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Posted: 13 years ago


Chapter 5

Geet

"beta wont u meet Dev?"

Wait.. Wht did I just hear dad say?

Wasn't I hugging my DD? Hw is tht possible? N den it dawned on me..

Oh no.. I just.. I just hugged maan!!

I was so embarrassed.. I wanted 2 just disappear fm der!! Hw cud my heart b deceived to dis extent? N wht did I just feel? Wid maan? I felt disgusted wid myself.. n wondered wht he'd think of me, wht evrybdy wud think of me.. n hw hurt n disappointed dd wud b wid me?

Bt surprisingly no one seemed to notice my turmoil!!Only meers cud guess, n she herself looked confused n shocked!!

I moved out of his comfort.. n I cud still feel my heart beats as if annoyed I was moving away fm him.. wht was happening to me? Probably I shud really cut down on d movies!!

As dad introduced me 2 dev..


I was totally lost!! Wel he was gorgeous.. too!!.. infact wen he gave me a hug, it felt warm n comfy bt der wer no sparks like I felt.. wid maan? I really needed sm fresh air!!..

I was feeling terrible!! this wasn't hw I'd picturised meeting him!!

We bth sat at d bk seat while maan n meera took d front ones.. wasn't I supposed 2 feel smthng special meeting him.. bt nothing of tht sort happened!! An awkward silence engulfed us.. I felt tongue tied not knowing wht 2 say.. I had never imagined it wud b so difficult 2 talk 2 my frnd!! My best buddy for crying out loud!!

Dev was looking at me wid a gaze tht d definitely melt a lot of hearts.. bt it made me feel awkward!! The more I thought, more uncomfortable I felt.. meer spoke of thngs, n slowly a convo started building up!! Dev had a grt sense of humor.. n slowly all of us wer laughing.. ie except maan!! I felt his gaze on me n remembered d hug!! He must b feeling weird too..

We reached home.. though I hadn't spoken much 2 dev bt I felt less apprehensive now.. as he was his charming self n thus made me feel comfortable!! 'twas just a case of mistake.. n I shudnt think much of it..! Daadi greeted us at d Khurana Mansion.. she hugged me warmly!! Maan n dad left to attend sm work..While we all sat chatting.. it was grt fun.. listening to maa n daadi recalling our childhood events.. n hw me n dev were such grt buddies!!

Dev n me too got along well.. I realized probably I was just nervous abt d whole thng!! This was dev, my childhood buddy, my closest pal..!! once d initial awkwardness was gone.. we hit it off like at house on fire!! We were sitting alone in d hall, as odrs dispersed 2 freshen up b4 dinner..

"hey.. I must confess I dint recognize u!! I'm sorry!!"

"geet.. y r u apologizing.. we r meeting after god know hw many yr.."

"15 yrs 2 months n 5days.." I spoke out b4 I cud stop myself!!"

He took my hand in his.. "u remember.."

He tried making an emotional face bt I dint miss d tease in his voice n eyes!! I hit his arm..

"ouch geet.. u actually expected me 2 remember tht??!!!"

I lukd at him confused.. obviously I wud.. n he knew it!!

I looked into his eyes.. his eyes held a warmth bt smhw.. I dint even know wht I was looking for.. der was so much I wanted 2 say.. bt dint know wht to.. he knew me so well already!! I wondered why der was dis lil hesitancy in me.. I wanted 2 get rid of it asap!! bt b4 I cud utter a word..

I heard sm1 clear their throat.. we bth looked away, embarrassed n den noticed meer n maan standing der..

Meer wid a teasing smile n maan wid an unfathomable expression!!

Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Natasha 🤗...thank u for the awesome updates...so glad u gave me the link to this FF...loved the concept...loved the way u used the songs to narrate Geet's POV...never thought u would make DD into Darling Dev 😲...how dare u 😡 😆...DD can only be our Dhak Dhak/Dhust Danav...our one and only MSK 😍...i think it was Maan who was in contact with Geet all these years...he is the DD she hugged for sure...who else has those M shaped lips 😳...plz continue...TC 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
Natasha 🤗...thank u for updating part 5 ...poor Geet ...what an awkward situation...so much confusion...she is not understanding what is happening...wondering when Maan will tell her the truth...or will she finally figure it out...this is so interesting...plz continue...TC 😊


Edited by --Ratna-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update a lot...
So my guess was rt..
Seems like dev has forgotten her...

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Posted: 13 years ago
too gud dear luvd d part 5 wow geet felt some change in her body and mind when she hugged maan but when she hugged dev then she didn't feel anything of that sort...luv ya for giving such a gud update...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊
Edited by nats0101 - 13 years ago
Shruthe thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
She hugged the real guy... but i guess she is just too confused...

Nice update... am just waiting for the next... continue soon... i would want to know what happens next
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice ff
lekin kabhi socha nahi tha DD will be darling dev
jaldi se original DD ko wapas lao
the dusht danav

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Posted: 13 years ago
is maan silently in love wid geet ?
oww i feel bad for him if yes.
i hope the truth is revealed sooner to geet , dt he was the correct DD for her & has always been ! loved the part !
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
Loved it...
I dunno wt to say...i juz loved it...
Pls cont soon

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