ArHi FF:Two Star Crossed Lovers, Chp6 updt 12/7/12

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Preethi

@PreethiR

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#291

just read the first two chapters now and liked all the other updates..

will read rest later..

thanks for pm

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#292

i read whole story so far...nd i loooved it:):)

gr8 job dear:)

thnx 4 pm:)

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689471

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#293

Just came across your story on the forum. Very interesting...nice😃

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anjale

@anjale

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#294

wow cute update the next part soon pl...

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Lalita

@luckyarnav

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#295

I just read all the parts dear and i think its superb.

Really touching and so nice to see khushi being so strong.

Plz do update soon.

waiting for it.

thank u so much😃

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deepika45

@deepika45

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#296

update it soon.. its awesome

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DARSHI

@coffeebeancat

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#297

this is a master piece..! superbly done...want to give you 2 -3 suggestions. add a little bit of hatred and pain and redemption into it , between Arshi. after that add love track...and then another baby...!! thank you for this story. keep going...! 😉

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DARSHI

@coffeebeancat

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#298

sorry..another suggestion...since Arnav loves western cloths. ( Lavanya's style ).. LET ARNAV SEE KUSHI IN VERY HOT MODERN ITEM. 😉 😉 PL IT IS MUST..l LIKE TO SEE ARNAV GO WILD AFTER SEEING THIS. THIS WILL ADD SOME HOT SPICES TO YOUR ALREADY NICE STORY. NOT RED SAREE PL...!