my 1st os on virman:luv cums frm bth t side

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Posted: 13 years ago
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my 1st os on virman pls share ur views
it's the 7th day of virat's challenge and manu has nt accepted that she too luvs him
virat is about to leave rishikesh

virat:i'm nt hurt coz u didn accept t fact tht u luv me,but i feel very sorry tht u r nt allowin me 2 give the share of luv u deserve,tc
mannu is speechless with tears in her eyes
virat leaves

jeevika:mannu kyun apne app se bhag rahi hai,tu achi tara se janti hai ki tu virat ke bina nahi reh sakti phir kyun de rahi hai takleef usse aur tujhe ja usse rokh le


manvi stops virat

mannu:virat tum sahi kehte the mera dil me tumare liye wohi feelings hai jo tumare dil me mere liye

thn virman share a passionate hug
manvi:par meri zindagi ka koi bharosa nahi naa jane kab mera saath chodde
virat:lekin mai tumara saath kabhi nahi chodunga
manvi:ue sab baatein kehne ku achi lagti hai ,virat mai tumse kuch mangu gi toh tum deoge na???
virat:ha bolo partner tumare liye to meri jaan bhi hasir hai
manvi:mujhe srf ek din ke liye tumari biwi bana chati hum
virat is hsocked 2 heat ths

virat:ye tum kya kehrahi ho partner,tum hosh me to ho na
manvi:koi bhi ladki apne sapno ke raja ke saath puri zindagi bitana chahegi,lekin mere utna acha naseeb kahan,main sirf ek din me puri zindagi kushi pana chahti hun virat,tume meri kasam mana mat karna,aur me jaanti hun di ghar me sirf vanshika aunty aur jiju hai bakhi sab bahaer gaye hue hain,aur in logon ko koi problem nahi hogi

virat:theek hai partner ab tune mujhe tumari kasam dedi hai to phir ma kaise mukar sakta hun



next day

vanshika ,viren and jeevika welcums manu wit smaile on der face expectin tht ths can happen in the future too
manu hugs every1
she dresses lik a married woman n enter the house
manvi:virat jaante ho ki ek biwi apne husband ko kaise kush karti hai
virat :kaise partner
manvi:pet se,mai jaanti hun maine tume hamesha kuch na kuch kharab hi banake khilaye hai,ab main tumare favourite chinese dishes banungi


at the dinning table
every1 is praising mannu'scooking skills
virat is happy n thnks tht he is the most happiest person on the earth

in the night
jeevika:r u sure mannu,kya tu yeh karna chaht hai
mannu:ha di,main virat ko woh sari kushiyan dena chahti hun jo ek biwi apne pati ko deti hai
jeevika:mai jaanti hun manu tu jo bhi kar rahi hai woh virat ki kushi ke liye kar rahi hai,aaj mai tuje nahi rokhungi ja mera devar tera intezaar kara raha hai

manvi enters virat's room blushing

virat:partner tum bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho
manu:virat tu zyaada maska mat maar
virat:lekin tum muje samaj hi nahi pahi
mannu:mai kch samjhi nahi
virat:yehi khi meri kushi in sab me nahi hai
mannu:to phir kisme hai virat
virat:aankhen bhand karo

virat cums closer 2 mannu n fills her maang
mannu is shocked
mannu:ye kya kiya virat tumne
virat:wohi jo mujhe pehle karna chahiye tha,tum meri kushi ke liye itna sab kuch kar gayi aur mai kya tume sach me yeh kushi nahi desakhta maine tume kitna kush dekha aaj,is liye maine decide kiya ki yeh kushi tume zindagi bhar mailni chahiye,mai ghar waalo se bhat karunga agar koi nahi maane toh hum apni nahi duniyan basalenege

mannu:virat mai nahi jaanti ki tum mujhse itna pyar karte hoo

virman shares a passionate hug


2 be contd...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue loved it...
plzzz and pm me wen u do sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haye Haye...itni filmy OS!
PM me once you update! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Andreavaz


Haye Haye...itni filmy OS!
PM me once you update! :)

sure😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haye haye, filmy hai..
lekin very nice hai..
continue soon , good work.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_never_dies

haye haye, filmy hai..

lekin very nice hai..
continue soon , good work.

ty😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What would b next😍😍 W8ing...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really nice!..
Congratz on your 1st OS!..
Glad to read it cos for me it somehow makes up for the current distance between them in the show...
Please pm me when u update..thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it

Please PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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looking forward to the next update!

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