FF: ASR Junior's SECRET DIARY! Part 18, Page 130 UPDATED! - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank you for updating dear😊 nice to see jealous Ashar šŸ‘šŸ¼ waiting to see how will they interact and how ashar will treat his little sis and brošŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: phillips_2909

HEY fantastic dear... Its really beautiful.. How a littel one really thinks its fantastic... Update soon nd pm me plz
im missing the update plz pm me
i hope u will pm me
thanku
im waiting for the sibling conversation... Make it fast



Awww Glad to know you liked it 😳 I've sent you a buddy request, accept that and you'll get PMs šŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Grace-

damnnn! i wanted to be on page 56



Hehehe! Its alright 😳 Next time Insha'Allah šŸ˜›
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: srain10

thank you for updating dear😊 nice to see jealous Ashar šŸ‘šŸ¼waiting to see how will they interact and how ashar will treat his little sis and brošŸ˜‰



I'm excited for the next updated too šŸ˜† Hehehe! Actually I think on spot so don't know what I'm gonna end up writing! Hope its something worth reading šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it!! Jealous Ashar is so cute, just like his dad! Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Everyone crowded around my dad and then took turns holding her like she was a Cricket World Cup while dad fretted about, squeaking, "Careful! Be careful!" And I felt like screaming, 'Stop freaking out Dad! She's only a Baby, not your precious Laptop!' 🤣She is more precious than an Oscar for ur familyšŸ˜†

The sight of Dad holding someone other than me, made me want to cry. I hadn't thought of him capable of such treachery. He is capable of many more treacheries...Ahem Controlling my tears, I quietly made my way to my mum and was relieved to find that atleast she remembered her son as she showered kisses all over my face and for the first time in my life that didn't annoy me. 🤣Arre! Even she didnt get to hold her 2nd born..so she was reliving the moments spent with you

As I cuddled into my mum, I was shocked to find her stomach deflated. The hospital people had succeeded in doing what I couldn't. And that was puncturing her stomach! With those large needles called Injections I guess. They punctured her stomach very well...C section or normal? Ohoho! U dont know right? Am so sorry!!!!! well these are two types of puncturing someone's stomach...only mothers...they can never puncture your dad's stomach with these techniques...well he will never have a bloated stomach as it...he excersises n runs to your mum everyday šŸ˜†as I felt my temper rise. Who are they to touch my mum? If only I could see the doctor who had done this, I'd give him a piece of my mind. Well, I'd scream 'What The' at him, I'm sure he'd understand.
Awww! That would be such a cute What the...u r going to be ur mum's raja beta...I guarantee...want proof? Humph! Business man's son...fine go read my OSšŸ˜†

Hello? He's Payal Mausi's son! Crying buckets of tears is in his genes!🤣Buahahahaha but he is a guy yaar! U've got to train him...he cant cry buckets infront of his elder bro n his sisteršŸ˜†

Finally she managed between sobs, "Akash Ji, Ab hum kia karain ge? Humara Munna ro raha hai Akash Ji" before succumbing to tears again. What the...n I thought mums understood what their children want right from the time they are born...*sigh* ask ur parents to publish a tutorial for them...Or wait a min...check your Akash chacho's shirt...is it wet?šŸ˜†

A low 'Bhai' escaped Chacho's mouth as he started towards my dad holding his screaming baby but seeing him already holding Asmara he stopped short, running his hand through his hair in helplessness as he just stood looking here and there before Manorma Daadi stepped in for the rescue, loudly exclaiming "Why fear when Manorma is there?" and finally everyone heaved a sigh of relief. Haila! Still 'bhai bhai' ka raag? N what will Manorama daadi do he-err? [read like she would say] Hello hi bye bye?šŸ˜†

Dad, on the other hand was completely oblivious to his surroundings as he just stared at Asmara mutely as if she had a laptop screen fitted on her neck instead of a face. His lack of speech or to be more precise, his lack of 'What The' made me wonder if he had slept with the mosquito repellent again and hence lost his voice. Hahahhahahha no he's just down with shock...n check ur sister's face...does she resemble ur mum? If yes, then thats why ur dad's continously staring at heršŸ˜†

And thinking of allergies, It clicked me then that I had finally found what I was allergic to! These two new babies! Nayi tarah ki allergy hai ye to...Kabhi nahi suni...Well Raizadas are one of a kindšŸ˜†

I can't very well cry in front of my baby sister, can I? Aww no you cant...you can actually...after she's grown up...keep your face on her lap n cry...that would be such a touching moment!!!!





Ashum!! Awww You sat on your computer during pest control so that you could read and review my update?? I love you hun! I really do ā¤ļø

Hahaha! What in the world are you doing girl?! Teaching a baby about puncturing pregnant mums? 🤣 Now, he'll keep bugging his parents to tell him what a C section is! 🤣

Hahaha! Oscar se yaad aya! My younger 2 brothers just got a golden labrador puppy and named him Oscar! I found it adorable šŸ˜†

Hehehe! You're right! I doubt if Arnav let Khushi hold his daughter. And i'm thinking on writing an actual OS on Arnav after Asmara's birth when I have time... That would be cute right? 😳

And yes, Anser will probably end up like Akash and will follow Ashar everywhere calling 'Bhai bhai' šŸ˜† I'll see what I can do to make him cry less! Tough job I tell you! 🤣

I loved reading your Amazingly Awesome Possum comment šŸ˜† It always cracks me up more than my update, I swear!! Love reading it and Love you for always taking out your time to write such fantastic comments! It makes my day! It really does 😳 Thanksss šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago
My favourite part has to be the staring match comparison... HILARIOUS!! And oh yes of course, the laptop comment was too good!

And awww... poor Asher! So much like his daddy... can't even cry in front of his family. So sweet!!

I'm sure he'll start loving his sister too! Although I LOVED the jealous side of him! Great update once again!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tash10

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<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Yippie! Fari, you finally updated!šŸ¤— Can't tell you how I was waiting for this!</font>

<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Oh, and I've got a place right below your update and AshumšŸ˜†This calls for double celebrations!🄳</font>


<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Ok, now coming to the SS, I loved it! Well, I love all your updates, so me loving it should not come as a surprisešŸ˜†</font>


<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Ashar feeling insecure about attention being divided and his zest of jealousy is so cute! And his reactions are too sweet! The best one wanting to punch the doctors who deflated his mom's stomach🤣You had me ROFLing at that one! And loved the reference to the mosquito repellent! Oh Arnav feeling emotional😳Akaash and his 'Bhai' connection is too funny🤣</font>


<font color="#660033" size="2" face="Comic Sans MS">Now, I am really curious to know how the siblings will interact! Can't wait!😳</font>



Heyyy Tashu šŸ¤—

Yeah! I was so happy and surprised to see your reserved post too! I mean I had sent Ashum a scrap but you found this on your own! I'm so proud of you šŸ˜‰

Awww Glad to know you liked this one too sweetie 😳 And yep, I can't wait for the siblings to interact either! Hehehe! You must think I'm crazy! šŸ˜†

Actually I write as ideas come to my head so haven't really thought what I'll actually end up writing but just hope it would be worth reading šŸ˜†

Thank youuu for such a sweet and long comment! Brought a smile to my face šŸ¤—
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Grace-

damnnn! i wanted to be on page 56

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EEEKKKS!!! FINALLLYYY SOMEONE UPDATED *ahem ahem*

LOVED IT! TO THE CORE as usualšŸ‘
like there werent enough staring sessions already? LMAOO and the whole part where Akash was rushing to Arnav with the baby LOOL i could feel the desperation HAHAHAH

And HAWW Ashar is so jealous of Asmara LMAOOO

and the allergies!! LOL you should get an Oscar for writing this piece
for a stupid reason i ve been depressed for a while and this is just a life saver!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†

Thank you soo much<3



Hehehe! I've really been late at updating haven't I? Sub taunts mar rahay hain 🤣

Hehehe! I know Akash's part was really exaggerated but It was just sooo much fun to write šŸ˜†

Yes, Ashar is jealous of all the attention Asmara's receiving from Arnav 😳 And glad to know you liked the allergies part too! I was a lil random šŸ˜†

Awww Glad to know this lifted your mood hun 😳 Keep Smiling!! 😃 And Thank Youuu!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: asrksr

Loved it!! Jealous Ashar is so cute, just like his dad! Continue soon.



Glad to know you liked it and will continue soon 😳 I mean whenever I can šŸ˜†

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