FF: ASR Junior's SECRET DIARY! Part 18, Page 130 UPDATED! - Page 40

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey congos on ur new thread...ur work is terribly hillarious yaa...loved it <3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Aww Fari🤗, I just love this SS!

Just caught up each and every update of yours and I can guarantee you that I had a blast😳 It just oozes with cuteness, sweetness and fun! Asher is really too cute! Now, I am impatiently waiting for the next update! You've got me hooked!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I had this big smile plstered on my face while reading the last 3 parts especially the 13th one. The way little ashar joins the family in celebrating the arrival of the babies and forgets his own insecurities, you've made evident how he'll be a caring and loving brother when he grows older.
Thank you so much for the pm and the link to the new thread. Made my night!
Just read about your calculus and mechanics tests :D Reminded me of last year. I would always fail the class tests (thank God i managed to get decent grades in the finals ;) )

Waiting (impatiently) for the next update,
Sarah :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOOK HERE! HERE!! ATTENTION EVERYONE!! 😆

Hello Guys! 🤗

I'm really sorry for not updating this weekend! Really really sorry but I've been terribly busy so didn't get time to... 😔

But I'm updating today! Even tho I haven't replied to any of your comments, but I still am... Cos I'm guessing you guys would probably want an update instead of my fazol replies, no? 😉

I was thinking of delaying the update until I replied to the comments but then I figured out why you should you guys suffer for that, right? By waiting for an update? So I'll reply to the previous comments after this update!

And I must add the response I got on my last update was overwhelming!! Such nice long comments mentioning which part everyone liked! I loved reading them all! Thank You *bows deeply*

Ok, So now I'm going to type an update! See ya all later! ❤️
Edited by SmileyStar - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dear Diary,

It was pretty hard being happy for my family when my family was studiously ignoring me and busy jumping up and down at the sight of my brand new baby sister. Everyone crowded around my dad and then took turns holding her like she was a Cricket World Cup while dad fretted about, squeaking, "Careful! Be careful!" And I felt like screaming, 'Stop freaking out Dad! She's only a Baby, not your precious Laptop!'

The sight of Dad holding someone other than me, made me want to cry. I hadn't thought of him capable of such treachery. Controlling my tears, I quietly made my way to my mum and was relieved to find that atleast she remembered her son as she showered kisses all over my face and for the first time in my life that didn't annoy me.

As I cuddled into my mum, I was shocked to find her stomach deflated. The hospital people had succeeded in doing what I couldn't. And that was puncturing her stomach! With those large needles called Injections I guess. I felt my temper rise. Who are they to touch my mum? If only I could see the doctor who had done this, I'd give him a piece of my mind. Well, I'd scream 'What The' at him, I'm sure he'd understand.

Akash Chacho entered at that moment, carrying another devil, Ummm I mean baby. And Payal Mausi was rolled in behind them on a really cool bed with wheels. I wanted to have a ride on it too but Mum wouldn't let me.

Anser started crying then without warning, shocking Akash Chacho terribly but I was already ready for it. I mean, Hello? He's Payal Mausi's son! Crying buckets of tears is in his genes!

A very flabbergasted Akash Chacho took his son to Payal Mausi to find her already drowning in a puddle of her own tears, opening and closing her mouth like a Goldfish while no sound came out. Finally she managed between sobs, "Akash Ji, Ab hum kia karain ge? Humara Munna ro raha hai Akash Ji" before succumbing to tears again.

A low 'Bhai' escaped Chacho's mouth as he started towards my dad holding his screaming baby but seeing him already holding Asmara he stopped short, running his hand through his hair in helplessness as he just stood looking here and there before Manorma Daadi stepped in for the rescue, loudly exclaiming "Why fear when Manorma is there?" and finally everyone heaved a sigh of relief.

Dad, on the other hand was completely oblivious to his surroundings as he just stared at Asmara mutely as if she had a laptop screen fitted on her neck instead of a face. His lack of speech or to be more precise, his lack of 'What The' made me wonder if he had slept with the mosquito repellent again and hence lost his voice.

And thinking of allergies, It clicked me then that I had finally found what I was allergic to! These two new babies!

Same way as a mosquito repellent makes dad lose his voice and Payal Mausi's Chameli ka tail makes Akash Chacho sneeze, these two infants made me want to cry! That would explain why I've been feeling like having a good cry ever since I entered this ward but had controlled myself cos I can't very well cry in front of my baby sister, can I?

Sure, its a little weird kind of an allergy but strange allergies do run in the family. I should know, I've become an expert living in my house.

Dad was still busy staring at his 'Little Angel' and that annoyed the hell out of me. Were there less staring sessions in Shantivan without this new duo? But I was relived to find that Asmara was sleeping peacefully and wasn't reciprocating the stare like mum did and that is what encourages dad to stare at her even more. But having a staring competition with a sleeping baby looked so boring! Don't know whats wrong with dad!

Finally Dad noticed me sitting next to Mum, walked towards me and lowered the bundle of blankets in front of my face as he softly introduced me to my sister saying, "Ashar, meet your baby sister, Asmara" like I was too dumb to figure it out myself.

I looked at her closely and I had to give it to the hospital! They had done a really good job at manufacturing her. She resembled Mum to a startling degree!

And that helped me guess that it was probably dad who placed the order for my sister and got one made just like Mum. No wonder he feels inclined to stare at her face too!

But there was a difference in his stare I had noticed right away. Dad stares at mum like a lunatic without a properly functioning brain but he stared at Asmara with so much love in his eyes that it was a little unnerving! And he blinked quite frequently to stop his tears from falling too, something he doesn't do with Mum. And there was the sweetest smile on his lips which isn't there when he's staring at mum cos his mouth hangs open a little.

We went back home together to be greeted by Anjali Bua and her Poja ki thaal. That woman seriously needs a new hobby!

She waved it in front of both babies and then applied some red colour to their forehead although it wasn't even Holi. And So, my new siblings were welcomed into Shantivan.

Precap: Siblings Interact!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Everyone crowded around my dad and then took turns holding her like she was a Cricket World Cup while dad fretted about, squeaking, "Careful! Be careful!" And I felt like screaming, 'Stop freaking out Dad! She's only a Baby, not your precious Laptop!' 🤣 She is more precious than an Oscar for ur family 😆

The sight of Dad holding someone other than me, made me want to cry. I hadn't thought of him capable of such treachery. He is capable of many more treacheries...Ahem Controlling my tears, I quietly made my way to my mum and was relieved to find that atleast she remembered her son as she showered kisses all over my face and for the first time in my life that didn't annoy me. 🤣 Arre! Even she didnt get to hold her 2nd born..so she was reliving the moments spent with you

As I cuddled into my mum, I was shocked to find her stomach deflated. The hospital people had succeeded in doing what I couldn't. And that was puncturing her stomach! With those large needles called Injections I guess. They punctured her stomach very well...C section or normal? Ohoho! U dont know right? Am so sorry!!!!! well these are two types of puncturing someone's stomach...only mothers...they can never puncture your dad's stomach with these techniques...well he will never have a bloated stomach as it...he excersises n runs to your mum everyday 😆 as I felt my temper rise. Who are they to touch my mum? If only I could see the doctor who had done this, I'd give him a piece of my mind. Well, I'd scream 'What The' at him, I'm sure he'd understand.
Awww! That would be such a cute What the...u r going to be ur mum's raja beta...I guarantee...want proof? Humph! Business man's son...fine go read my OS 😆

Hello? He's Payal Mausi's son! Crying buckets of tears is in his genes! 🤣 Buahahahaha but he is a guy yaar! U've got to train him...he cant cry buckets infront of his elder bro n his sister 😆

Finally she managed between sobs, "Akash Ji, Ab hum kia karain ge? Humara Munna ro raha hai Akash Ji" before succumbing to tears again. What the...n I thought mums understood what their children want right from the time they are born...*sigh* ask ur parents to publish a tutorial for them...Or wait a min...check your Akash chacho's shirt...is it wet? 😆

A low 'Bhai' escaped Chacho's mouth as he started towards my dad holding his screaming baby but seeing him already holding Asmara he stopped short, running his hand through his hair in helplessness as he just stood looking here and there before Manorma Daadi stepped in for the rescue, loudly exclaiming "Why fear when Manorma is there?" and finally everyone heaved a sigh of relief. Haila! Still 'bhai bhai' ka raag? N what will Manorama daadi do he-err? [read like she would say] Hello hi bye bye? 😆

Dad, on the other hand was completely oblivious to his surroundings as he just stared at Asmara mutely as if she had a laptop screen fitted on her neck instead of a face. His lack of speech or to be more precise, his lack of 'What The' made me wonder if he had slept with the mosquito repellent again and hence lost his voice. Hahahhahahha no he's just down with shock...n check ur sister's face...does she resemble ur mum? If yes, then thats why ur dad's continously staring at her😆

And thinking of allergies, It clicked me then that I had finally found what I was allergic to! These two new babies! Nayi tarah ki allergy hai ye to...Kabhi nahi suni...Well Raizadas are one of a kind 😆

I can't very well cry in front of my baby sister, can I? Aww no you cant...you can actually...after she's grown up...keep your face on her lap n cry...that would be such a touching moment!!!!

Dad was still busy staring at his 'Little Angel' and that annoyed the hell out of me. Were there less staring sessions in Shantivan without this new duo? But I was relived to find that Asmara was sleeping peacefully and wasn't reciprocating the stare like mum did and that is what encourages dad to stare at her even more. But having a staring competition with a sleeping baby looked so boring! Don't know whats wrong with dad! 🤣 Your dad's an expert at staring everything related to your mum...be it her accessories or her kids 😉

Finally Dad noticed me sitting next to Mum, walked towards me and lowered the bundle of blankets in front of my face as he softly introduced me to my sister saying, "Ashar, meet your baby sister, Asmara" like I was too dumb to figure it out myself. Haan haan u r the mini encyclopedia of the house...u r the mini Einstein n Newton...u know everything

I looked at her closely and I had to give it to the hospital! They had done a really good job at manufacturing her. She resembled Mum to a startling degree! After all ur dad had cracked the deal...they had to be perfect 😆

But there was a difference in his stare I had noticed right away. Dad stares at mum like a lunatic without a properly functioning brain but he stared at Asmara with so much love in his eyes that it was a little unnerving! And he blinked quite frequently to stop his tears from falling too, something he doesn't do with Mum. And there was the sweetest smile on his lips which isn't there when he's staring at mum cos his mouth hangs open a little. 😲 Ashar u stare at your parents this long during their Rabba Ve to notice all this? Then when do you go n stop them? Half the time gets over in noticing this...waise u r a good observant...I didnt notice all this 😆

Precap: Siblings Interact! Yayyy! Waiting for this 😃

Aww I totally totally LOOOVED it 😃
If u write this well after delaying the update then...dont expect me to say delay other updates too...Then you better improve ur timings n update sooner coz I know this has got nothing to do with ur delays 😆
I'll come online later coz right now pest control is going on...I am sitting on my comp with a scraf teid tight around my nose n my head is aching with the smell...I was sitting online only for the update 😆

Love you Fari!!! 🤗
Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yippie! Fari, you finally updated!🤗 Can't tell you how I was waiting for this!
Oh, and I've got a place right below your update and Ashum😆 This calls for double celebrations!🥳
Ok, now coming to the SS, I loved it! Well, I love all your updates, so me loving it should not come as a surprise😆
Ashar feeling insecure about attention being divided and his zest of jealousy is so cute! And his reactions are too sweet! The best one wanting to punch the doctors who deflated his mom's stomach🤣 You had me ROFLing at that one! And loved the reference to the mosquito repellent! Oh Arnav feeling emotional😳 Akaash and his 'Bhai' connection is too funny🤣
Now, I am really curious to know how the siblings will interact! Can't wait!😳
Edited by tash10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


You did it Ashum!! I'm sooo proud of you 🤣 and You were probably expecting the siblings to interact in this update, I was too but when I start typing I just write what comes in my mind and then unfortunately my cell's word limit ran out 😆
Edited by SmileyStar - 13 years ago
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OMG!! We developed the telepathic connection pretty quickly didn't we?? 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was really a cute update..
siblings interacting would be fun...

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