She came running into the room hearing those slap sound, "Hai rey nand Kishore, Tumri akal ka bhakiriyan jaisen ghaas charie gaye ka Kushi, Aeisan Bachae ko koi maartha hein ka' and she dragged him from that place.
(Translation: Did your mind when went to what grass like a goat, is it way to treat small kids?)


Delhi, Raizada mansion (night continues)

Aakash is working on his laptop and payal entered their bedroom after getting Ananya(Anjali's daughter) to sleep.

Payal: Aakash, are you still working?.

Aakash: Hmm I have to. He looked at her new night gown and said" you are looking very beautiful in this."

Payal: She is very happy that her trial to gain his attention is finally accomplished.

She smiled and slowly took measured foot steps, closing the distance between them and she cupped his face, looking deeply into his eyes, with a strong desire. She encircled her hands around his neck and brushed her lips against his chest, feeling his muscular scent and breathing heavily.

Aakash:
Payal, I am sorry,
I cant do this today. I have to finish a lot of work.

Payal: "Aakash... it is fine, I can understand" with a sad face.

Aakash: "Payal, I am sorry for disappointing you, but I am working for our future in-order to give you the whole world.

Payal:
She looked into his eyes with a lost smile thinking deeply "if only you know what I want Aakash"

Aakash:" payal... payal... where are you lost.."

Payal: "nothing Aakash, i will go sleep with Ananya". She gave him a good night kiss and left the place"

Scroll down for part-2

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Edited by Shravani_21 - 13 years ago
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(scroll up for Sita sings the blues, part-1)

Sita sings the blues, Part-2


Back to Mumbai: (Kushi's apartment)

Akki: He stood in lounge and cried for a while looking at stars, then took a book from his bag and wrote something. He closed his eyes for few seconds and looked at stars for one last time as if he is wishing something and peeped into their bedroom to see what his mother doing.

Her shoulders slumped, she sat down heavily and crying, he could cannot bear her tears. He rushed to his mother and hugged her tightly from back side leaning his head on her neck. But she is still angry with him, she did not turned to his side

Akki:
"Amma, Abhi tak naaraaz ho humse...", "Humse bhool hogay amma, hume aapse aisa baath nahi karna chahiyetha...,"
(Translation: Amma, are you still angry with me? I should not have behaved like this, please forgive my mistake)

Kushi: Akki chodo..., chodo hum tumse baath nahi karni hai...
(Translation: Akki, please leave me)

Akki: He wiped her tears then cupped her face and said "Sachi amma, I am sorry, please dont cry, Agar aap roti hai na' humey bikul bhi acha nahi lagtha."
(Translation: I dont like to see your tears)

Kushi:
She melted little bit and took him into her arms.

Akki: Tho aap hume maaf kar diya? (she nodded her head saying yes)
(Trnaslation: SO did you forgive me?)

But her frown and upset face is bothering him.
He smiled gently and said "tho Amma, aap hume ek achi si kahani sunaona, (He wanted to divert her mood)
(Translation: SO why dont you tell me a story)

Delhi, Raizada mansion

Naani: She slept on her bed and deeply lost in the thoughts of Anjali. The words of Payal that doctor told bringing shyam into Anjali's life might help her recovery are echoing in her ears. Then she talked to herself, Doctor se baath kareki padi.
(Translation: I should talk to doctor, regarding this matter)

Back to Mumbai: (Kushi telling story to Akki)

Kushi: Beta(Dear), What story should I say you? in a sad voice and with a pale reflection in her eyes. Then she slowly shifted her gaze to him and said

Ok...then listen to the story of Sita(Kushi), an orphan by birth was discovered by Janaka(Shahiji) while digging a pit to conduct a spiritual sacrifice (Yagna). When he is embracing her little does he know he is holding an object which is destined to be sacrificed.

Dear, Now look into my eyes and try to feel her loneliness.😭

She was married to Rama(Arnav), the prince of her dreams. She is the queen of a royal palace with golden pillars(Raizada mansion) yet destiny made her step into forest(separations). When she took her first step little does she know all her life she is going to stumble in the rocks of those forests.

Dear, Now look into my eyes and try to see her wounded feet😭

She has given her soul to Rama and loved him to her life. Destiny sketched a border(Arnav Rekha) between them which she tried to cross only to get trapped by Ravana. Rama defeated Ravana(Shyam) only to humiliate her by asking to testify her purity. When she stepped to give Angipareeksha(to prove herself) little does she know that is not one but more to come on her way.

Dear, Now look into my eyes and try to feel her burnt soul😭

With all wishes of gods she gave birth to a son, a token of love given by Rama. She webbed all her dreams around her baby by singing a lullaby every day. He became the center of her heart of hearts, body and soul. When she built her world around him little does she know he is an other Abhimanyu(her Son), who is going to be trapped.

Dear, Now look into my eyes and try to see her lost life😭

She is all happy in her bubble until Rama chose to sacrifice her dream world in a hurry of conquering the title called Dharmathma. Her dreamworld crashed to grounds, ripping every piece of her soul, tearing every string of her heart, clouding her eyes with extreme darkness in which she lost all her relationships along with Rama. Her heart burnt to aches and completely destroyed in love.

Dear, Now look into my eyes and try to see her heart breaks and feel her pain.😭

Akki: He is silently absorbing all her pain, and his eyes are reflecting the same.
Her tears are hurting him. He wanted to stop her, but she is in her flow, all lost... and he stood there helpless looking into her eyes...

Kushi: Her heart was broken to pieces but still she is trying hard to gather those pieces. She was reduced to ashed but still she is trying to rise as pyramid from her burnt ashes. Then why does her own people still throw stones at her?
She is also a human how many heart breaks she can withstand?😭.

Even after suffering countless humiliations, rejections, privation, abductions why her problems never come to an end. why always she blamed? Why she is not worthy of freedom? when does her struggling never ends?

Why does they give fresh cuts when she is already suffering painful cuts? Why do they still ask her to go to Rama? why does her...😭 why does her fate never change?😭 why she should suffer all her life?😭

Why...? Why...? her voice cracked

How much she can take? She is tired..😭. tired... 😭, her voice echoed crashing against chords with words repeating and colliding.

Akki: Stop it Amma... please stop it... he couldn't bear her tears anymore

Kushi: pain is oozing from her eyes as tear drops. Beta, Now look into...😭 now look into my...😭(she couldn't complete it) She is all broken.

Akki: Amma shhh..., Shhh... he shushed her. I don't want this story anymore...
you are not going to say anything now... I don't want to listen anything which hurts you. (Does he know what he is saying? Is he going to be a mothers son?😲)

He wiped her tears and then cupped her face and told her not to worry. I will change her fate. (Does he know what he is saying? Is he going to be father's son?😲)

Then he started asking his never ending questions.

"Hell, Who is this Sita? Why are you crying? Doesn't she have sons? If she don't, then take me to Rama😡😡, I will fight with him and teach him a good lesson for making her cry so much... (little does he know he is talking about his father😲😆)

Kushi: her face glowed with a little smile at the end of her lips listening to his innocent words😳. A tear of happiness skipped from her eye thinking how protective he is about her. She took him closer, hugged him tightly and kissed his forehead😊


Spoiler: Guys what do you think if ASR gets the book written by Akki?

I hope you enjoyed the story and I welcome your suggestions. I will update it as soon as possible, till then i want to give you space for predicting, to come up with creative suggestions.

Note: Silent readers please give me my food (likes and comments) to continue my next chapter.😳

Edited by Shravani_21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all I want to thank every one for supporting and appreciating my work.

Note: Guys the spoiler given in prev chapter i.e Kushi in red sari is going to come in next chapter.

1) Many people asked me for more akki-arnav interactions. I promise, you will see many in upcoming chapters.

2) Some wanted me to make kushi forgive Arnav. Let me tell you guys please be patient for story to unfold.

3) A person asked me to make Kushi wear western dress, Yes, i will definitely try, but please wait for the perfect timing.

Once again Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
Edited by Shravani_21 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
cho sweet !!! looking forward to khushi in red saree😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
read all the five parts in on go...
amazing work...
update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏wowww
loved it dear

thnx 4 the pm dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh man that was emotional
well she cant exactly tell her little boy why his father doesnt come to meet him after what he did you amma isnt in a position to see him again even for your sake
akki sure is a smart kid will he be able to reunite his parents after he teaches his father few lessons first
loved the mother son interactions
thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
its wonderful!!!
waiting for ur nxt chapter impatiently!!!

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